I Created the Supernatural Age

I just read chapter 27 and I couldn't help but wonder what the protagonist was thinking, with his constant sighing and pity. Doesn't he understand the importance of respecting others' fate? Being extraordinary is like having a nuclear bomb among ordinary people; he should only keep it for himself and his closest relatives. Why would he give someone he knows a nuclear bomb to control? If he's so keen on teaching others, why doesn't he just hand it over to the state?

That idiot keeps trying to teach the Awakening Method to others. If he can control it, that's fine, but if he can't, then he's truly (wise) foolish.

It starts by emphasizing its own unique approach, then sows the seeds of extraordinary revival, and plays with awkward ambiguity before going on sale to filter its target audience.

The author's assumption shows they've never been to a construction site. In reality, construction sites don't need many people carrying bricks. Professional bricklayers can carry 30-50 bricks at a time, padded with a sack, in one go. How could you possibly carry that many? In reality, most people are doing odd jobs, what we commonly call laborers.

Author, did you even check your outline? Your cultivation system is flawed! It's life-threatening from the start, and each breakthrough is more dangerous than the last, yet hardly anyone dies—is that reasonable? And later, it's supposed to compete with a Western fantasy cultivation system from outside the universe? Honestly, if I were an ordinary person in a novel, I'd switch systems immediately.

Such strong abilities won't make money. Going to several upscale restaurants and ending up broke and having to borrow money to pay the bill—don't be too abstract.

Starting from chapter 56, the mention of the universe feels a bit off. You could just create your own cultivation technique, why bring up all this cosmic stuff and other random nonsense?

Source Points can enhance the physical body, spirit, and source energy. The physical and spiritual enhancements are permanent, while source energy is energy-consuming and can be used for supernatural abilities and controlling natural powers. One is permanent, the other is consumable—is the author confused about the hierarchy?

The beginning was alright, but it was heartbreaking to read after I cultivated the source energy. On one hand, they say they won't test skills to show off, but will properly allocate skill points. On the other hand, they feel bad about wasting energy.

I have to get this off my chest. Where can you find so many fish to catch every day? Dozens of pounds of big fish every day? Are you stealing fish from someone's farm? There aren't this many fish in small, wild bodies of water. In large bodies of water, there are fishermen who use nets to catch them, and there are definitely closed seasons. It's not like it's by the sea.