Escape from the Warhammer Universe

My evaluation, the author Wen Qing is suffering from a disease

How to say it? For this kind of war hammer of the Ten Thousand Realms style, I prefer multiple indigenous characters to be transformed into Astartes, rather than one Astartes leading a group of ghosts, ghosts and snake gods to fight against the heretics and aliens. This way of writing does not see the highlights at all.

This author probably used AI to fool Quanqin. The two books are full of large paragraphs of descriptions with unclear meanings. The first book can be read at least in the early stages. In the middle and later stages of this book and the previous book, if 2,000 words out of 10,000 words are devoted to the plot, it is considered good. It is recommended to run quickly.

The first thing I wrote was pretty good, but the second part started to fall into the same old routine. It was overly preachy, so I replaced the traditional routine with the main character of the Word Bearers. And I don't quite understand. The enchanted warrior doesn't look like a normal thing at first glance. Even if you write a joke, you won't be brainwashed by people who show up in your room at night

Wenqing's illness is too serious, and there are all kinds of confusing descriptions with unclear meanings, and all kinds of transitions from east to west. However, this kind of chaos is very hammer-like.

Warhammer and Ghoul have different painting styles. If they are forcibly put together, I feel that it will neither please the Warhammer audience nor the Ghoul audience.

For now, it seems like it's cool to avoid most Space Marine crossings.

The previous section of Warhammer plot suddenly switched to "Tokyo Ghoul". I didn't react and thought it was a ghoul from DND. Is it too much of a test for the audience?

The author has read both books. What do you think of this one? First of all, the Space Marines are not as strong as everyone thinks (just like chess pieces on the table). Most of the supermodels are required by the plot or to represent the popular faces of the characters. Secondly, not all Space Marines can empathize with mortals, especially after 30k. Except for a few founding groups, they all regard themselves as human beings. Furthermore, the thinking of Space Marines is different from that of mortals. They instinctively hate non-human beings. Especially the protagonist is a Word Bearer and Possessed Warrior who fought in the Great Crusade. Also, ghouls are nothing to do in Warhammer. As long as they are loyal enough, they are high-level cannon fodder and eat people. It is nothing to do with the empire on the back of corpses.

The protagonist is the Blessed Son, a first-generation enchanted warrior who can freely switch between demon and human forms, and the demons in his body are also relatively mild.