Immortal!

The result is completely different... Many of the protagonist's actions are taken for granted, and the slap in the face is very stiff... Very old As everyone said, the protagonist is very angry... Generally speaking, the author will have emotional projections for the protagonist. If he is dissatisfied with life and has grievances, he should not vent them on the readers...

In the age of the end of the Dharma, there are still people who can take away the luck of the leader. I hope you are the second Wen Chao Gong and stop being a eunuch.

The writing is a bit stiff and a lot of things could use some explanation. For example, the general situation of the protagonist, the overall context of the past life, the classification of luck levels, etc. The protagonist has the ability to act, but it seems a bit unclear to only write about the actions but not why. The Qing Di, Yi Ding, and Wen Chao Gong's books are all very good luck flow, you can refer to them.

The time traveler becomes cannon fodder and starts over again. This is the classic way of writing...

Classic family waste. Brothers and sisters in a classic family are all selfish and short-sighted people. I think this was the way it was written 20 years ago.

Your writing is good, but it's fair to get poor grades. Not to mention the updated ones, there are also some that are still watery. The process of forming an elixir alone lasts for 15 chapters. If you include the preparations for forming an elixir, you will have to go through 60 or 70 chapters. The male protagonist has five perfect virtues, three top-level medicines, and top-level magic arts. He almost got an eighth-grade golden elixir. A small supporting role in the early stage was just a seventh-grade golden elixir. Not to mention, he suppressed the male protagonist and suffered for 15 chapters, which was more than a week. Readers' appetites have been whetted, right?

The protagonist has not yet completed his Qi refining, so he rushes to participate in Yuan Ying level fighting, and even cuts off the ground flower of one of Yuan Xing Zhenren's three flowers. What level can be promoted to which level? The genius praises some small level battles. The protagonist has already surpassed many levels. There must be limits to relying on external forces. Setting the realm level in this way is the logical reasoning of the specification book itself. If you mess with it, the later writing will collapse and the book will be ruined.

One chapter shows self-deprecation and helplessness. Such a waste way of thinking. After seeing it, I had no choice but to return it.

This book is too hateful and full of resentment, just like the Qingdi Book of the leader. In fact, the otherworldly world. Everyone has matured with age, especially those heroes who basically live long lives. How could they be such a big family with no brains? . Think about it. Assume Cao Cao and Liu Bei. Guan Yu, right? Those trendsetters in history all live forever. Damn it, so the main author's writing skills cannot be written well, so he can only lower the average IQ.

In what era are we still playing this kind of rebirth? Isn't this a story about losers who keep coming back? As long as you are a waste, even if you are reborn 100 times, you will still be a waste

Introduction: The villain is imbecile and the protagonist is pretending to be a slap in the face.

The beginning is too poisonous. Can you change it? The family members are too brainless 😐. It's rare to see such poisonous descriptions. It would be better to delete a few comments from the clan members.

After reading a few chapters, the book has a rather religious feel, but it is too violent and the villain is quite stupid. The protagonist seems to have a sarcastic face, which easily attracts the hostility and attacks of the villain. It is really poisonous.

You have been pressing too hard up front, forcing you through lack of supplies, and having a large group of people mocking you. You can make some changes, and it will not be so abrupt to get involved with the family later.

I watched the beginning and it was so uncomfortable 😥

I have currently written 13 chapters of a pill formation, which is also amazing.

Do you know why you don't follow the update? That's it. I don't know when the eunuch will be. It's a vicious cycle. The author wants us to catch up on updates, but we are afraid that the author won't write, updates are few, and we have to update frequently. Who will catch up on updates 🙂

The start was a bit strong, but he was a great player from the beginning. I don't know if I can hold on in the later stages.

It has a flavor of ancient Chinese literature, packed with rhetoric, and I wish I could throw in all kinds of words, for fear that everyone would not know that this is a fairy tale novel.

There has to be an explanation. Eun Sang needs to double the power consumption in advance, otherwise he will be regarded as a fool and taken advantage of. Moreover, rewards and punishments are clearly the basis for a good and sustainable power. You cannot do something that many people think of now just because you know the subsequent development of the situation. If you want to make an abnormal claim, give a proper reason and state at the same time that you have given it to Eun Sang in advance and will repay the favor later. The protagonist will not suffer any loss but will gain something. Why not have his subordinates double up and make up for the merit? The subordinates will only be more grateful. This is reasonable and the rule of the ruler has been stabilized in advance.

I wrote a lot in my previous life, but I just didn't explain it. . . Accepted

The writing of the villain Xu Jia is really boring. I have seen too many similar plots.

This grandson is finally a eunuch. . .

It's time to take advantage of the rebirth and recruit some talents from underprivileged backgrounds who will rise in the future to enrich the team.

Come on, there are rewards for monthly tickets and recommendation tickets.

Luck Opportunity You have a little bit of Jing Keshou's literary luck, right?

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

There are too few people watching, and luck flow is relatively niche to begin with.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Chi (chi) Immortal, Chi Lege's Chi! Immortal, what does this title mean?