A Journey Beginning in Elden Ring

What's going on with the protagonist? This name seems to be a time traveler, but the protagonist in Chapter 5 doesn't even know this knowledge. What's going on? If they are indigenous, why do they have to choose a Chinese name? Isn't it better to choose one that suits their background? What if the time traveler doesn't even know this?

The story line collapses ridiculously. Meng should still be carrying torture instruments in the sewers. As a result, he can go all the way to Mengwen to build the royal city. It's hard to comment. And then Malika aggressively pursued the blame? And sent Godwin? Are you afraid that others won't know that Meng was born to Malika? If he is so arrogant, when the evil omen monster turns the tide, won't others know that he is Monguet at a glance? Why don't you bring a cloak? Then there is the Full Moon Queen Lenara. The Golden Dynasty made it clear that because of the two Lienia Wars, it was completely impossible to win, or it would have to pay a huge price to win, so it chose to seduce, marry, and become allies. How come it became a subordinate unit when it came to you? He was obedient, offered up his spells and let the protagonist get scolded. No, can the peace achieved be maintained by making concessions? Is it possible that Queen Full Moon, who conquered Rhea Lucalia and defeated the Golden Dynasty, doesn't even understand this? Besides, Monger has fallen into the arms of the Mother of Truth, embraced the evil god, plus he is the son of evil omen, and attempted to kill or kidnap Lani. There is also Lani, the heir of Kaliya and the god-man appointed by two fingers. In the case of near-kidnapping and murder, shouldn't it be Kalia's responsibility to hold him accountable? Does the victim still want to apologize? There is also a timeline. Godfrey first went to Stonewell to fight the Storm King and then went to Snow Mountain to fight the giants? If you didn't defeat the giants, you wouldn't even have created a golden dynasty, okay? What the hell? First run to Nimgolf, then to the Giant's Peak, then descend to Morn, and finally be exiled in Galid? You think they are not tired enough and are exhausted from running around. There's something completely wrong with the timeline.

How many words do you plan to cut this time?

Isn't this Monger right? Does this make him a bank president? Didn't you just leave the sewers during the Broken War?

Good guy, it turns out it's you, an old guy😡I'm afraid it won't happen if the Shadow of the Golden Tree comes out😡😡😡

Dear author, is your Chapolili too manic? People he likes will not "open up" like this, but will persuade them.

Is this still a theory of supreme will colonization?

Lily and American Manga all have good writing taste, but every eunuch book

Is there a group? If I want to see people live long and prosperous in the heavens 😭 I will do anything