I'm Really Not a Bad Guy

I almost got deceived by the trolls in the comment section. This is a bastard. The author still needs to take good care of the comment section. Such misleading comments will be deleted directly. Let me tell you, this book has a supporting character named Duan Ping, who is written in the style of traditional martial arts Wei Xiaobao. He is a complete buffoon, disgusting but quite interesting.

After reading the first six chapters, I have three major highlights of this book. The person captured by the original owner was fucked first by the boy next to him and became the boy's beautiful master. The female supporting character tried to kill the protagonist but was spared by the protagonist. Duan Ping is the real protagonist. Don't change it.

I can see the main line a little bit clearly. Now I am afraid that I will not return to the background of the story of Dark Souls. Uncle Ge, the witch, and the dead man overturned the ancient dragon and created the age of gods. In the end, success is also an abyss, and failure is also an abyss. Waiting for an abyss energy to go wild.

This is the most speechless book I have read this year, and that Duan Ping is as disgusting as maggots. . .

The core of Black Soul is combined with the earthy flavor of domestic online articles And the author's own concepts are mixed in to get this book My evaluation is What are the advantages? The author tells you what the salary king is, the one who inherits the flame, the one who brings the light Each volume completely explains a story to you At least I didn't read it in vain What are the shortcomings As mentioned elsewhere in the comment area, the author seems to have directly thrown out the outline But it is exactly like this, the author can tell you a story clearly and thoroughly But it is also too dry, resulting in imitation It's like reading Yilin. It lacks some storytelling for the sake of plot and plot development But the shortcomings are not concealed. In terms of telling a story completely, the author is already better than most people The next step is just to polish it a little and increase the plot of the article The author can expect platinum gold It can be expected But I still don't understand what the main line of this book is The ashes have been passing through, and then what? What is the purpose of his time travel? What is he looking for?

1. Women have emotional tribulations, and their skills can be greatly increased only after surviving the tribulations. He met the male protagonist with Duan Ping, but was kidnapped by the former male protagonist. He was also amused by the flirtatious Duan Ping, thinking that Qing Jie was Duan Ping. In order to make up for the ending of the love break in the future, he taught him martial arts. 2. Duan Ping's character is similar to the male protagonists of some novels. He is of low status, a philistine, has no bottom line, is lustful and selfish. After being rescued by the male protagonist, he still used the excuse that the male protagonist was a devil to persuade women not to be deceived by the male protagonist. He also stole the male protagonist's money and said that he was doing chivalry. The woman was dissatisfied, saw his true nature clearly, and refused Duan Ping to call her master again. Duan Ping followed him with a stern look on his face. 3. The male protagonist's goal is to reach the peak of martial arts. He has no interest in women and is not affected by the previous protagonist. There aren't many shortcomings, just a bit silly... I owed money for a meal, so I could be flexible, but I insisted on not borrowing the money, and was deceived by the unscrupulous shopkeeper into giving me two thousand kilograms of firewood to chop. —— After seeing this, I still have a good impression of the male protagonist's personality. Kind-hearted, clear goals, bottom line and principles. Just in contrast to Duan Ping who was saved by him. The female character is like a tool. She was fooled by the scumbag in the early stage and taught him a few tricks. Later, she discovered that the male protagonist is the real treasure. She provided some help from time to time along the way, and then praised the male protagonist's behavior as an observer. Completely in line with Toolman's settings. —— Well, yes, this fable tells us that boys should look within (no)

I am afraid that some people in the book club were not paid to hack this book. If I hadn't been curious and came in to read it, I might have been misled by them. I didn't read much of the book and just said it without thinking, right?

Everyone who thought they were coming to see Lord Ashes abandoned their books! This is not a Dark Souls fanfic!

I saw the sixth chapter. The beauty master started to lick the protagonist, which was super mentally retarded, and then I was poisoned. I came out to read the book review and said that the beauty master was in love, but I no longer wanted to read it. I don't know what the author thought, but I thought it would be best to reveal it a few chapters in advance. It's not appropriate in the article. It's okay to say it directly in this chapter.

Don't look, don't look, that Shi Yihan was so disgusting by the author. I was so disgusted. This author can't write female characters.