
Planetary Warden
行星典狱官
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 121k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
58Chapters
0Votes
91Recs
2Fans
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Reader comments 5
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I suggest that you add more science fiction equipment and don't make science fiction too magical. The professional chip should not be the only combat or power system. If it is just one of them, it will be more grand. They have already stepped out of their own universe. Then don't limit it to the physical body, mechas, exoskeletons, some strengthening medicines, science and technology. No matter how much technology degrades, it is impossible for the whole world to degrade. Ambitious people will always be unwilling to be mediocre and will risk everything. They will not care whether the black boxes will be damaged or not. If they fail, the worst is to look for them again. As an author, you are ambitious and have to lend some money. Try to apply as few sequences as possible. It is best to propose them separately to create a world view.
Give me some advice
There is too much truth in front of me. It is impossible to write better than him on the same subject matter. I will subconsciously compare it, so it is better to change the direction. For example, instead of recruiting players, recruit NPC soldiers to write lord stories, and add some wild players to the whole continent as a source of cool points. Or you can go back to the game article and have unlimited fan stories. It's more fun to arrange more and people will read it.
It's the fourth natural disaster article, 😆
I read the first chapter and it's not my type.
Come on, the author. I can't tell much from the front. The writing style is still good. I suggest you discuss the plot outline with previous readers.