Pawn Shops in the World, Starting from Marvel

Tony Stark would actually give up science and become a martial artist. It's impossible no matter how you think about it. The pure character collapsed. If they take the technological route, they will be among the strongest in the future. It mainly depends on whether there is enough development.

What kind of pawn shop can you open if you don't lower the price?

Play script killing with people from Naruto? ? I've written 10 chapters, you're really excited.

The protagonist has no character and looks like a clown

The author is trying to commit suicide for a while, wasting a few days and most of his achievements.

Marvel's writing is okay, but Naruto's writing is okay. You can just do your business. What we are looking at is a pawn shop. You are digressing. What kind of game are you playing? What do you think?

The protagonist of Notre Dame style, that pawn shop is like a good old man

I haven't read it yet, but I read the comments first. I heard that the pawn shop doesn't lower the price, which scares me to death. It's worse than No. 8 Pawn Shop. At least people can earn at a low price and sell at a high price.

Except for the protagonist's role 😃 I feel it now. I have read several novels about opening a store, and they are often excellent in group portraits. But the quality of the plot deteriorates sharply once the protagonist is introduced. I feel that the protagonist of this kind of novel is essentially the system that can exchange things, and the "protagonist" is just the system's external communication tool. Improving strength is only to enable stronger people to trade more calmly. The protagonist himself is becoming more and more tool-like and has less and less of his own character and shaping. I often enjoy reading things written like this. Maybe that's my taste.

There is no one who doesn't write about Naruto, and it turns out to be unpopular.

I have a suggestion for the author How far back in time can you write? It's not that you can't write, but you can't always flashback And this is what we read later and we can read it in one sitting You can imagine how painful it is for readers of new books and updates You are not Jin Yong, you are not Akira Toriyama You are not even a potato, a tomato, or a red-haired monster Most people will not buy into flashbacks like this How can you continue to read like this?

The game plot is best completed in two or three chapters, so that readers can skip these few chapters.

I think the main problem is still the problem of characterization. The protagonist is flesh-and-bloodless, and all the plot characters are treated in an exploitative manner. I feel that the character is not likable. When doing business, exchanging something that is worthless in the eyes of the reader for the other party's most precious thing seems unkind, and it obviously buys out the other party's most valuable and growable traits. Readers will not have great expectations for the character's growth. Then changing the map felt too tearing, and the character in the previous world felt like an anticlimax. What the author wrote is very similar to the Infinite Swordsman written more than ten years ago, but the characters in those old books are still carefully drawn.

Don't you want to talk about turning Tony into a Saiyan? When will he transform? Moreover, Saiyans also need to practice to become more powerful.

To be honest, it's not bad. Come on, author, work hard to write well

Fortunately, I acted quickly. I read it today and joined the investment. I have some points to read the novel again. I am very happy 😏

This is the first time I have seen the upper limit of losing oneself by writing a book. This is fully reflected in Zhu Tianwen, and many people are afraid that it will start high and then go low. He also had a time where you were completely open, and then you were dripping, dripping, dripping

It seems that he is an old author. He writes well.

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

I remember that there are some interesting pawn shop videos on the Internet, such as bargaining with dragon-slaying knives.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Author, you should go back in time and travel to 2016. In 2017, when you wrote this kind of novel, people would still read it.

I didn't think much about the previous one, but I still want to mention Neji's plot. It's easy to understand why Ningji doesn't have empathy just by watching the future plot, because Neji himself is a supporting character and his portrayal is definitely not as good as Naruto and Sasuke. But I still like the grown-up Neji, so I suggest that the author get along with his original teammates when writing, or use other characters to make Neji feel relieved, and then follow the protagonist with the desire to see a wider world. Finally, this is my personal suggestion. How you write it is up to you, the author.