I Am a Guest in the World of Mortals, a Free and Easy Fairy

A word of caution, don't have anything to do with modernity. For another world, we will build another world.

Before meeting the fox demon, the writing had a touch of fairy spirit, but after meeting the fox demon, it fell into a cliché.

Well enough. It's just that the scene of rescuing people on the river and the water ghost dunking the Yin Pass is very unpleasant. In fact, abnormal deaths caused by diseases (non-terminal diseases), injuries, drownings, etc. Can still be saved without serious expenditure of manpower and material resources. It just depends on whether you think about it. Later, the author himself also wrote about the water ghost giving up the Yin Pass, which shows that the result is not irreversible and there is nothing predestined. Don't make any grandiose claims that the reason for not saving the person is because of the consequences of the past life, and the person is not dead yet, and it is not to save her to return to the world. If the person who fell into the water is the protagonist, his parents, he will save it or not. So to put it bluntly, it is because he is afraid of offending the city god. People are selfish, and most people will not benefit others at the expense of themselves. The author doesn't need to find too many reasons. It seems very hypocritical for you to write the protagonist like this. I think you can change the story a little. The water ghost has already given up before you want to save people.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, at least it's at the food level. Why don't many people read it?

The first part was okay, but after the first volume I became more and more arrogant.

The writing style is excellent, but I think it's already finished two books. Don't be like a wandering toad, it's too bad of character. This book tastes great, and a platinum author is just around the corner.

After reading Chapter 7, it was said that the earth was still on earth thousands of years ago and I didn't want to read it. It depends on the author how to round up the subsequent history. How can I live as a spectator for thousands of years?

This book is good, please give it a try, author

The writing is good, the writing style is very good, I like the early part very much But after eighty or ninety chapters, it becomes more and more dull and uncomfortable to read.

The writing is good, don't give up, think carefully, and write a different story about a person seeking immortality.

How can you make up this story that there is a powerful force in the sky in Ziyuan Palace? The plot will be that the protagonist is attracted by the big boss of Ziyuan Palace and actually enters Ziyuan Palace. This is boring. How can you play in the mortal world? It doesn't taste like that.

Write well. The most important thing about the background of monsters and ghosts is a story. Once the story is written, the grades will not be too bad. When writing a book, you might as well put aside the author's identity and the known setting and development to read the written content. This way, it will be difficult to make mistakes. Even if the writing is distorted, you can quickly detect it.

I saved a hundred chapters and read it again. I've had enough. Serial novels are really awesome.

Why is the protagonist's mount a donkey? This donkey is a demerit from what I see in so many classical cultivators.

Certified as a bookworm for many years, the writing is pretty good.

Aren't you embarrassed to read Chapter 91 by yourself?

Well, it's really good. It's a book that can be read.

The front is quite normal, but the back part of the fox demon starts to be filled with all kinds of routines. It is said to be a fairy tale, and it won't have any effect if you change the name. It also causes the immortal to not appear, and then every passerby knows that the protagonist is an immortal. What's even funnier is that the master of heaven and earth only targets the gods and immortals, and demons and monsters are not in this category. Isn't this a standard double standard? The fox's tribulation is even more simple and crude. The Yins take the soul directly. Good guy, I'm like a good guy. Others' tribulations are human tribulations and natural tribulations. There is nothing when it comes to the fox. The Yin Si does it himself. You teach others a little knowledge about cultivating immortals, and then they do evil things, and you are also unlucky. After all this, you still get married to a mortal. How strong is this?

I saw that 95 was still in Demon Cave and it finally ended after 10 chapters, and I didn't want to read it anymore.

How many heroines? You don't know how to stallion, do you?

The first chapter was fine, I ordered 20 chapters, but this small copy turned out to be too slow.

The writing is okay. Why is it ranked so low?

Is there a Shennong? How? No heroine or a heroine, or a stallion style?

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Come on😊

Just noticed that there have been no updates for a few days? Is it cut? I just saw it put on the shelf. If it doesn't get updated, I won't subscribe. If I can insist on updating, I will continue to subscribe.