
All Heavens: Daily Missions Starting from Dragon Ball
诸天:从龙珠开始的每日任务
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- Completed
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- 219k Words
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Anime Crossover
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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My own thoughts
In fact, Goku is really not suitable for Chi-Chi. As a martial arts fanatic, he still has such an out-of-the-box personality even after becoming a grandfather (this refers specifically to Goku in Dragon Ball Super), and he does not even have Vegeta's Gu family. Because of his experience from childhood to adulthood, Goku's education to Gohan is basically teaching him how to fight. Chi-Chi has always been in control of his academic education. This has also led to Gohan's indecision between becoming a savior or a scholar. If Uncle Psy had not been able to withstand the pressure of fans and resurrected Goku, it is estimated that Gohan would have followed Goku's old path and become the savior of the earth. However, Goku's return freed him of his heavy burden, and he embarked on the path of a scholar wholeheartedly, becoming the Nobi fan we call him. In fact, the most suitable partner for Goku on earth is actually Bulma, or No. 18, And for Chi Chi, the most suitable partner is actually Krillin, or Tianjin Fan. Needless to say, Bulma, the day the two met, a 16-year-old girl and a 12-year-old boy started the miraculous journey of the Dragon Ball story from a four-star Dragon Ball. These were the male and female protagonists under the childhood filter of our era. As for No. 18, It is also very simple. Her character is actually more suitable for being with Goku than Bulma. She is calm and decisive, and has a delicate mind. The important thing is that No. 18 Has a very strong ability to make money (although she is not as rich as Bulma). But with No. 18 Stabilizing the family and taking charge of the overall situation, Goku doesn't have to be too distracted by taking care of the family (in Dragon Ball Super, he was criticized by some netizens because he was too heartless and didn't know how to share the pressure of life for Qiqi). He is not the kind of person who can take time off, and being a martial artist is no joke. As for why I say that Clint and Tianjin Fan are suitable for Qiqi, it is because they have returned to normal life in the later stages of the plot. ,,,,,,,,,,,, Although Krillin and Tianjin Fan are often involved in major crises, with Dragon Ball and Goku around, they have always saved themselves from danger, and even if they die, they will be resurrected. Therefore, if Qiqi and Krillin or Tianjin Fan are together, it is still very simple to live a normal life. However, because Tianjin Fan has Lan Qi as his confidante, it is impossible for him to be with Qiqi. In the end, the only person who is most suitable for Qiqi is Klin. Of course, this is just my wishful thinking, and I have no intention of dismantling CP (because my knowledge is relatively weak, and I can't write good novels to change the Dragon Ball world). I can only write down my personal opinions here.
You'd better not be a studio novel
The shortcomings of this book are too obvious. It is that new authors often write a bunch of "settings" without the ability to make the content smooth. The vehicle you want to complete a story does not rely on the expression of plot and emotion to attract readers. Most of them are novels written based on your own settings. If you want to make improvements, you can try polishing the emotional content to attract readers instead of bombarding it with settings.
Thoughts after viewing
I suspect that the author wrote this book while he was dreaming. The plot is like a dream, fragmented and messy. It is in a superimposed state of having fun but not enjoying it, participating in it but not participating in it.
It was good at the beginning, but I was a little speechless when it came to the Inuyasha chapter. The inexplicable sister turned out to be Kikyo, and a shabby thing like the Shikon Tama can control the world.
Luffy is just a piece of shit now, why should he become Luffy's crew member?
The writing is too messy. The self-pleasure article will actually be thrown into the street, but it is good to write it for fun.
It's so messy. What is the purpose of this? What is the ultimate goal? What is the meaning of traveling every day? Is it necessary to roll it up like this?
To be honest, it's a mess, but there's not much to see.
Let me go, you added 51 characters to the 52-chapter book.
All I can say is that there is too much nonsense! Water! The sea is full of water
The writing is too fragmented and hasty, and many places that could be written are mentioned in one sentence, which is not easy to retain readers.
The world of Naruto is a world like a mental hospital. If you go up there, you'll explode. Funny.
After reading some, I feel it's hard to describe.
It was the first time I saw a book with so many characters
It's too fragmented. Each world has just a few chapters, and they all follow the plot. It's really boring.
There are too many to wear, many of the animations are unfamiliar, and the writing is short. I habitually jump to read them. If they are short films, I guess many people will jump to read them if I subscribe to the chapters.
Akira Toriyama-sensei, can you see Akira Toriyama-sensei?
74 Chapters 73 characters. . .
What the hell is the Supreme Emperor, Immortal Emperor, God, what on earth is this tongue-twisting thing, I've never heard of it.
One thing to say, why do I feel like the author is writing a self-proclaimed post?
Come on, author
The protagonist is actually: a Stardew Valley player? !
Task Master
I didn't want to watch it at first, but I couldn't get enough of it when I looked at the character sheet. I had to take a look to learn more.
Too messy
There are several chapters in each world, and the more you read, the more confusing it becomes, and there are also world connections and timelines. Although I feel like you have your own ideas, your pitfalls are getting bigger as you write more. It made me lose the desire to read it. I was looking forward to it, but after reading dozens of pictures, I found that the writing was a bit taken for granted. From my sister turning into Platycodon, then the Four Souls Jade floating to the heavens, and then becoming worlds connected together, and then the main world changed drastically, even the characters from the later timelines were included. It made my head hurt. Each world is just a rough outline. I feel like you are writing an outline?
Introduction to Lazhongla.
A synopsis that's even more explosive than your first book. If your first book had been this synopsis, I wouldn't have clicked on it.
Does the author understand what he writes? There are also spoilers for Naruto later on, it would be outrageous not to be studied by Danzo.
Author
The update is not very stable. Have you decided to start the latest novel?
I think your resume is very strange, but I can't say what's strange about it. Anyway, I'll save it and take a look first (ノ´д`)
Speaking of which, the protagonist's equipment can be made by Bulma. After all, he is the number one black technology inventor in Dragon Ball and can make anything 😁😁😁
It's a bit confusing. Brother, are you sure you have an outline? And there are all kinds of Riddlers! What is the main plot of this novel?