People Are in Pirates, but the Card Game

I canceled the first chapter after reading the protagonist's name.

I don't know what to talk about. The structure of the article is straightforward. It doesn't matter if it is simply a cool article, but it is not smooth enough.

So far, I have read 80,000 words so far, and every chapter is interesting to read. The setting is not old-fashioned, but there are also novels that draw cards to gain abilities, like the one about Hokage at the same point. The main story so far The biggest feature of the fanfic is probably to experience some stories, details and values ​​that are not mentioned in the original One Piece. The author's main story so far may be to personally walk through the Grand Route ➕ New World and then overthrow the world's ZF. As a cool article, it is almost enough. , But if more effort is put into the plot and character portrayal to describe the character's emotions and the interaction with the protagonist more realistically, the original Robin has been wanted and hunted since he was a child. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is scheming and careful at every step, and almost does not trust his companions. Just providing a little personal opinion, it does not mean that the author's writing is not good or that I am personally barking. What the author can write is already very good. Personal opinions are for reference only.