The Martial Arts Grandmaster in Naruto

Those who wore Naruto costumes in the late Qing Dynasty were not modern people and had not watched Naruto.

I initially thought I wouldn't be able to accept the idea of ​​a time traveler not knowing the plot, but after reading on, I realized it wasn't that I couldn't accept the time traveler not knowing the plot, but rather that the time traveler copied the plot without knowing it. The story handled this well, with consistent logic and a coherent narrative, which was quite good.

Reading the latest chapter, I see the protagonist's compassionate nature when he was weak, and his indifference when he became strong. It's my fault; I shouldn't be angry at his lack of ambition. But every time I think about how so many vibrant children have entered the Root, even his childhood friend was harmed by it, how can it be described so simply as: "Observing that the Root has poor…

It's all about imparting knowledge, teaching skills, and resolving doubts; the protagonist is merely a selfish seeker of the Way and doesn't deserve the title of grandmaster.

It feels like the later parts are less about Naruto and more about cultivation. The author should really understand Naruto first before analyzing it based on the fundamental principles and spirit of cultivation. Don't just blindly copy it. Secondly, Sage Techniques appear in the forbidden scrolls of Konoha; if the author didn't even understand the original work, don't write nonsense. I'm leaving.

You have to eat one bite at a time. Is this supposed to advance the plot? Is this how you write an essay? Your protagonist's character development hasn't even reached that level yet, why are you writing so much? All this setup is just for the protagonist; your protagonist won't even get to that point, so why write so much? It ignores the plot and tries to advance it.

If you're reading this expecting original content, it's alright, but if you're looking for fanfiction, it's not so great. It follows the classic "small things can be changed, big things remain the same" trope, basically sticking to the original plot. Earlier, it was mentioned that Minato's strength was lacking, focusing on his participation without making any significant changes.

Ultimately, traditional Chinese martial arts are also about the application of the human body. They are all summaries of knowledge accumulated by our ancestors. There's no reason why someone else can't summarize what they've summarized, given the relatively similar levels of intelligence. Moreover, others possess chakra, suggesting a deeper understanding of the human body.

This isn't how you make easy money; do you think your readers are idiots?

Why does the author always seem to stray so far from the main plot? Who's going to read it if it goes too far? I've been skipping through the parts I've written lately.