The Martial Arts Grandmaster in Naruto

Those who wore Naruto in the late Qing Dynasty were not modern people and had never watched Naruto.

I thought I wouldn't be able to accept "The Time Traveler Doesn't Know the Plot," but after reading it, I realized that it's not that the time traveler doesn't know the plot, but that the time traveler doesn't know the plot but copies it. This article is well handled, and the logic is self-consistent and self-explanatory. It's pretty good, but the blessings of a group of ninjas are not blessings for you to implement your own ninja, but blessings for martial arts. It's quite embarrassing. When I saw this, it came to my mind. When I was young, there was an old Chinese saying that a wise man is a man who knows the current affairs. .

When I saw the latest chapter, the main character was pitiful when he was weak, but when he became stronger, it had nothing to do with him. It was also my fault. I shouldn't be angry with him. I just thought of so many living children entering the root, and even your childhood friends were harmed by the root. How could I describe it in a simple way: The root has a bad relationship with most departments. I am reminded of Lu Xun's words: I only find other people's joys and sorrows noisy. I also remembered why other authors don't like to write about friends and relatives. Cause and effect are difficult! The writing is very good, and the protagonist's main focus is to survive, but I didn't really like it.

It's about preaching, teaching, and solving doubts. The protagonist is just a selfish seeker and does not deserve the name of a master.

I feel that as I get to the end, I am not writing about Naruto, but about cultivating immortals. I would like the author to first understand Naruto clearly, and then analyze it based on the fundamental spirit of cultivating immortals. Don't do it mechanically. Secondly, celestial arts appear in Konoha's forbidden books. If you, the author, don't understand the original work, then don't write it blindly. Withdrawn

Eat the meal one bite at a time. Are you promoting the plot? Are you writing an essay? Your protagonist's plot development hasn't reached that level yet, so why do you write so much? You write so many settings for the protagonist. Your protagonist can't even reach that point. Why do you write so many settings? Ignore the plot and advance the role. Your plot hasn't even gotten there yet, why did you write so much? Write this thing for a while without writing it, let the protagonist practice it. It's all theory. What's more, your current plot is in the middle of a war. There is no way to practice! On the battlefield again. There is no way to practice.

If you read it as an original, this book is okay, but if it is a fan novel, it won't be so good. The classic "little things can be changed but big things remain unchanged" basically maintains the original plot. It was said earlier that the character was not strong enough, and only one participant was the main character, but nothing changed. In Night of the Nine Tails, in order to comply with the original plot, Minato was allowed to die. Looking at the subsequent plot, he gave way to the protagonist Godai. Minato Minato only knows one ghoul seal, which is awesome. Moreover, when writing about politics, one has to write well or exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses. Just as the protagonist hates stupidity, readers hate poorly written ones even more. .

In the final analysis, national martial arts is actually the use of the human body. It is summarized by the ancestors. There is no reason that you can summarize others but not others. There is not much difference in IQ, and others have chakra and may have a deeper understanding of the human body. Therefore, soft fists and strong fists are not necessarily inferior to national martial arts, such as Tsunade's violent fists. Therefore, the biggest bonus of national martial arts may also be the bonus of ideas. The skills of low-level magicians will definitely not be as good as those of high-level magicians. It should be said that the peak technology of national martial arts should not be as good as the peak technology of the chakra world. However, any skill that is outstanding and superb will trigger the attribute of enlightenment. After enlightenment, the structure can be built based on the current conditions. For the protagonist, this attribute of enlightenment is the most important. There are many people who write about the national martial arts Naruto, but it is not advisable to blindly promote the national martial arts.

It's not like you to waste money. Do you think readers are fools?

How come the author always likes to deviate from the main line? Who cares if he deviates too far? I have skipped all the recent ones.