Zhutian: Start by Conquering the Daughter of Xiongba

The protagonist is a time traveler, and he also knows the plot, but the performance is not as good as the original plot. The eyes of the protagonist are always described, and the writing is very inconsistent and sad. What is sad about sadness? Then fighting for the fire monkey is a mess. The protagonist knows that the woodcutter is a clay bodhisattva, and he can be besieged. To be honest, I don't even know what the protagonist does in Fengyun. He's just a gangster. He just blacksmiths and practices martial arts. Why does he play the erhu? Is it because he is unknown? There are many good things in Fengyun, so I learned to be an iron hand. At the beginning, it was written that the protagonist has a goal, but in the end, I didn't see the protagonist doing things for the goal, I only saw him messing around every day.

Nowadays, when writing about Fengyun, we don't even write about the standard equipment of strong men. Feng Ma, it's really boring 😜

If you don't practice the magical skills in Fengyun, just come up with some martial arts like the Iron Hand that sounds inferior to you. The magical skills of King Kong and Indestructibility have already been released. Are you a little seriously ill?

​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ Their their lives to the world Why don't you accept Gu Santong's teachings? The talent was not very good to begin with, but it was left to success. If your natural talent is not enough, why not try to let Gu San Tong teach you how to absorb energy? The indestructible King Kong won't be available for a while. In the end, Gu Santong is about to die. Before he dies, it's not impossible to tell him that Cheng Shifei is his son, right? Any concerns?

The comic version of the Three-Point Return to Origin Qi is one of the most powerful top magical skills in the world of Gaowu Fengyun. The top level of Three-Point Return to Origin Qi or the ultimate enlightenment can shatter the void, freeze time and space, and turn matter into clouds. By understanding the original Qi of the universe, you can destroy everything and return to the original Qi, or you can create everything in the world from the beginning!

Pretend to be profound, especially the number of words

I really like to read Fengyun, but the author has written two books, and his writing style has not improved at all. Why don't the author go read "Yu Yu Floating Lanterns" and "Warm Tea and Cooking Wine" and copy them in this style? ?

After reading a few chapters, for example, what the protagonist did was to get rid of Tathagata Buddha. The protagonist is a top-notch master everywhere in the world. He wants to change the top planning game. When he fails, he says that destiny is unavoidable. I want to ask the protagonist how many tons of fake wine he drank? Even crazier than Qingtianzhu and unable to recognize himself 😥. Can the protagonist find a river to take a photo of himself?

After reading so many comments, I have concluded one thing. This author does not know how to write humanities about the world. He is just copying the plot, and then adding a character to the plot. It is just a waste of money. It is very impressive that people still read it. The most amazing thing is that some people say that the writing is good? Just follow the plot! I obviously know the plot, but I won't spoil it because the author just has no money and can't write it. If I could write it myself, I would be clueless.

My body is tough enough, so I learned to use iron hands, and I looked confused.

I came to see Fengyun, and suddenly I became number one in the world.

In fact, the protagonist has no influence on the plot at all. It is equivalent to the original work being a soy sauce.

The writing is good, but a big thunder at the beginning scared away the readers. Really, in the past 20 years of development of online literature, no book in which the protagonist's ultimate goal is to return to Earth has ended well.

The choice of martial arts makes people speechless.

After reading a few chapters, the author's writing style is imitating Gu Long (should it be? Martial arts authors know Jin Yong and Gu Long, I'm wrong.) After I read Fengyun Xiong Dominates the World and read some comics, I saw a lot of descriptions of fighting when he shot an arrow, what kind of arrow it was, why he shot that arrow, who he shot the arrow at, and why he shot him. It's too cumbersome to write fan fiction like this. Isn't it good to write something original? Is Fengyun more suitable for magnetic field guy?

The plot is so rubbish, you can't even learn it by copying it from the TV series

Let's change the protagonist, Lian Chengzhi is good, my favorite villain

The protagonist has no sense of existence. . .

After seeing so many people scolding me, I no longer have the desire to watch.

I read the new chapter, Really, literary youth is a disease and needs to be cured I have read Qidian for some years, and I have never seen the protagonist in any book, caught, tortured, and transformed into a human being, Author, you have made history

Died due to poison, the protagonist of Passerby C

Really, I didn't want to write it properly, so I deleted the book 😐

OWhen should I skip this paragraph? I can't understand it. I've canceled the automatic subscription. I can't understand it.

Isn't it good to write a plot that everyone knows? If you keep writing things that you can't understand, you won't know when to jump out of this plot, go to the next plot, or return to Fengyun.

Speak so hard. If it's me, I don't even bother to ask for my name. I'll slap him to death. The book is finished

The protagonist doesn't appear much, most of them are other people's plots

Author, is this book a eunuch? When will it be updated?

It is a good thing that the author is willing to change the plot, but direct spoilers are a bit rough, and the spoiler flow is indeed a bit difficult to control. In the final analysis, the main character's goal is to improve his strength so that he can face the crisis in the storm. Forcibly not absorbing Kung Fu and learning other good martial arts is too ridiculous.