My Descendants Burned Incense and Worshiped Me as a Real Immortal.

I skipped through more than 400 chapters and felt completely unreadable. Conspiracy is not like a conspiracy. It is a bunch of messy plots and information gaps, and there is no foreshadowing. The last chapter has an advantage, and the next chapter has a hard twist of "turns out they are playing me." It's like a few children playing house, and they can't tell who the chess pieces are. The ancestor simply became a tool on the side, or even a spectator, without any sense of participation. His function was to click two golden fingers when his descendants needed it. It is said that in the real world, you can make talismans, spiritual seeds, and heavy weapons, which can help a lot. Development does not wait for the real world to reach a large scale. Instead, it continues to maintain a small workshop model. The protagonist sleeps in the real world and fast forwards one day and one year without doing anything. It is not that he has no qualifications, does not practice training, and does not play with mechanism skills. He is like a waste waiting for his descendants to develop on their own and fight their own battles to overcome difficulties. Funny is not like comedy, occasionally playing some abstract and bad jokes, and putting them in a closely switched context The problem with the family cultivating immortality in the group portrait is that it wants to describe the uniqueness of each person, but also has to make each character almost absolutely obey the arrangement of the ancestor. We have to fight against fate, but we also have to obey the fate arranged by our ancestors. Very fragmented I can't tell how to write it better, but from the reader's perspective, the current problem with this novel is that it is blunt and has no idea how to develop it. For example, the development of the world is not a continuous intertwining process, but begins to load and flow wherever the map is opened; some characters even participate rigidly just to fulfill a certain logic. Perhaps it would be a better choice to write the novel after writing the outline.

Thank you to the author for watching. This review is the reader's overall view of the advantages and disadvantages of the book. I hope it will be helpful to you The text of this book review is over 5,000 words. I can't write down the neutral and controversial parts. Please watch and extract it in the comment area I first learned about this book from sand sculpture animation and watched it on other websites. After reading the book, I went to Qidian to post a book review. I don't have too many subscriptions. I will help the author to replenish his subscriptions when I have more money. I really like this book and I really hope that the ending of the book will be seen. The disadvantage is that I doubt the plot. For the narration of opponents of viewpoints, the logic must be strict and the arguments are sufficient. The number of words seems to be large. The advantage is the consensus part with others, there is no need to elaborate too much. Therefore ❤️The fact that there are more shortcomings than advantages does not mean that the book is not good to read❤️ 🎈The problem part does not affect the reading of the whole book🎈 I feel deeply responsible for seeing some of the more obvious problems in this book, but no one can put them forward well. Therefore, I will make a more in-depth analysis of this book and point out the problems. I hope that the subsequent stories of this book will become more and more exciting and the subsequent plots will become more and more logical. Rate this book into three parts below, 1. Disadvantages 2. Advantages 3. Neutral controversy. From the content of the book, you can feel that the author is an optimistic, positive and humorous person. I will mention the shortcomings first. The author should not be too repulsive to me as a reader. Swear to God, this book reviewer firmly supports the author's outline ideas, firmly maintains strict logic and detailed analysis, firmly insists that benevolent people have different views on benevolence, and firmly insists on not insulting casually, not venting emotions with anger, and insisting on objective evaluation of books. 1. Shortcomings and problems 1. Related to important items (for example: elixir) ① The correct positioning of elixir 🌶️🌶️🌶️I am eager to write this book review, and a large part of the reason is also to clarify the positioning of elixir. Judging from the plot, the effect of the Immortal Pill is to make people feel ecstatic, as if they have become an immortal. Commentary The author tried to turn it into dp's wrong and rough behavior Characteristics comparison Elizabeth: Addictiveness💚toxicity💔Dependence on it after use💔 dp: Addictiveness💚toxicity💚Use The dependence of future generations on it 💚(Nothing is impossible) /🎈/ From this comparison, it can be seen that the elixir is more positioned as something that may delay work, such as cigarettes or games, rather than something as highly harmful as DP. Whether it is readers or authors, their positioning and rejection of Immortal Pill is unreasonable. ! ! I hope the author will clarify the characteristics of the Immortal Pill and not let the lack of attributes and inconsistent characteristics of the Immortal Pill affect the subsequent plot of Yang Fufan. ②Whether the Immortal Pill is qualified to achieve the degree of influence mentioned in the play From ① it can be clearly known that although this kind of thing is harmful, its social influence will definitely not lead to the consequences of being hunted down. I hope the author will pay attention. 2. Related to important characters 2.1 Yang Fushuo🎈 Analysis: As one of the second-generation protagonists, this character should be liked by many readers. However, the author's one-sided treatment of the character's functionality after Dragon God's Palace led to a shrinking of the character's diversity (it was originally very rich, but gradually became shriveled) The subsequent plot of the author's separation from the family lacked foreshadowing and was too abrupt, which caused controversy for the character. ①The sudden break with the family ②The lack of foreshadowing for the big change in personality and the recklessness of his actions Compare the two plots in which the character directly appeared ¹: Complain to the ancestor, turn into a calm mind, and be rewarded by the ancestor. ²: Because Immortal Pill was banned, he was irritable and arrogant, wanted to die, and did extreme things. I wonder if the author feels that the transition between these two states is too outrageous? I think the transition between these two states is too abrupt? Let's look at what the author mentioned later α: No longer provide spiritual stones to the family β: The ancestor doesn't pay much attention to his words Is this change another kind of collapse? ③The reader's simple disappointment and the author's Riddler As a second-generation descendant, this character was mentioned a lot in the early plots and has a sufficient fan base, but the author suddenly added a big change in personality. Will it hurt the readers' hearts? Is the character's path to breaking through the golden elixir too abrupt and disappointing to readers? Will the unclear subsequent plot and role of this character worry readers who have high expectations? If the author could consider readers' concerns, could he mention it a little bit in the latest plot? ④The author has been aware of the lack of care for some characters Part of the plot mentioned by the author shows that the author has been aware of some problems. For example, blindly asking for spiritual stones from Yang Fushuo, such as blindly asking for knowledge and help from Yang Qiang, etc. Since these problems have arisen, should the follow-up ancestor encouragement compensation and family resource support for these two characters be given in place? 2.2 Yang Fuqing🎈 Analysis: Although this character lacks qualifications in terms of ability positioning, the plot function may actually exceed the author's expectations. The author's final treatment of this character is not only abrupt and unexpected, but also extremely regrettable. If it is harsh to say, this kind of final treatment is stupid🤡 (Disclaimer: After all, the character is written to death. The author must not blame the reader for the harsh words, because the reader has not seen the need for the character to die for the time being) ①The unnecessary and worthless nature of death🤡 α: My Yang family can die, but not without value, not in an unclear way🤡 Readers are here The standpoint of reading this book is naturally that of the Yang family. The author cannot ignore the simple emotions of the readers because he wants to create a character who sacrifices a certain character to promote a plot. The death of a character that the reader thinks is a friend and family member is unclear and worthless (that is, Yang Fujing's death was very stupid (the author's fault), but Li Fan's death is not that difficult to let people know). Accept) β: Analyze Yang Fuqing's own functions Universal functions I: After sacrifice, it weakens the strength of the Yang family and arouses the anger of the Yang family II: At the alternation of life and death, it enhances emotional shaping and strengthens the tragic connotation Unique functions I: In the bond between the human race and the demon race The most important character II: The leader of the intelligence department of the Danai Dynasty III: Establishing deep emotional connections with many monsters IV: The achievements and inheritance of beast control V: All other characteristics of this character It is obvious that the author sacrificed this character without playing a role The unique function only achieves the most useless effect💔 From the perspective of functionality and attributes, all the female relatives in Yunyin Ling combined are not as functional as Yang Fuqing. If the crisis of the Yunyin Ling Sect family was written as Yang Feng and Yang Qiangwei went out to experience the death of the female relatives in the family, the development potential of the sacrifice would be better than that of writing Yang Fuqing to death and sacrifice. Less By sacrificing a lot of character development, it only achieves a poor plot effect and hurts the readers' feelings. It turns out to be stupid. It is not recommended to use it in a relatively fun place. The book sneaks up on readers and slashes them hard, affecting the book's reputation (for characters who must die, please specify why they must die)💔 🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺 ②The correct way to deal with taking a character offline (personal opinion) a. The author's purpose is to make the character functionally deprived and promote the subsequent behavior of other characters b. Directly writing it to death is not conducive to readers' positive perceptions. In fact, readers' requirements are not high, and readers can basically accept it if they hold their breath without dashing their hopes. c.🎈🎈🎈According to the premise of b, it can be written that the golden elixir is broken, the cultivation is lost, and the person is seriously injured and comatose. On the premise of achieving the purpose of a, it also has the function of strengthening the emotional connection (the relationship with the demon as a friend, the simple emotion of explaining the aftermath to everyone in the Yang family, and always giving readers a non-extreme view. The book foreshadowing and the non-extreme feeling of death, and the preservation of the writing path that was finally restored through the treasures of heaven and earth in the world of immortality...) The result of this writing method is not only the same as the result of writing the character to death, but also can retain all subsequent development and plot lines. To write a character to death is to cut off the retreat and cut off one's arms. To write a character to be injured can increase the number of routes and preserve the future. ❤️💔The author should always keep in mind that when it is possible to ensure that the plot needs to be met without writing the character to death, never write the character to death at will, unless you give a reason for his death. It is obvious from the current plot that this character's death has no reason to die, and it is too unexpected. It is a pity to die and it is very worthless😭. Readers have no expectation that this character will die in his later life😔. 2.3. Yang Qianjing🎈 Analysis: It is very difficult to create a character who is extremely rational and highly functional in the plot. If the author fails to carve and polish this kind of "jade", various "cracks" and "erosion" problems will occur, and various flaws, abruptness and fragmentation will appear. ① The lack of balance between the character's rationality and sensibility ② The imbalance between the character's functionality and connotation ③ The stripping of the soul of negative emotions causes sequelae that are difficult to shape feelings Overall analysis, the current role of this character is to better integrate modern technology with the world of immortality, strengthen the interests of the Yang family, and enhance the speed of technological development. For such an important role, there is a clear lack of emotion. The details of his loyalty to his family are unclear, and the details of his love and affection for his tribe are missing. This character plays a role in laying the foundation for the strength of the Yang family in the early and middle stages of the plot. The author should devote more shaping energy to this character, and not let this character become a mere plot promoter, but create a real flesh-and-blood intelligent female character. (Most ordinary people don't like overly rational characters enough, and overly rational characters are difficult to control. For example: in the discussion trend of the description of emotional drama in Wu Dong Qian Kun, Ying Huanhuan is more popular than Ling Qingzhu) ④The lack of psychological description of caring for other people in the Yang family (Although rational characters can build more logic into the development of the family, they form As a chess player, she treats all other Yang family members as chess pieces (the problem lies with the author)) As the incarnation of rationality and wisdom created by the author, she has many contradictions that the author did not balance well For example: a. In the events conceived by the author, she showed extraordinary wisdom in solving problems and extraordinary assessment of risks b. After the author conceived a plot in which the Yang family rebounded after bottoming out, the character in this position was completely unprepared for other risks, resulting in a contradictory phenomenon, and the transition between the links was seriously insufficient. (In the author's positioning, the character should have anticipated whether the Liu family knew the Divine Tree of Life, whether the relationship between the Yang family and the Liu family was close, whether the Liu family's premeditation was completely unknowable given the abundant intelligence, and whether Yang Fuqing's death should have been prepared for. It's not my opinion of this character. It's just that the author's character design for Yang Qiangli is like this. A person who is relatively intelligent and has no doubts can make small mistakes, but cannot be disadvantaged in the overall situation. Since the author intends to shape the character into a form similar to Zhuge Liang, these things must be fully considered. ) 2.? Others: Tian Zhe🤡 Analysis: This character is obviously positioned as a relative tool in most books, with middle functionality (younger brother of the protagonist), storyline and background (dog-licking in the past) There is no need to discuss too much about this character. I have collected opinions from other people and believe that there is no need to give this character too many shots, especially as the dog-licking persona is not pleasing to the eye. Moreover, in terms of setting, it is actually easier for those who have studied history and politics to understand people's hearts, and will not be so easy to become lickers, because they can more clearly sort out the relationships between people, understand the game of interests and family marriage, and understand that the needs of people are complementary. Second, advantages and uniqueness 1. Dual-line plot of two worlds ❤️ Using Yang Keun-suk and the family simulator as the dividing line, the flipping of the dual-line plot of cultivating immortality at the right time has a relatively good flavoring and dividing function of the original text, which is the characteristic of this book compared to most books. 2. Relatively strong atmosphere of cultivating immortality❤️ This book is rich in connotation in shaping the atmosphere of cultivating immortality. Compared with various current immortality cultivation books, it clearly creates a world with a grand world view and obvious characteristics of cultivating immortality. Reading this book can deeply feel the atmosphere of cultivating immortality. 3. Distinctive characteristics of some characters❤️ ①Murong Ziyan❤️ The personality and behavior of Murong Ziyan, who is cold on the outside and warm on the inside, protects the calf. As the performance characteristics of this character, I deeply like it. He is a supporting character with a soul. It is recommended to increase the number of scenes, such as more plots to protect the calf, and then under this premise and background, add some difficult dilemmas for the character, and then let the Yang family solve these dilemmas to increase the connection between the two and increase the intimacy. (It is not recommended to kill this character with a knife) ②Yang Fu❤️ The character's description of the state of mind in dealing with the crisis under the urgent tone of the plot is outstanding, which fully demonstrates the character's composure. The character's description of the character's state of mind in dealing with difficulties in a peaceful plot is outstanding, clearly showing the character's thinking path when facing difficulties, going beyond the direct writing of other books, allowing readers to clearly feel the wisdom and growth of this character. ③Others who have advantages but are not analyzed as typical ones (Yang Feng, Yang Shi, Ding Zhen, Lei Zhen, Kuntukutakatikotsuvasilason, Yang Qiang, Yang Qiangzheng, Yang Qianjing (the shortcomings in shaping cannot completely cover up the advantages)) 4. Unique means of competition❤️ Whether it is the Yunyin Ling Sect's entrance competition, the competition for opportunities in the Dragon God's Immortal Palace, or the human race trial list, these plots showing people competing for opportunities are obviously different from other mainstream books. Although it is not ruled out that there are some shadows of books, it is obvious that these are carefully created by the author, and they are durable but not boring. The Terran Trial List has a very refreshing style in terms of look and feel, and is worth savoring again and again. 5. Stable realm suppression❤️ Stable realm suppression in the world of cultivation leads to the overall balance of combat power in this book. The stable balance of combat power lays a solid foundation for the subsequent plot of this book. To sum up, this book is a unique novel about cultivating immortals. From the perspective of the harmony of the plot, it is the best among the novels about ancestors and descendants. It is a very good novel in terms of plot perception. The language of this novel is coordinated, the setting is novel, and overall it shows life in the world of immortality in a low-stress tone. However, the shortcomings of this book cannot be ignored, and I hope the author will pay more attention to them. Thank the author for watching, I hope it can help you, thank you. The production leads to the overall balance of combat power in this book, and the stable balance of combat power lays a solid foundation for the subsequent plot of this book. Three, Neutral, Controversial See the supplement under the post for details (Sorry for any typos) (Thanks to the author for reading)

Nice. The main plot is based on a real-life protagonist, but there is not much content, just to polish the story of cultivating immortality. The Yang family is the main description, with multiple protagonists iterating. Therefore, there will be no situation where the combat power collapses and cheaters gather. At present, the relationship between the protagonists of each generation is very harmonious, and the stories of each generation are very interesting. Even in the middle chapter where the author said it was about water, I didn't really notice it when reading it😂. It's not a story about exciting combat, it reads a bit like a light novel. Highly recommended

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to mention a new car again. I hope you will update a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. Thank you.

The author just released this? I told you before, don't go to Piao, don't go to vote, but you just didn't listen...

It's so outrageous. Your Yang family was wiped out by the demonic cultivator, and Yang Shi almost broke off their relationship. But in the end, you, the protagonist, started to empathize with the demonic cultivator? Even though the protagonist is playing games, he still puts in a lot of effort, so he makes a lot of money, right? Isn't it a bit crooked to empathize with an enemy who has destroyed your family?

Starting tomorrow, which day will the author stop updating and which day will I break 😡

It's pretty good to watch without thinking too much.

Hahahahaha, hahahahaha, liquefied natural gas, hahahahaha

Whose vest is the author? He's also an old palace man, right?

Learn from the Xuanjian Immortal Clan next door, you won't understand even if you copy it. One of the few good things about the clan's dregs culture is the vitality and vigor of everything during the entrepreneurial period. When the trees at the back are really big and have deep roots, the number of people explodes, the narrative is difficult, there are few exciting points, and there are many minefields. What is the moral character of a clan in reality? Since we are all Chinese, we should not pretend to be foreign guests. It would be better for you to just play a mysterious operation game and start accelerating offline and hang up for a hundred years, skip the fun part, and serve readers a big pile. On the one thing you couldn't explain for a long time, you could only talk to yourself. The narrative level and gags were all based on the witty writing style. Were you able to control the subsequent plot?

No, isn't it? Author, why do you feel like this incense is just a simple achievement task reward and a once-a-year reward? You don't have any desire for sacrifices, offerings or daily incense. It's called incense but it's actually an achievement system?

Cultivation of immortals does not require incense. What needs incense are the gods, earthly ghosts, gods and immortals (immortal family demons).

No, cultivating immortals is not as good as modern times. What do you think it is to cultivate immortals? 😥😥 Especially for hybridization, do you think a microscope is more useful than spiritual consciousness? The old ancestors' fantasy of cultivating immortality and immortality was so idiotic that they didn't know how to increase production 😰😰

I won't talk about anything else, just the chapter about the plan to hit the rankings. The two branches of the Yang family have differences for the first time. What did you set? Does the protagonist need to practice? A person who has been taking pills and medicines, you tell me that he needs to practice? The entire book revolves around the development of the Yang family, and the Yang family develops around the protagonist. Then you told me that the protagonist needs to practice and can't keep paying attention to the Yang family? In this special situation of family division, if the protagonist does not come forward to mediate, what is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? The leeches lying on Yang's body sucking blood? An ordinary person on an earth without spiritual energy has the inferior spiritual roots. How can he practice? Are you kidding me? Isn't it enough to just take medicine? So far, taking medicine has reached the stage of Qi training. What will happen if I continue to take medicine? Even if you decide to take medicine and build your foundation, you won't be able to continue practicing. Then the life span of 300 years of foundation building, during these 300 years, the protagonist cannot accelerate half of the time, and the world of immortality has been more than 40,000 years. In the past 40,000 years, even if all the Yang family became pigs, under the management of the protagonist, they would be able to produce a true immortal, right? Not to mention that there is a chance that descendants of the Yang family will appear with extremely talented people. Then you can feed the protagonist back, make up for the protagonist's shortcomings of taking too many drugs, and re-enter the path of spiritual practice. Isn't it better than your setting? As the belief of the entire Yang family and the core of the family's development, the protagonist does not formulate the development plan of the Yang family, does not mediate the internal conflicts of the Yang family, and does not use his own abilities to cultivate the Yang family under reasonable circumstances. Instead, he cultivates himself. Then what is the use of this simulator? Wouldn't it be better if you just wrote about urban immortality? If you want to imitate the Xuanjian family, just imitate it well. If you want to innovate, read more books of the same type. If that doesn't work, read the book One Hundred Years of Solitude, learn from it, and then come back and continue writing. Two million words, just a bunch of words. Are you embarrassed?

Although the foundation-building 400-meter-long sword is said to be a genius, when compared with the level of Qi training, the difference is really 100 million points. The span of the previous realm is only so large. If a Nascent Soul is promoted later, the continent will probably sink with a slap. If the scale is set too large, it will be prone to bugs, just like the battle power at the end of Dragon Ball. Logically speaking, the aftermath can destroy the earth. As a result, the earth has remained strong. 400 Meters has to be straightened to make the playground that long. It is recommended to make it smaller. If you can live in it, just pretend I didn't say it.

Come on, author! 👍 Have the qualifications to become a god! 20240424 updated version 2 Looking forward to the writing of the role of female descendants 0.0 20240607 updated version 3 20240607 updated version Version 3 patch - the shining eldest sons of the Yang family 20240816 Updated version 4 4.1 General outline of family training principles, the first generation of the family and their spouses, wives and concubines are also the names of the eldest sons. 4.2 The 2nd generation of the family and their spouses, wives, and affiliated members 4.3 The 3rd generation of the family 4.4 List of talents of the 3rd generation of the family and their affiliated members

After reading Chapter 170, I feel that this generation of the Yang family can fight for another five hundred years 😊 Why is it not offline yet? Another point is the family's cultivation of immortality. I think this family flavor is really weak. It was okay in the front, but in the back the family members were all separated and doing their own things. Where is home?

It's still a piece of shit. If you want to write a cool article, don't send it. Leave this grinding one aside. More than 600 chapters are still just a foundation. In the next life of a real immortal, right? You want to cause conflicts but you don't understand. If you keep having fun all the way, there won't be so many people scolding you.

The fan group was disbanded today, and it looks like it's going to start again

If you haven't seen it, run away. It's really a mess behind. I feel like my intelligence has been insulted.

Recommend a good book: Daoyuan Immortal Clan

This author writes about ordinary daily life very well. No matter if he is a bad writer or a eunuch, just read his previous books and you will be done.

It's okay if it sucks, but does anyone care about the author? It's like disappearing.

Never Die is well written.

The iteration is too slow, the plot advancement is too slow, and there is no passion