Bleach: the First Zanpakutō: Heart Steel

There are many restrictions, but the previous content is okay. I saw the latest plot. It turns out that the protagonist has had his memory and abilities taken away a long time ago. This plot is too ancient. . Moreover, the protagonist's ability is not strong enough. It can only be said to be a little special. Don't insist on stacking invincibility. It is said to be restricted by the author.

A Heart of Steel, with n number of restrictions, I thought it could be stacked infinitely, but the opponent's strength cannot be lower than that of the protagonist before it can be stacked, which means that the protagonist can never surpass the others. .

I am a historian, this is history

Plug-ins can be stolen, and the protagonist was beaten like a dog after pretending for so long. Stop writing a book and cut it now.

It's against the sky, not even a little bit refreshing, but a lot of poisonous. I'm going to be a divine farmer this time. Later, brother, you will understand when you see it. It's up to you to judge whether it's right or wrong. Anyway, I slipped away.

Don't even define Xu as a wild monster 😃

This book is too close to the plot, and the starting point of the protagonist is low (comparable to Ichimaru Gin's genius). The protagonist grows up with the plot. In Chapter 40, the enemy who broke Ye Yi's leg was punched by the protagonist, and the enemy who cut off the soul chain of a household was also punched. In my opinion, the hook is endless. But even if the enemy has special abilities and runs away, this chapter clearly states that the abuser poisoned him. Do you have to write pure invincible articles now and can't bear a little frustration? The main problem is that those who have positive reviews will not leave messages, and those who are dissatisfied tend to complain directly. It affects my mood very much.

What is chapter 43 about? The protagonist's golden finger is so low that he can still be snatched away. It makes me laugh so hard, I would like to call it the most incompetent Golden Finger of the Singularity 😁😁

You have touched all the poisonous points that can be touched, and it is still six times.

He danced so happily when he was so weak. Do you think Lan Da's "Flowers in the Mirror" is a joke? According to Aizen's character, the protagonist has come into his sight, and he might end up being a miserable tool at some point. Reiatsu represents everything. If the protagonist had some wisdom, he would not have entered Aizen's vision so early. Moderation is the way to go, at least before he has developed. As for the place of development, of course it is the 13th Division. Anyone who develops there will be warlike, and the officers are pretty good and can stack steel.

It's inexplicable, it's a cool story, but it's still based on a cool story, the abusive boss is weird, the growth stream is a big deal, but there are all kinds of restrictions and suppressions, and you can't pick a team that can fight, and just go to the second team to hang out. Well, that's all I saw, the overall feeling is really not cool at all, the novelty of the plot is so-so, but it makes me feel uncomfortable watching it. Maybe it's not appropriate!

Keep it up first, I can't stand it anymore when I see the protagonist's power being taken away. . . .

What is Shuangwen? What is ease? If you torture me, I won't read it. I won't write if I like. If you are willful and unwilling to write, some of it will be written by Palu. How can you still be willful and pass the readers? Goodbye

Who do you think you are, a Shinigami who can only stack the Heart Steel by defeating someone stronger than yourself, and you become a Zanpakutō? Is it okay to use the steel of an empty mind directly as steel skin or use the lost heart as an empty heart? Isn't it more creative than you?

It's such a disappointment, a waste of subject matter. I originally thought that the main character would have the ability to have a knife with heart steel, which would explain everything. Except for the first one or two chapters, I didn't write about the sword at all. Originally, the ability of the Heart Steel to punch to the flesh was not suitable for the Shinigami. Either the ability should be put into the Zanpakutō for free use. Each sea of ​​​​dead fire has its own characteristics. You have lost the characteristics of the God of Death.

Don't look at it, even gold fingers can be robbed.

I'm already cheating, so it must be fun! If there is a frame, you don't beat it. Where are you driving your mother? ? ? If you don't lock the head, wouldn't it be in vain for me to open it?

Goldfinger was robbed, and then the ink was inked here and there, and there were ten chapters of fighting. Even after the revision, I couldn't read it. You must be a genius to write a fanfic like this. The rest of the story is simply not interesting, so there is no need to watch it.

Although I feel that everything that needs to be explained is explained later in this chapter, but since some people are eager to complain without seeing the subsequent chapters, let me make a statement here in the comment area. First of all, there is the problem of suppressing combat power and expanding combat power. In fact, I have already applied several patches to Goldfinger. I will continue to provide more supplementary settings to improve the strength while ensuring smooth logic. This will be adjusted in time based on reader feedback. As for the strange comments in the comment area that obviously only read the first three chapters or the introduction of the book title, they will be deleted. I will keep the chapters and paragraphs. After all, if there are negative comments in Duan Pingzhang, I at least know that you have read this point. If you still feel that the combat power is not good at that point, then it is indeed my problem, and I will humbly make adjustments in the following articles. But it would be meaningless to make random comments before reading it. It is one thing to affect my mentality, but it is not good to affect the perception of other readers. It is better to delete it directly. Speaking of comments, I should have modified all the mistakes or imprecision that were pointed out in the comments. The author is very timid, so I will modify it if you point it out, and I will delete the controversial parts. Anyway, I won't argue with readers about this. If you haven't changed it, you probably haven't seen it. After all, too much information in the author's background may be washed away. You can remind me here again. In addition, the author only writes happy endings, so plots such as the abusive master giving away his daughter will not happen. You can say that my writing is bad, but I will not do anything that disgusts readers. You can rest assured on this. By the way, does anyone know how to run ai painting in colab now...