Film and Television Time Travel: Starting from the Deer and the Cauldron

Reasons for abandoning the book: ① The plot has no details and looks like an outline, which is unremarkable. ②The plot modification cannot be done! Shuang'er has already arrived at the protagonist's side and still doesn't accept her. No wonder someone would say to give her away. The protagonist is applying for a job as a eunuch, Wei Xiaobao is a handyman, and the harem servants cannot get in. Wei Xiaobao's practice of attracting stars was even more of a failure. Of course there are others, so I won't go into details one by one. ③ Separating from Long Er, it was a failure to leave a letter, it was a failure to find the method of Shattering the Void in the Age of Ending Law, and it was even more a failure for Long Er to achieve Shattering the Void. ④…………! ! !

Say goodbye to your daughter, or you should stop having any entanglements with her. If you have an entanglement and let her sleep with someone else, isn't it disgusting what you wrote?

Jianghu is never about fighting and killing, it is about human relationships. "Swordsman" is a metaphor for politics, and political struggle is about opposition and balance. Forget about unifying the world, this means losing balance. The imperial court will not tolerate the emergence of a unified world, and the unruly people in the world cannot tolerate having an extra grandfather on their head... In all martial arts worlds, all idiots who want to do this will die. The Kaiju beasts in Pacific Rim are just mass-produced biological weapons used by pioneers to transform the earth's environment, but it does not mean that they are the only ones. After all, an interstellar civilization that can open wormholes for interstellar colonization absolutely cannot use this method. But even if they only invest so little power, the earth is already struggling to cope. The earth has almost no information about the pioneers, but it is pure nonsense if you want to use a mecha made by a surface civilization to kill its home planet.

I have never seen someone who favors Qin Shihuang like this, and treats himself as a dog leg. He has no backbone as a time traveler. It's not like you just traveled through time and don't have the ability.

The author should go into the factory to screw in the screws!

To fight against the Qing Dynasty and restore the Ming Dynasty, I wrote an outline 😅 In fact, the idea is right, but the method is too crude 😥 That is, the protagonist, otherwise Wei Xiaobao will be surrounded and killed by the masters of the world 😅

There is a big problem with this book. It's not very enjoyable.

It doesn't matter anything else, just a chapter name, second-rate peak master, please taste it, I'm withdrawing it.

If you wear the Deer and the Cauldron, wear the Deer and the Cauldron, but don't act like a fool, okay? The movie effect is the movie effect. If you write it like this, it's very poisonous. It's extremely poisonous.

If you give "Leopard Fei Yijing Pills" to Kangxi, this will happen!

It's boring to watch this kind of time travel. The world of martial arts, the world of monsters, and the science fiction world. Wouldn't it be too confusing? It's like mixing hot and sour rice noodles with sweet cake and adding some fried bitter melon.

This book is too confusing, too rushed, too sloppy

1. A very serious point is that after reading Chapter 7, the whole novel feels like a plain. It is very gentle and has no ups and downs. It is like a running account, passing the plot for the sake of passing the plot. In terms of plot, the portrayal of contradictions should be emphasized so that the whole novel has ups and downs and climaxes. Otherwise, it will be like playing a game and completing daily tasks, without any waves. The author's plot is too simplified, especially the appearance and Chen Jinnan. It should obviously be focused on describing, but he just brushes it off. I don't understand. When the protagonist appears for the first time, you should first find a way to establish a character and make the protagonist have characteristics. Chen Jinnan can completely focus on the description, whether it is the number of words or expanding the background and telling the martial arts of The Deer and the Cauldron. Although most of you are familiar with The Deer and the Cauldron, I am just giving an example here. It means that you have to fill in the things, rather than simplifying the plot. If you simplify the plot, everyone will have nothing to watch. 2. The characterization is not obvious, especially the protagonist's image that cannot stand out and is a flat character. I was extremely impressed by the movie The Deer and the Cauldron in my mind, but the characters described in the novel did not correspond to the ones in my mind. The author should emphasize the description of the character's personality and dialogue to reflect the character's personality. Take the protagonist as an example. The protagonist's character can only be described in one word. It is empty and does not show the joy, anger, sorrow and joy at all. It is just such a character. The description of psychological activities is a method that can deepen the character's image. 3. The third-person perspective is actually better at portraying characters, especially psychology, language, action, and environment. Later, the author wants the protagonist to obtain Long Er's skills. So when they meet in the palace for the first time, maybe they can design a game situation between the two parties. At this time, Long Er guessed that the protagonist has taken the scripture, and then there can be a confrontation in words or actions. This At this time, we can describe the protagonist in a deeper level, especially the psychological activities and environment. If the protagonist loses in this confrontation, we can also use this time. Song Zhao suddenly broke out a drop of sweat on his temples. He did not expect that Long Er, who seemed to have no experience in the play, would actually have such observation skills. Anyway, this is what it means. Regarding the plot and characters, we need to control where they focus. That's all, I hope the author can keep up the good work!

It's okay•• But I'd better finish it first눈_눈

😆😆99.9% Of the people in the zombie world must be apprentices to Uncle Nine

As long as you find a book about The Deer and the Cauldron, the protagonist will definitely sleep with female characters non-stop. There is no limit to the number. This book should also be a harem novel, right?