Just After Becoming His Disciple, Patriarch Bodhi Gave Me Journey to the West

To put it bluntly, this book is a prehistoric fantasy novel disguised as a Journey to the West story. Its key features include: venerating Buddhism and belittling Taoism (the five Taoist immortals are portrayed as utterly useless, while the Buddhist Golden Immortals are depicted as flawless), prioritizing the supreme existence of the prehistoric world (and considering anything outside of it as…

When you write about internal alchemy, the highest level in Taoism is the Celestial Immortal, while the Golden Immortal is an external concept. I would accept it even if you wrote that the Golden Immortal is another name for the Celestial Immortal.

Author, why do you always praise the Primordial Era while belittling others? The Great Dao has three thousand paths that can prove the Primordial Chaos, and there's no inherent hierarchy among Daos, is there? The Trilogy of Immortal Emperors = The Other Shore of One Lifetime = The Primordial Great Luo—can't we make a fair comparison without bias?

LOL, this is a book written by an old bootlicker. A lot of people were unhappy with the protagonist's obsessive fawning over the ruthless emperor, but the author wouldn't change it, so he cancelled it. Is he going to cancel it again? 😂

It claims to be based on the Journey to the West setting, but it's half-true and half-false, mixed with its own biases. The various world systems are incomparable, making it difficult to justify and destined to end badly and be discontinued.

It praises the Primordial Era while belittling other worlds, which is very much in line with the viewing preferences of Primordial Era fans. Other fans are advised not to watch it, as it is completely written for Primordial Era fans to ride the coattails of the popularity of Cover the Sky.

At first, I understood. In the Journey to the West world, cultivating the Great Dao is related to longevity, not combat power. The other four unorthodox paths rely on world authority, while your inner alchemy seeks self-circulation unrelated to the outside world. So the question is, why are you so powerful in Battle Through the Heavens?

This book is NOT a prehistoric fantasy novel! NOT a prehistoric fantasy novel! NOT a prehistoric fantasy novel! I'm saying it three times because it's important! Journey to the West itself was greatly influenced by Taoist internal alchemy!

Author, are you writing a setting or a novel? Most of the twenty-odd pages are about internal and external alchemy techniques and other settings. You just randomly went to "Battle Through the Heavens" to show off. And then what? 🙂🙂🙂 A whole bunch of pointless setting details, things that are actually very simple. Just mention them briefly when breaking through realms.

You said you wanted to write about internal alchemy, but your results weren't good and you couldn't stand the criticism from others. Why didn't you just start by writing about what you're already familiar with? However, I still commend you for being willing to step out of your comfort zone.