
From the Beginning of the Battle to the Top
从斗破开始登临绝巅
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Can't stand it anymore
After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't stand it anymore. To be honest, the protagonist's IQ is above the line, he dares to fight and kill, and he is courageous, which is pretty good However, he is also a pure showman. The first part is not bad, at least he is restrained. The second part,,, I picked up several three-bedroom and one-living rooms. For example, when I went to the auction house to smash the place and waited for someone, I could use my fingers to "knock out strange rhythms" on the chair. Then I remember that "knocking out strange rhythms" appeared three or four times in these chapters. How could the sound made by just one finger come from the strange rhythm?,, Then the author's article The writing also has room for improvement. The most obvious thing is that the words are all "Tao". I have the impression that there are more than ten or twenty Tao in one chapter before listening to the book. It may not be obvious when reading the text, but it is especially obvious when listening to the book. The whole chapter is "Tao", which is too ridiculous. The words can also be modified with many different verbs. Ah,,,,, secondly, there are some inexplicable modifications to inexplicable places which are also very strange,,,, In short, there is no problem with character creation, but it is a bit uncomfortable to pretend to be cool, which is a common problem in online articles. There is room for improvement in writing. I hope the author can write better and better. I can't bear it and withdraw it first.
This is my belated review of this fanfic that I have followed up to this day - it is also a stage summary for me who dreamed of childhood.
If Dou Po is childhood, then this book is both a memory and a hypothesis. It seems to be the best situation that Wu Gua, a time traveler, can do under reasonable circumstances... Even if he knew that Wu Gua, a time traveler, would not be able to work as hard as Lin Yuan, he might not have the heart and calculation to achieve such a process and ending. However, someone has written it. Maybe it is unfair in some cases, and most of the time the updates are relatively watery. It may have shortcomings of one kind or another in the eyes of everyone. If you look for the bad parts, you can always find a lot of things... So, what are the advantages of this book? The Life-Devouring Pill in the opening chapter quickly advances to the main line? The unique way of dealing with the ancient jade of the Xiao family and Xiao Yan Fen Jue? Or is it a special accelerated practice method and various stages of improvement? No, in my opinion, the "biggest advantage of this book" is the "biggest advantage of the protagonist" described in the book - the way of thinking that has a God's perspective unique to time travellers. This advantage not only makes the rational framework required by this book firm, but also allows all aspects of improvement speed and explanations to have sources, thinking and development, and the response to risks in all aspects has a "different" development. (Such as the application of the Blue Snake Three Flower Pupils in the middle stage of the illusion fighting skills, the later application of the clone fighting skills combined with the aura and soul skills, improved fighting skills, alchemy skills, etc.) It also makes me look back at the figure that is getting clearer and blurrier when I look back to catch up on the road. It seems that he is no longer just the protagonist of this book - the one who has climbed to the top step by step, relying only on talents that are neither mediocre nor rare, and relying on "everyone knows the information" to reach the top with unparalleled efforts. It seems that this is the self in the dream... What a resemblance! It seems that the regrets I had in the past would not have happened if I had worked harder at that time. If I had taken every step well... Learning and practicing to improve yourself is an inescapable content and story in the book. Learning to survive and practice life to make yourself happy is also a reality that we cannot avoid. Suddenly, I seem to be relieved and let go of the time when I was still in the second grade of middle school watching Dou Po. It seems that I have convinced myself of something? One word, one galaxy, one book, one world. I have admired this world, I have met the protagonists here, I have also walked this road, seen it and fantasized about it. For this book, I just have to watch the protagonist walk the rest of the way and it is already complete. However, in the other galaxy where we are, the road is still far away, and life will continue, just like the book is actually far from over; life will also be better, just like the protagonist has been walking on the road of improvement; there will be more fun in the future, just like we have always been the protagonists on our own road, maybe we will stay or walk slowly, but it is just a stone on the road, the scenery is long!
Cyber Shennong Review
The biggest shortcoming of this book in the early stage is the knowledge reserve. Just look at the paragraph before it is put on the shelf. The pig's trotters are a bit too much knowledge reserve for rapid cultivation. I rely on my thinking for everything. I can change it. I feel that the speed is too fast. Everything is covered in one stroke. If there is any problem, just close it once.
Your title shocked me. I thought I had killed the book again. The author should adjust it. Although your Dou Po fan has some minor problems with words and sentences, it is one of the few Dou Po fan books that I have read that is logical, respects the original work, and has its own innovations. There are too many books to mention. If the author maintains this level and updates to the end, I will order them all.
Let me briefly talk about my personal views.
There are a few points that I particularly like or appreciate about the author. 1. The protagonist has his own route. It's not about turning into Xiao Yan or taking Fen Jue and speeding through the original routine. It has its own story and plans to develop some new maps. This is what fans want to see. 2. I didn't try to improve myself by belittling the characters in the original work. The character description of the characters in the original work was only half-assed and barely watchable. 3. Be able to take the initiative to fight for it. Like Zi Yan, the Little Medical Fairy can design her own to gain favor. This is good, I hate the kind of protagonist who is pushed around passively. A few shortcomings: 1. The writing and plot are not very good. The writing style seems very immature at first glance, which may hurt the author's heart a bit. You just watched the fighting once and skipped the subsequent skills. As for the plot, I like the general direction very much, but when it comes to the specific small plots, I really don't know what to say. Even if you are not as good as the original, I feel like I am praising you 🐷 (Pig's head saves life) 2. Setting issues. The Little Medical Fairy, Qinglin, Medusa, and Zi Yan are at least two left for the protagonist. Are they very powerful themselves or are they able to achieve such great achievements by following Xiao Yan? If there are a group of very powerful people in this indifferent place, then it means that Xiao Yan is indeed the son of the plane, and God's will is watching and you can't take it away. If you are powerful only by following Xiao Yan, then it should be very reasonable that you cannot reach Dou Sheng if you follow you later. If you carry the protagonist and kick the son of Xiao Yan away and sit on him as soon as you hold the protagonist, it is really the same as those who belittle the protagonist and elevate themselves. It would be better to just arrange to go out and pick up the Emperor's Pill and fight the Emperor's Pill across the world in one step. 3. The problem of protagonist setting. The lack of time seems very fake. Xiao Yan's fighting sect at least still has some bonds in his mouth. Revenge, Yao Lao has it all. I still don't understand how he managed to fight the Douzong at the age of fifteen or sixteen. This is also why I don't like watching ✍ fights. Other than being slapped away, I think it's all nonsense. (You know that the original work is broken and you still learn from him?) Suggestions: 1. The protagonist Qiang Xiaoyan has no problem with his opportunities, but you have to arrange a few better ones for him. Or Xiao Yan himself could go to other maps to get better ones. 2. The author can add more and improve some settings. Alchemists can't be the only ones who dominate, such as weapon refining, Tianding Ranking, etc. I think this is more interesting if you can use more copies to identify others. 3. Open more unlit maps mentioned in the original work, and write more original characters. Give Xiao Yan some face and opportunities as a son of the plane. Put more foreshadowing, in the snow, the sword will come, and Chixin will do well. Finally, the author talks about writing: After reading the comments, many people gave suggestions to the author, including me, so I guess the author must be a little confused. If the author is long-term or wants to write a good book in the eyes of readers, then I suggest changing it. It's not realistic to ask you to revise the first part, but you have to write an outline for the later part, and you have to read and revise each published chapter several times. This way you will make rapid progress. If the author is planning to make a living by updating every day, I will beat you up. I have told you all the nonsense. Stick to what you write, and I will support you with two recommendation votes!
One of the few brain-fighting fans with some flaws, but you can see What I don't like is the relationship with the Soul Palace. I feel that the risk is too high and it is not suitable for the protagonist. The author's setting of the head of Canaan Academy is actually quite good The bad point is that Speaking of which, the character of the protagonist is a bit too flat, and he is covered with a layer of peerless genius, but to be honest, the author's description is average, and the person who created this and that feels like he is omnipotent But when you see who is telling the truth later, it's okay. What about the artificial strange fire? It's a bit ridiculous but still It's barely fair, but actually, I don't really like it. I don't like it. It feels too simple. You can create something by adding some subfires and making fire Generally speaking, it is eye-catching among a bunch of Lese fans. Many of the ideas are okay, and some other characters are described. It's good that the ancient races are not written so brainlessly Personally, I understand that the ancient races are similar to the Xiao family. There are clan leaders, first elders, second elders, etc. It's not just a matter of words. How could someone not understand the fact that Dou Emperor himself can be cultivated to Dou Emperor without relying on Dou Emperor's bloodline?
To be honest, seeing Tianhuan Tong, then fighting skills must require pupils to use them, right? Even if the author wants to write further, he should give new settings and functions.
Insert eye
The author doesn't want to cut it off 😠. The updates are intermittent and it is easy to lose fans. I thought I found a good fan, but it's a pity that the update speed can't keep up.
Conjectures about how to become Dou Di
What is needed to break through Dou Di is Origin Qi. I have always been curious about what Origin Qi is. I would like to talk about my views on the two aspects of "conjecture about the nature of Origin Qi" and "how to obtain Origin Qi". 1. Conjecture about the nature of Origin Qi In the original book, basically no one knows the concept of Origin Qi, even the eight ancient races. This is very unreasonable. The eight ancient clans had Dou Di, so how could they not know the importance of Origin Qi? This can only show that Origin Qi was not precious in the Dou Qi Continent in ancient times. Although its effects are incredible, its quantity may not be rare. My conjecture about this is that Source Qi is just energy with a higher essence, and any energy with a high enough essence can be called Source Qi. Such as spiritual energy or even demonic energy. If Origin Qi is just a higher-level energy, it can explain why the eight ancient tribes do not know Origin Qi. In the original work, the source of energy coming from the ascension channel is actually spiritual energy. Perhaps in ancient times, the source of Qi was fighting spirit, or in other words, the quality of fighting spirit in ancient times was comparable to spiritual energy, enough to support Dou Emperor's existence. If this assumption is true, there is no need to emphasize it specifically because Dou Qi (Source Qi) is something that is everywhere. We know that there were many Dou Emperors in the ancient times of Dou Qi Continent. When evil tribes from outside the territory invaded the world, they ascended to support them, which caused a huge decline in Dou Qi Continent. This is not just the decline of cultivators, but also the decline of the world (the ascended Dou Emperor may not only take away energy, but also mysterious things such as luck and the origin of the world), which may very well lead to a significant decline in the quality of Dou Qi in Dou Qi Continent. I have seen a point of view in other book reviews that I agree with very much, Dou Qi practitioners should pay attention to a balance, the balance of the three components of spirit, energy and spirit. Jing is the power of the physical body, and God is the power of the soul. Both of them originate from the cultivator himself. In theory, he can cultivate to the Dou Di level completely by himself. But Qi is not good, Qi is external, and the decline in the quality of Dou Qi lowers the upper limit of what Dou Qi can support. The balance of essence, energy, and spirit can only be maintained until Dou Sheng. Even if Xiao Yan did not open the ascension channel and lead higher-level energy such as spiritual energy into the Dou Qi Continent. The Dou Qi continent is likely to continue to decline, and the quality of Dou Qi will further decline. If it weren't for Xiao Yan, many years later, even becoming a Fighting Saint would require the so-called "Holy Qi". 2. How to Obtain Origin Qi Under the premise that Dou Qi Continent itself can no longer produce substances that can be called Origin Qi, there are only two ways to obtain Origin Qi. Either find the Origin Qi that has been initially refined and retained in ancient times, or you can only find Origin Qi from outside the world. If we want to find the source of Qi through archeology, in addition to the two opportunities to become an emperor left by the ancient Tuoshe Emperor's cave, we can only look for other caves that Emperor Dou may have left behind. I personally think it is still possible. As long as Dou Qi Continent does not have a similar setting to Zhe Tian, when the world is downgraded, all high-level items will be chopped off. Then, considering the large number of Dou Emperors in Dou Qi Continent, there will always be a few who have the opportunity to become emperors. However, this method is still purely based on luck. If you want to find source energy from outside the world, it is a bit difficult and you have to try your luck. The reason why there is spiritual energy in the Ascension Channel is because the Ascension Channel connects the world, so there are traces of spiritual energy seeping through. If you casually dig a hole in the world to lead to the outside of the world, there is a high probability that there will be nothing, and you will only encounter the destructive power of the void. But fortunately, a large number of Dou Emperors ascended in Dou Qi Continent. Even after they ascended, the ascension passages would be closed, but some traces would still be left. If you are lucky enough to find these space nodes formed by the closure of the ascension passage, and then forcefully open them through brute force, you may also be able to obtain spiritual energy (source energy). Forcibly opening the ascension channel, the strength requirements of the space nodes are unknown. If it is tentatively designated as the Dou Emperor level, I think it is still possible to achieve it. Without Origin Qi, even if you can't become a Dou Emperor, you can still find a way to become a pseudo-emperor like Xiao Xuan. Coupled with the increase in elixirs, the increase in formations that the protagonist may develop in the future, and even the increase in weapons, I think it is still possible to reach the level of Dou Emperor in terms of strength alone. 3. The origin of the world and the possible existence of plane embryos The foundation of Dou Qi Continent is still better than that of Tianxuan Continent, and theoretically it should have its own plane embryos. If so, in the original work, Xiao Yan was not recognized by the Plane Fetus. It may be that in the Plane Fetus' view, the battle between Xiao Yan and Soul Emperor is ultimately a battle within the world, and it doesn't matter who wins. However, the conditions for the birth of the Plane Fetus are not stated in the original work, so it is still uncertain after all. If the Dou Emperor inheritance cannot be found, the space node formed by the closure of the ascension passage, and the Dou Qi Continent does not have a plane fetus, the only possibility for someone to be promoted to Dou Emperor is the origin of the world. The method of obtaining it is very crude, destroying the world. When the shell of the world, that is, the main space, is destroyed, the core origin that makes up the world will naturally overflow. At that time, there will be a very short window period for people to absorb it. If you are lucky and succeed in being promoted to Dou Emperor before the world is completely destroyed, then you must ascend immediately, otherwise you will definitely die.
Reader debates about recent plots
Regarding the recent plot, many people have made various complaints. Some said that Furukawa should not have a seventh-grade elixir, that sometimes the protagonist's fight against Yunshan was unreasonable, and some were dissatisfied with the protagonist's form and style. The first one is simply that I forgot the original work. The second point is actually in line with the original work, but the original work cannot be considered too reasonable here. However, people who read the fanfic are basically fans of the original work, so naturally they will not talk about the original work, but only this fanfic. As for the third point, I think there is a fundamental contradiction between this fan and the readers who complain about it. As for the various strategies used by the protagonist, those readers complained but either did not have a comprehensive understanding of the protagonist's purpose and missed some important parts, or they maintained a disapproval attitude towards the protagonist's fundamental purpose. After watching it too much, I feel that they are trying to explain something. If they can't talk about one topic, they just change the topic. So what they said (such as Dou Qi Continent should not engage in intrigues, the protagonist is not strong enough, etc.) Is not the reason why they said that. The real reason is that those readers do not agree with the protagonist's form and style. (Ps: There is no right or wrong in formal style, because it is just a tendency to do things.) (Ps: The reason is not entirely like this. There are also simple writing flaws, but the original work actually also has writing flaws. The fundamental reason why many readers are unhappy with this book is still their disapproval of formal style.) So why is this happening? One, the conflict of styles All other Dou Po fans. No matter what the protagonist's development route is, no matter what the protagonist's character is, no matter what the protagonist does, the overall style is close to the original work. It is as if Xiao Yan proposed a guiding ideology and achieved success with it, and those fan protagonists also achieved success with similar guiding ideology. Therefore, in the reading sense of some readers, those fan protagonists are the successors and descendants of Xiao Yan. The more successful the fan protagonists are, the more they can improve Xiao Yan in the original work. Even among those fans, it does not matter if the fan protagonists are better developed than Xiao Yan. However, the overall style of this book is different from the royal blood of the original work, and is more inclined to rational planning. The fundamental difference between this book and the original work is the difference, or conflict, between royal passion and rational planning. The more successful other fan fiction is, the more it elevates the original work. The more successful this fan fiction is, the greater the style conflict with the original work. The style of novels is like values. It is difficult for different styles to coexist in the same group. When a new concept suddenly appears in a group that only has one concept, people who are unfamiliar with it will naturally reject it instinctively. It's like the whole world is full of capitalist countries, and then suddenly a socialist country appears and develops very well. No matter how much this socialist country respects other capitalist countries in international exchanges, its existence itself is a slap in the face of capitalism. For those who identify more with capitalism, they will have an instinctive displeasure with that socialist country. So no matter how this novel reconciles the relationship with Xiao Yan and the original work in terms of plot, the difference in style is destined to create a style conflict. Fortunately, not all readers will care about this conflict. Second, readers have different reading tendencies Doupo has a very wide audience, and his fandom is also very large, which has created many types of fans and also created different reading tendencies among readers. I have divided three reading tendencies. The first type, pure fans of the original work They often come to see fan fiction for the purpose of nostalgia, wanting to relive the glory of the past from another perspective, or they want to make up for the regrets in the original work with the help of fan fiction. Therefore, for this kind of readers, the closer the plot of the fanfic is to the original work, the better, but it must be close but not completely identical, otherwise it is better to read the original work. They hope that the protagonist of the fanfic can take a path that is very close to Xiao Yan but different from that of Xiao Yan, and achieve success in the style of the original work. Essentially, I want to see a better "Xiao Yan" who makes up for his regrets. The growth path of this type of fan protagonist is basically inseparable from the alien fire. They are basically a replica of the anti-inflammatory, and some even simply travel through time and become Xiao Yan. The second type is people who are somewhat bored after reading the original work many times and reading many similar works by similar fans For this type of readers, what they pay most attention to is no longer Xiao Yan or the plot of the original work. They may even feel bored with the plot of the original work. What they pay most attention to is often the various interesting things mentioned in the original work, but which have not been fully explored by Xiao Yan. For this type of readers, what they want to see is a protagonist who takes a completely different growth path from Xiao Yan, but whose overall style is very similar to Xiao Yan. Essentially, I want to see a different "Xiao Yan". This type of fanfic is also what readers want to read the most, and this is basically the case for all DouPo fanfics that are currently popular. Compared with the previous category, this type of fandom often has more innovations, such as moves, forces that are not stated in the original work, and original heroines. The third type is watching too many fans, and even the style is boring. The focus is on people with a Douqi mainland worldview. The stage of Dou Qi Continent does not only have one style. In Minecraft, you can play pure survival, pvp, and redstone. For this third type of readers, what they want to see is something newer. It doesn't matter the plot or the style. They want to interpret a brand-new story on the stage of Douqi Continent. Essentially, I want to see a different "doupo". And this fanfic is written for this third type of readers. From what I've seen, I feel like there are very few such fans. This type of fanfic is equivalent to the second type, which is more bold and innovative. The plot is different and the style is different from the original work. On the basis of ensuring that this world is still the world of material struggle and destruction described in the original work, it is completely innovative. It can be found that the changes in these three types of readers are actually a process of requiring less and less "unchanged" things. The first requires that the plot, style, and world view remain unchanged. The second type requires that the style and world view remain unchanged. The third type only requires that the worldview remains unchanged. There is no distinction between these three types of readers, nor right or wrong. These are just different preferences and different reading tendencies. Like I said above. The difference in style of this novel is destined to conflict with the style of the original work, which will inevitably make many second-category readers unhappy. But this is not the fault of the reader, nor the fault of the novel. This is just the wrong novel. It can only be said that the types of fandom are not as single as most people think.
There is no problem with the rationality of this book. There is only the problem of serious watering down, or too much expansion and too little updating.
Just follow it and read it, it is non-toxic, at least it is reasonable within the framework of Dou Po. To be honest, the problem of watering down, the heroine problem, etc. Are not the problem at all, but the progress, or the mismatch between the update and the author's development speed is the fundamental reason why a large number of chapters are flooded with water. However, if we don't write many branches and develop a lot of characterizations, the explanation of the characters and foreshadowing seems to lack a lot of rationality, or it will inevitably lead to many readers being unable to complete the logical self-consistency and framework identification, so it seems that everything has to be explained and written... But when it comes to writing, the updates are just a little every day, and it seems inevitable that it is all water, the author It has to be written in detail, because it is about the author's struggle and Lin Yuan's world. If you want to write it all, you have to spend a lot of pen and ink describing each branch... Time advances with the protagonist, the switching of various perspectives, and the improvement opportunities of each protagonist and supporting role must be explained... And the protagonist must mention his future strength path, the interests of people around him, and even preferences, and advice for his descendants. . The following is an overview of a large number of examples of the protagonist's path in the middle and late stages of the plot so far: For example, the three elixirs of blood, energy, and soul correspond to the essence, energy, and spirit. The source of the original emperor elixir has a template reference plus the protagonist's concept that a strong person should be omnipotent (six sides Shape Warrior), unfolding the protagonist's mid-to-late stage path as an alchemist, an important profession: Three Pills are the trump card of Dou Zun, Semi-Saint and even the later Dou Saint stage. The improvement methods and training methods have already joined the Soul Palace to become disciples of Hun Xuzi and Borrowing Medicine Lao. He quickly joined the line to become the future controller of the Little Danta Power, and by chance, the eight tribes of Zhongzhou would get on the line of using the technology of burning to create a new exotic fire for Zihuo ten years later. The body-refining fighting skills with the Stone Clan line are simply a master of stringing together. The line of Qinglin's compilation of the Nine Nether Earth Soul Python and the ancient Heavenly Serpent's ruins that Yuan Tianzun discovered in the Soul Palace became semi-holy and useless. The Dragon Island Taixu ancient dragon that combines the four islands of Phoenix and Ziyan, as well as the colorful scales of Medusa and the nine-color sky-swallowing python, which are needed for the rapid advancement of consciousness of the new sky-swallowing python Xiao Cai... Many ancient warcraft essence and blood body refining, and another heaven-level fighting skill string for thunder tribulation body refining. The most common and most skilled eighth-grade elixir refined with black magic thunder in the Void Thunder Pool, the Thunder Tribulation Pill, is extremely familiar. In addition, as the Qi Dan of the third elixir, it is also the auxiliary of the Dan Fire Spirit. Using the black magic thunder to refine the body, the first ninth-grade elixir refined was also the Thunder Tribulation Pill... Another example is Dou Zun Dou Sheng. There is a huge gap between one star. How to accumulate fighting spirit and quickly improve the strength. The expansion of the Little Doctor Immortal Line is very important. Transforming other people's fighting spirit into the Ten Thousand Poison Seal and then refining it with powerful alien fire can be said to be a means to quickly improve the Dou Zun in this relatively embarrassing stage... Another example is the powerful and trustworthy protector, who has no roots at the beginning, becomes the space jade talisman of the powerful people from various forces who have befriended or joined, and then Ziyan who refines the dragon and phoenix source fruit and is promoted to the sixth level Dou Jingjing Jinglian and the Dragon King's guidance... The step-by-step plan is clearly visible! So much to say, I would like to express one final point. The author's update speed severely limits the characterization and plot development as well as the number of subscribers... I propose ten chapters a day!
Xun'er has laid so much groundwork, so let's just accept it. We just need to arrange some plots, don't write them too bluntly.
I really still like the comic version
Queen
Suddenly the heroine's cultivation level was raised too high, making it appear that the protagonist's cultivation level was too low.
I have a problem in my mind😫, I want to see the main character guide Xun'er
I have a problem in my mind😫, I want to see the main character guide Xun'er
Let me make a small suggestion. If Xun'er is not one of the heroines, there is no need to give her so many scenes.
The cartoon pictures may be infringed or deleted.
Sexy girl Zi Yan😍, seductive to the eyes.
Xun'er must be collected, and it must be collected reasonably. What is the purpose of the novel?
Seeing that I have no imagination now, there are only two kinds of becoming an emperor. One is the Emperor's Young Pill (Emperor Hun Tian wants to become an emperor, Huan Yuan Tianzun? Are you qualified?) The other is the inheritance of the Ancient Emperor (if you don't practice Fen Jue, the Ancient Emperor will not bother with you at all) If you want to create your own Kung Fu method, you are not even a Dou Zong, do you want to compare your experience with Dou Emperor?
Ziyan picture, cute
As expected, the comic version still fits my impression.
The protagonist has a wrong mentality
Does the protagonist have too strong a sense of superiority? A fighting king dares to fight against the northwest and fight against the clan for chess. With perfect calculation, Dusha went to La Yunshan to seize the opportunity, and then went to the Mulan Empire to fight against the three elders of Mulan. In the original work, Xiao Yan also said that even if he was a four-star Dou Huang, he would still have to fight for his life against Douzong. The protagonist has no system and no grandfather. He dares to face the fighting power of Dou Zong lightly and does not take the opponent seriously at all. He is really confident 😅
Xun'er
Do a little survey to see what your preferences are
Only by understanding your own readers can you write appropriate content, so I took a vote
The first few dozen pictures are okay, the protagonist is courageous, but the latter is like a rat in the gutter. He plots against everyone and is not at all magnanimous. He either does it or doesn't do it. He knows that his behavior is insidious, so why should he paralyze himself by saying that he can just open his vest?
I haven't read it for three months. When I came back, I found that the author was suspected of being seriously ill Oh, I hope the author can get better. Follow the doctor's orders and save his life.
Can the author respond?
Is this book still alive? Is the author sick or unable to write anymore? Can you give me an accurate answer? This fanfic is okay, but I've seen it in its later stages. I asked for a leave of absence and then stopped updating it and disappeared.
Author, if you really don't want to write, please leave a confirmation letter and don't make people wait.
Dear, I haven't seen you update for a long time, and I have been worried about you. I feel really sorry for you when my friends say that you are not in good health and feel uncomfortable. It has been more than a year since I wrote the article, 2 million words, and more than 700 chapters. You have brought us so much happiness and companionship. It is really hard work. Updates are not important, what is most important is that you live well and recover well. We are all waiting for you. No rush or rush. Whenever you want to write and have the strength, even if you only write one sentence or a short paragraph, we will be happy. You are not alone, we are all with you, you must be good and don't give up. ❤️❤️😡😡
I have a guess (blind guess)
I guess everyone is curious. It is common for authors not to update, but it is really rare for a popular book to not say a word or explain. And it doesn't look like there is anything written in the current chapter. I also have a friend in real life who stopped replying to my messages last month. We used to play games together every day and occasionally get together, but he disappeared inexplicably. Then he suddenly replied to my message a few days ago, saying that he was imprisoned for fighting. His family owned a restaurant, and a few people came to make trouble, so he led a few people and had a fight with them. Then someone across the street was seriously injured. He was imprisoned for half a month and then for another half month (I didn't ask in detail). If the author encounters something urgent in life and doesn't reply for months without replying, he can keep a lot of fans and monthly votes by saying something casually. Judging from his writing, he has put a lot of thought into it. He probably got into something and can't use his mobile phone.
Author, please don't give up on this book, I can't bear to part with it