You Promised to Be a Demon Cultivator, but You Ended up Taking the Right Path?

This book is not suitable for initiating. I know what you want to express, but newcomers are not qualified to do so. The fast-paced life makes most people who come to Qidian only expect to get literary fast food. If you jump over the wall, you are still a newcomer cook and no one will pay for it.

The male protagonist is following a different path, his skills are evil and his stance is neutral.

It's a pity that it feels good but not popular. Maybe people don't like this style which is refreshing but not particularly outstanding.

It feels like it's either a fairy tale or an ordinary romance light novel!

First of all, the author's writing style is too delicate, including the protagonist's thoughts and initial impression of killing people for the first time. He is either a female video artist or a literary youth. Excluding novice writers, they cannot write in such detail Then, the two paths of good and evil described by the author are too superficial. The good path must be just, and the evil path must be cruel. It is set like this, and it feels like subconsciously using a familiar writing method. Those who are familiar with Dark Fairy Heroes should know that writing villains is not only about the cruelty of the evil way, but also the hypocrisy of the right way. This is Dark Immortal And then, the little girl's encounter is still written in the traditional female channel. What kind of father doesn't care, mother doesn't love, and is abused all the time. It highlights the oppression of women by patriarchal society, thereby winning the sympathy and sense of empathy of female readers. The mainstream way of writing is that there is at least one loved one, who will appear to be good even if it is used, and then encounter a natural or man-made disaster, the protagonist appears, with limited abilities, only saves the little girl, and then takes it away, or leaves a good relationship and leaves alone Then again, there is the little girl (because this male video is really rarely written like this). The author writes the little girl's experience to highlight the little girl's misery and ignores the rationalization. Don't think that readers of Xiuxianwen don't care about the people at the bottom. This is the most test of the author's skill. Her father's children, both male and female, were beaten to death by him. First of all, children are labor force. Looking at the little girl and her father making the little girl work, you know that the ones who died older than her have the ability to work. Can this kind of labor force be easily discarded? You don't have any reference to another one that was particularly valued in ancient times: the elimination of descendants, right? Yes, there are those who pawn their wives and sell their children, but that one is a gambler, and this one is a drunkard and has no relationship. The third one is a drunkard and a lazy man, so he will not kill the labor force. He needs support. And another thing, it's very confusing that these people written in female videos will not resist when they are oppressed, but they all need to be saved. Reality does not need logic, but novels do. The author does not have a reasonable explanation for this description, and there is no deep reason behind it. He just needs such a character to promote the plot. It seems very empty. If the author doesn't know how to write about this aspect, you can read similar articles Then there is the character of the protagonist, it is too boring, what kind of immortality can you do if you don't kill decisively? Faced with what happened to the little girl, he obviously felt sympathy but insisted on adding drama to himself. In this regard, please refer to "Gu Zhenren" where Fang Yuan took Jia Jinsheng to the cave but discovered the inheritance of the Flower Wine Walker and directly killed people. Can a monk kill a mortal and still be able to deal with it? How can someone like this rotten person pursue revenge? If I have power but I don't know how to use it properly, wouldn't my cultivation as an immortal be in vain? If you don't understand the situation, you've already searched for the little girl's soul. How can you be tired of searching for her father? It would be more convenient to search for her father to find out the situation. The character is indistinct, hesitant in doing things, and the IQ is worrying. As readers, we can tolerate other protagonists but cannot tolerate problems with IQ. The encounter with the little girl here gave me the feeling that it is either a young literary author or a female author. The female author is more likely to be the author. Finally, the author's writing style is delicate, which is indeed an advantage. However, the characterization is empty and the narrative is illogical. The character is simply created to advance the event. According to the routine of female videos, it will probably abuse the protagonist. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is not likeable and his IQ is worrying. I don't think this book will be popular It's the first time I've written it for such a long time. I spit it out after holding it in. It feels so good

It might be more interesting to change the introduction: Among the demonic cultivators who kill without blinking an eye, I think I will be a different demonic cultivator. Because I kill people with the blink of an eye

If I say, I mean if, remove the Virgin attributes of the protagonist, start from killing the first righteous junior brother in order to survive, and bring in the logical thinking of a normal adult. As follows: Thank you for the invitation. I had just transformed into a demon cultivator, and before I could sort out the memories in my mind, a handsome young man in front of me was about to hack me to death. In order to survive, I relied on my strong bones and fought hard at close range. Then I became a sword stuck in my heart (but not an ancient Korean general), with one arm almost severed and hanging from my body. But fortunately, I lived and he died. Later, in order to survive, I relied on the behavioral inertia of the demon cultivator in my mind and went to a slum in a mortal town, hoping to use the thin spiritual energy, mottled mortal aura and disorderly environment to avoid the following pursuit of the righteous path. Perhaps because I have adapted to the time travel, this body's senses have become clearer from dullness. The memories in my mind have been digested by me. The pain from the wounds all over my body is constantly stimulating me to look for every possible chance to survive. Just now, I entered a room and saw a little girl tied up. The side effects of the Soul-Eating Technique (the technique I practiced), which were like addiction, took effect immediately. That was an attractive little girl, like a delicious cake that one couldn't help but want to eat. The instinct to survive overcame everything and I did not disturb her. I quietly walked into the dark place, meditated with my memory, and tried to repair my body. So I pulled out the sword, reattached the bone, and reattached the arm. At least on the surface, I looked uninjured. This was the second time I felt the charm of cultivating immortals. The first time was when I was rushing over, the magic talisman was as elegant as flying. Then I discovered that this little girl actually found me in the dark, so I completely noticed her difference, which may be related to the memories of spiritual roots and fairy seedlings in my mind. When I turned to look at her, there was a fluctuation in her empty eyes, and there was a palpitation in the little girl's soul. I took a greedy breath, as if there was a scent of freshly baked cake wafting in front of me, and I was a person who had been hungry for more than ten days. But I still resisted the idea of ​​killing a life. Maybe it was because my outlook on things had not changed, or maybe it was because I had not yet understood the situation and was hesitant. I decided to observe it for a while. The next day, the little girl's father came. Domestic violence, contempt for family ties, and lack of fatherly love were my first impressions of the handsome, alcoholic and obese middle-aged man. When the girl was being whipped, the seductive fluctuations in her soul made me, who had always been affected by the side effects of the Soul-Eating Technique, couldn't help but start using the technique. Of course, no one was killed. It just sucked some of her mood swings. Yes, it was the kind of big gulp. According to the comparison in the memory, just sucking her emotions was better than the original one who killed an entire village to refine the souls of mortals. The original person is indeed a cannon fodder, and the efficiency of absorbing the skills is comparable to that of an old woman knitting a sweater, extremely slow. In order to face the following pursuit of the righteous path, I came up with a way. I saved this little girl, and for this I reaped the second life from time travel, the handsome fat father who gave birth to this overly beautiful girl. The little girl regarded me as her only support, and I named her Su Shiyao. Her emotions of gratitude, fear, and happiness were like waves of sweet springs, nourishing my severely injured body. Next, it's time to find a way to solve the subsequent pursuit.

Is this writing about cultivating the devil? ? ? ? Why does the author write it like a romance novel?

Let's speed up the pace a little, it's almost 400,000 words and I'm still struggling at the fifth level of Qi training 🥵

Not bad, the first book is to write more, only by writing can one be able to write

Very good writing style. Some people may think that the character of the protagonist is the most beautiful character of human beings. Moreover, the demon cultivators in this book are all real demon cultivators. The character of the protagonist is even more shining. I hope to update more soon, 100 chapters a day.

The author chose this cover very well 😍

If I were to cultivate demons, I would definitely burn, kill, and loot.