The Yellow Skin on the Strange Route

I suggest you don't make any mysteries. Age of Discovery fantasy is good enough. When Pirates of the Caribbean was popular, I didn't know what mysteries were.

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The sudden turn at the beginning of Chapter 30 is very abrupt and feels awkward.

Is this the original image of this character? ? ? Why did it inexplicably turn into a female channel style? This is not a question of whether you can write emotional dramas or not. The painting style of the whole book is distorted. And what is going on with these supporting characters? The previous supporting characters were all either spooky, cunning, brooding, or bloodthirsty, ferocious and strong-willed. Suddenly, the style of the painting suddenly changed, and all of them appeared to be either brainless, stupid, or worm-brained. The so-called "dangerous" princess was completely insane. The level of the entire book and the IQ of all the characters plummeted. Isn't it outrageous?

After the appraisal was completed, I bought a ghostwriter at the beginning, but I couldn't read the rest. I couldn't understand how you could make money from such a book? Is there really a fool who would continue to read this? Even if the writing is written later, it will be better than the bad writing written by the author. It's like Xiang in the toilet, it stinks to death.

I feel more and more disgusted. A good novel suddenly joins the political struggle. The recent chapters, Jack's sophistry, these contents are completely different from the original intention of the title and introduction of the novel. And there are a lot of foreshadowings in the novel. Jack repeatedly encounters adventures in the sea. You manipulate so many things, but you can't connect them. Your writing style can't produce the effect. Why are you doing so many tricks? Don't write these messy official battles because you can't keep writing.

No, buddy, what you want to write about is Navigator Jack. I also want to read Navigator Jack, and I also want to see Captain Jack in the future. Instead of love brain clown licking dog Jack OK?

This is a story about abuse of the main character, be careful when entering. There is a dead end in the opening introduction. After returning, the protagonist's mother and sister were captured as slaves. When they were on the ship, the protagonist did not expect to kill the enemies on the ship. He was insane.

The rest of Chapter 30 is really too urgent

The first part is well written, but the second part is about a bullshit princess. I really don't understand the author's thinking. I suggest that I delete the part about the princess.

I read more than a hundred chapters and it was so disgusting that I couldn't stand it. Shen Nong is dead

The article is cool but not cool, if you like being abused, you can read it

From the moment we landed, the plot suddenly went very fast, and I swallowed everything in a hurry, which was boring and a bit choked. Completely different from before

Before chapter 30, I could bear to read it, but after chapter 30, I couldn't read it. It was like two books were written together by a different author, and it was like chapter 30 started to refresh the readers.

It's really disgusting. I really should stop writing. When you have time, read more about how other people write novels.

How has the article changed since the second whaling?

The content is very novel, but why does the latest chapter make people feel a little funny? Isn't it funny that there are so many spies in a ship with only so many people?

The part before landing is very well written, definitely above the quality level, but after landing the plot is a bit abrupt, and the sense of immersion is suddenly lost for the readers. . . .

Please skip this part of the plot. It was fine in the front, but what are you doing in the back? When writing a novel, the author should never take on the role himself, otherwise it will be easy for him to become superior to himself. I wrote a bunch of answers recently. Everyone is here to see pirates, not your 18th-rate romantic comedy. Moreover, your b-protagonist's combat power has increased so quickly. I doubt whether you will be able to control it later. You are already on the road to bad writing. The author should change it quickly.

The result of my reading of this novel is that starting from chapter 30, it's just a matter of another person writing it. It's a bit interesting at the beginning, but it turns into an almighty king in a second. This is not a big problem. But in Chapter 29, he couldn't beat an assassin who was a guard head-on, and then in Chapter 30, he was able to face-to-face with the number one and most powerful warrior in the territory. This is nonsense, pure nonsense. The protagonist, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 29, is still a seventeen-year-old boy who is severely malnourished and dying of scurvy. He has just landed on land and has not eaten good food for a few days. Then in Chapter 30, he instantly transformed into the God of War and faced off against professional warriors. I also played it back and forth, but gave it up. I don't recommend it to latecomers. It's just for fun.

I saw someone saying that the author bought it at the beginning, and then continued it by himself, which is bad. I don't know the truth, but it's forty chapters, where is your weirdness? What about yellow skin? How fast is the plot? Just read Chapter 31 and 32 to find out It is recommended not to write the plot on the shore.

Look, I'm just saying that the talent is over The end of the world has come out, and the preparations have been made there If I continue writing like this, what else can I write? I don't believe that this author has this kind of imagination and writing style, so just wait and there is still a small distance from the end.

After the beginning, the style of painting suddenly changed, and suddenly it turned into an eighteenth-rate white text. I guess I bought the beginning and the assembly line works of the studio behind it.

My name is Archaon, born in Nordland. He was supposed to grow into a good, law-abiding citizen of the empire. But I never expected... I was drowned in the sea on the first day I was born... Stop! A man shouted from the shadows. Destiny is changed. ------- I am Archaon. I did not die in infancy, nor did I have the sea. I was abandoned when I was just born. I appeared in the church. Pastor Dagbert adopted me and taught me the teachings of Sigmar. I was supposed to grow into a pious, brave, and righteous temple priest. But I never expected... When I was eight years old, I contracted a terrible plague, which caused skin ulcers and body corrosion. The cause turned out to be the aftermath of a forbidden grimoire that my adoptive father was studying in the basement, so I was cursed to death... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- I am Archaon. My godfather asked me to stay away from the church. I did not get sick and grew up healthily. At the age of thirteen, I became the squire of the baron's knight. I should have continued to strive to become a glorious knight's squire. But I never expected that... The baron beat his knight after drinking, and as a squire, I raised a sledgehammer to the baron in order to protect the Lord. Then, the two of them joined forces to take down, and were kicked to death by their horses... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- I am Archaon. I did not stop the Baron from beating the knight. He was drunk and hunting, and fell into the night goblin's trap. The Baron and the knight were all killed. I killed the night goblin and took back their corpses. I was adopted by the Baron's wife, inherited the family, and became a noble. I originally thought I would become a good lord as brave, upright, and powerful as Sigma. But I never expected... After I conquered a tribe of beastmen and saved the love of my life, Sister Giselle, I was seriously injured, and my right eye was pierced by a rune stone. "The stone needs to be smashed, the corpse needs to be burned, and a warning needs to be issued. Our empire is not a place for their chaos!", I just finished speaking the heroic words and took the initiative to cut off, and I stopped... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny is changed again and again. ------- My name is Archaon. I successfully defeated the beastmen, but I was seriously injured and full of corrosion. A new army of demons came after me to snatch the forbidden grimoire. Godfather Dagbert and Sister Giselle took me to Altdorf, the capital of the empire. I originally thought that when I arrived at the Temple of Sigmar, the great priest Heydrich would save my life and expose the demonic conspiracy hidden in the forbidden grimoire. But I never expected... The Knights of the Temple of Sigmar blocked our way, killed Godfather Dagbert for no reason, and snatched the Forbidden Grimoire. I am stunned again... Stop! There was a man in the shadows who smashed all the cups in front of him. Destiny is changed again and again. ------ My name is Archaon. My adoptive father Dagbert and Sister Giselle and I escaped pursuit and returned to our hometown castle. What we saw was the destroyed castle, the massacred citizens, and our adoptive mother who was hanged on the city wall! I didn't cry, only endless sadness. I looked at the scars left when I fought against the devil, and then at the Sigma pendant in my hand, and my faith began to collapse. My adoptive father told me that he found the reason in the Forbidden Grimoire: "The Forbidden Grimoire reveals the end of the world, and the person who destroyed the world is named Archaon. And that person is you." I didn't want to admit this fate, but my adoptive father's words forced me to believe that I didn't want to bring darkness to the world, so I chose to commit suicide by throwing myself into a well. Stop! There was a manly man in the shadows, cursing and modifying the timeline. Destiny was changed again. --------- My name is Archaon. My adoptive father, adoptive mother, lover, and subjects were all killed by the Temple Knights. Grieved, I sneaked into the Great Temple of Altdorf and knelt in front of the golden statue of Sigmar to pray for guidance, but received no response. I killed the guarding Temple Knights, captured High Priest Heydrich, and asked him sharply why he did this! "The Forbidden Grimoire reveals the end of the world. The person who destroyed the world is named Archaon. And that person is you." The great priest said. "Just because of this ridiculous prophecy, you are going to kill my whole family?" I turned dark, full of disgust for Sigma's hypocritical light, and vowed to destroy Sigma's temple and make him pay the price! I broke through the Garden of Nurgle, walked through the Demon Palace of Tzeentch, withstood the temptation of Slaanesh, killed the Great Daemon of Khorne, and finally dragged my scarred body to a place of shadow to be crowned by the Eternal Chosen. "Stop!" The man in the shadow stood up and said happily: "My name is Bilak, and I am your father! Everything you have is given to me, now it's time to return your body to me!" --------- My name is Archaon, the Lord of Doom, the Three-Eyed King, the favorite of the Chaos Gods, the last High King of Norsca, the 13th Eternal Chosen God, the Commander-in-Chief of Chaos, and the boss of the bad guys. With the help of a friend who was holding a warhammer, I killed Beelak who was playing tricks on me all my life. I beat Sigma to the point where he hunkered down in the Kingdom of God and did not dare to go out. But he told me that this should not be my fate and that we should go back to the original starting point. Should I believe him?

I can't stand it. It's been a long time since I've seen such a cowardly protagonist.

To put it bluntly, a modern person traveled through time and was kidnapped. In order to save his life, he kept spitting out modern knowledge and making money for the nobles.

I would like to give you a recommendation. Basically no one is reading these 6 novels. They are often interrupted and have bad endings. Sometimes they are a little bit literary. Hanging 6 books like this still ruins the character. It is better to cut them and open a new one. This book is obviously very creative in the early stage and there are quite a lot of people who are following it. The result is, haha.

The protagonist has so much knowledge and yet he is so miserable

The difference between the previous and later writings is too big. In my opinion, this whole review is bullshit. It is equivalent to saying that there is no outline. The introduction says that this world is not a world that Jack the Dog understands, so what? Is he entangled with this world? Or are they fused together? Or has he swallowed up the world? What is he like in another world? I haven't even finished reading the free chapters. The differences between the previous and previous chapters are too big. Sometimes he is thoughtful, and sometimes he is wild and brave. The later stage is just a stage created for the protagonist like Long Aotian.

The writing is not bad, I read it in one sitting