A Copy of the Heavens Starting from Journey to the West

Let me tell those who want to see it, first of all, this Journey to the West is not the Journey to the West as you think, and it doesn't even count as a derivative. It's so confusing, and I don't know what I'm buying. In fact, it just puts the name of the gods on it, and cooks a pot of random stew. However, some people like this style. It seems that Buddha jumping over the wall is considered random stew?

Those who can accept reading the running account can come and read it slowly, and those who can't accept it can leave directly. The name of this novel should be "Lu Chen's Chronicle of Immortal Cultivation". The more I read it, the more boring it becomes, and the more I read it, the less I expect it. The plot is bland and has no ups and downs. This is mainly because it is too long-winded. You can see endless new side plots in the book. As I looked at it, I forgot what the protagonist was doing in the dungeon. It seemed like he was traveling for an outing. Wherever the protagonist went, the running account was written down. As for the main plot? I may suddenly mention it to you at some point, advance the progress bar, and then continue writing the journal. By the way, the author is a Riddler, which I didn't mind at first, but combined with his flashback style of writing, it was really boring. It is indeed a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless. It is a pity not to read it. After watching it, it becomes more and more boring.

It takes 7 years for a monkey to become an artist. If you make trouble in the Heavenly Palace, you will be suppressed. Or you will be suppressed by the Tathagata despite the interference of other gods. You want to make trouble in just one year. Can you enter the Nantianmen?

After reading the first dungeon, it's so outrageous. The first dungeon is obviously about Journey to the West, but in the end, only Patriarch Bodhi has some involvement in the plot. The other plot characters have no interaction at all. Instead, there are a lot of original characters, and it feels like they have nothing to do with Journey to the West. Even the worldview of Journey to the West is a bit out of line. It is a complete magic change, and when you finally leave the dungeon, there is a bunch of information that is not suitable for the protagonist's current level. It feels like a worldview is forced into it. The fatalistic conspiracy theory Buf is stacked too early, and it feels a bit old-fashioned.

It is recommended to go to the Xianxia side. Many readers on the Zhutianliu side come to see the dungeons collide with various systems and different battles. The Journey to the West is well written, but it doesn't feel right here.

Let me talk about my current feelings about this book. First of all, the "writing" is okay. The author seems to have checked a lot of information to write this kind of fairy tale, but in my eyes this is just good. As for my question, I came to see Wang Wenwen just for the fun, and then I came to Zhutianwen. Zhutianwen only has a few highlights. One is constant adventure in various worlds. I won't talk about this. So far, there are only two worlds. Then, I use Zhutian to pretend to be cool in other worlds, or to pretend to be cool in the main world. Then the plot in the main world basically does not exist, and the protagonist does not look like the protagonist of Shuangwen. The meaning of cultivating immortals is very heavy, which leads to the decrease in the fun of the plot again. Then there is the dungeon. Currently, it is said to be a dungeon, but the protagonist will only encounter those in the main god space. It has nothing to do with other dungeons in the main world. But how many words have it been now? Other dungeons in the main world and other people who have downloaded the dungeon are basically useless. This setting is basically useless until now. In terms of cultivating immortals, there is a strong sense of fate, reincarnation, and reincarnation, which affects the fun point and turns to literary youth. The fun point of the plot has dropped again. Although it is probably to pave the way for breaking the reincarnation and breaking the sense of fate in the future, I really don't see the signs so far, and now that there are so many words, I can't hold on. Finally, I would like to say to the author, you don't need to write about Zhutian, you can just cultivate immortality. Up to now, the main world has basically no impact on the protagonist, and there is basically no modern plot. Even if you want to write a protagonist with modern knowledge (it is convenient to write after all), you can just start traveling through time. There is really no need to put Zhutian's head on it. It will easily make people who want to see Zhutian unable to stand it. Those who want to see Zhutian will not click Zhutian to come in.

Now don't write so much about daily life that returns to reality, it is meaningless to the subject. Don't take on apprentices for the time being, take on heroines, make a lot of money, start a company, buy a house, help this and that. Gaining the Tao is the main theme, everything else is external, just pretend to be B and that's it. What we are eating is fast food. Don't complicate the relationship between the characters and the storyline. Just make it more enjoyable for readers. Stop writing about the ancient great power's true body, false body, incarnation, and the demons from outside the world, causing people to be in chaos. Quickly enter the dungeon and fight between China and foreign countries

The first copy is too long. I can only stop for one year in total. I have to write hundreds of chapters and write down everything every day. 😅 Moreover, it is a myth, and it is a bit unreasonable to use the sky as a unit.

I can't watch it anymore. It's really a pity. The top-notch Westward Journey is a third-rate reality I thought that if I dug up the fairy grass, I would just pay for the previous Westward Journey. It's a pity.

How about changing the name? The main world is Journey to the West. According to this progress, the protagonist will be invincible after quitting the game. The martial arts world is simply untouchable, and it is unrealistic to forcefully weaken the protagonist.

Did someone else write it? There has been a problem since Chapter 100. A copy of Samsara appeared in Journey to the West, and a group of people planned it but it started but failed. A girl like Su and her cousin just pulled her crotch. Also, my friend, you are a monk from the Zi Mansion. The strongest people in the real world outside only have dozens of innates. You are an immortal cultivator who has gone through foundation building and Qi training. You are a cultivator in the three realms of Zi Mansion. You are grinding and grinding here in Mount Taihe and thought that pig's feet are also innate. If you are an immortal or a martial arts warrior beyond three realms, you have to fight slowly. So what kind of immortal can you do? Doesn't this mean that you can control everything in reality and make the country and even the world serve you? And prepare for the next copy? The people behind you are all the people under the saints, they are still playing house 🤔

I hope you don't get into trouble. Buddhism is a place where filth and evil are hidden. No one is worse than the other. They are all at the same level.

The title tricked me into reading it. I thought it was a cool article, in which the protagonist is practicing martial arts and cultivating immortality. However, the scene at the end of Journey to the West is too abstract. Everything here and there is all about calculations. The protagonist's teammates are a classic vulnerable group, and they will be plotted, waiting for the protagonist to develop and fight back. . . People who watch it get a headache.

The writing is good, but I personally don't like this kind of subject where the protagonist's life is manipulated. I haven't even glanced at the Weird Immortal and the Lord of the World. The setting of the Destiny Spirit of Heaven... In the future, I will at most watch the pretentious plot of this world.

Whether it's cultivation, system, ability, or state of mind, the sect is wonderful. It's a pity that it's all ruined once it enters reality.

You might as well just let the protagonist travel through the world of Journey to the West and start traveling to the heavens. I feel that the setting of the real world copy world is too redundant.

It can be seen that he gave up his original intention and ended up in fast food.

It was originally a fun read, but the author had to do something mysterious. When he saw it on the shelves, he immediately showed his cards, covered with the mythical texts of the heavens, and burned his brain! Give it up, I came to read novels to relax, not to use my brain.

I subscribed for a few chapters, and to be honest, it didn't meet my taste. The first few dozen chapters were okay, and then it became more and more clumsy. It didn't write about cultivation and promote the main plot. It just suppressed the protagonist and it was just water for more than 500,000 words. The protagonist stayed in Journey to the West for more than 500,000 words. It didn't matter if he didn't become an immortal. The result was still a refining of energy. Just suppress it and let it go. In the end, you still engage in conspiracy theories and drink like this after eating a few dishes. Sometimes Buddhism plots, sometimes Heaven plots. The protagonist is still in the game and has not come out. The system has plotted against him, and then the forces in the real world have plotted against him. . . Looking back, I see that the protagonist is still a little Karami. More than 500,000 words, refining the energy. At the beginning of each day, the number of daily water words is the number of water words. The author is just short of it. Every day, the protagonist has written how many miles he has walked, how much he has eaten, whether he has gone to the toilet, and what the process of going to the toilet is like. Then he has written down what is wrong with whoever he talks to! Yeah, it's very strong! !

Wow, this is another Journey to the West with Pollution from the Great Desolate River...

Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. It's pretty good, the protagonist's character is good in everything, but in Blue Star, being planted with flies made me sick. If you talk nonsense, you'll be threatened; if you don't change, you'll be fired. I went to find a copy.

Why is the first picture and introduction so poorly written, and the content quality behind and above is not the same at all?

Bad news, dog meat is being sold as sheep's head Good news, dog meat is so delicious

The author got the high-quality badge after it was put on the shelves, and even though the number of reading enthusiasts in the mid-term dropped to only a few dozen, he still insisted on writing more than one million words to complete the book, which is considered worthy of this book. I don't have much to say about the plot. As long as it's not too witty and the plot written by the author is reasonable, I can continue to watch it. This book collapsed in the Hulu world. At that time, it was really a long time to quote evidence. When a new character appeared, he would have to write hundreds of words of identity verification. Do readers pay to subscribe to see you write this stuff? It would be strange if you don't subscribe like crazy and lose money. Tell a story well. Although some people like it and some don't, as long as the story you tell is not too bad, people who are willing to read it will still continue to read it. But you write a lot of textual research and put the cart before the horse. This really drives away those who are willing to continue reading. I haven't read the plot of the later stage, but the time travel is really badly written. In the current environment, it has long been a poisonous point rather than an interesting point. I hope the author will work hard for the next book. Tell the story well and don't put the cart before the horse.

Xiancao, the introduction has nothing to do with the content.

I gave you two tickets. How can I put it this way? It's very good that you wrote about the tranquility of the years. The background is too big and it easily collapses. This is a semi-fake world. Writing about conspiracy and conspiracy is too inconsistent with the previous one.

The plot advances too slowly, author. Too few updates

Both the dungeon and the actual plot are good. Although it is not as original as Player Fierce, I feel that the magically modified version is also good, no worse than the original. I hope the author can stick to it.

The writing style is so good, why don't you write simpler and more enjoyable writing? It looks so tiring, isn't it tiring to write?

The content before it was put on the shelves is still worth reading.