Douluo Peerless: Dance of Ice Scorpion and Butterfly

1. At the beginning, we bombed the White Tiger Duke's Mansion and killed the Duchess. Praise! 2. Mr. Mu is not dead yet and is taking the emotional test, which is well received. Dai Huabin was praised and praised. 3. Mo Gui, an important original character in this book, is a titled Douluo of the spiritual system and a ninth-level soul master. He always uses simulation skills and runs around in his avatar. Wuhun and Yuhao both have eyes. As Yuhao's teacher of mental skills, I think it's okay. Brother Tianmeng is a numerical monster after all. He has slept through it for millions of years. His mental skills are definitely not comparable to those of a Titled Douluo of the mental system. In this book, she is also the maker of the Conferred God Platform. She once deceived the secret book of the Noumenon Sect and is now taking the dream test 4. Yi Lao, the Yi Lao in this book really made me cry to death and gave Yu Hao a Tower of Eternity 5 Yu Hao, so far in this book, I am quite satisfied with Huo Gua's character design, and it is not as unbearable as other book friends said. ①The first thing I did after going back in time was to blow up the Duke's Mansion with fragments of emotional consciousness, and then kill Dai Huafu, which was great ②In order to escape from Tang San's control, I didn't enroll in Shrek, but sneaked in with Mr. Mu to make a deal, and used undead magic to purge He resolved the hidden injury of Mr. Mu in exchange for the Dragon Pill. Later, he also helped Ma Xiaotao solve the evil fire and evolved it into the ultimate fire, and informed Beibei about Xiaoya's martial spirit (not as said in the comment section, an ungrateful villain with eyes full of hatred) ③ Because of Huo The second soul ring of the Ice Jade Scorpion martial spirit is Zhu Qing Ice Silkworm (with a bit of fire element), so when solving Ma Xiaotao's evil fire, there was a chemical reaction of no ultimate peace. Huo Gua can transform the ultimate ice into the ultimate fire, and the B level has been improved ④Currently There are relatively few emotional lines with Wang Dong, I think it's pretty good 6. Wang Dong, with memories before her death in Qiankun Wenqing Valley, she is sad but strong in the face of Yu Hao's departure, beating her skating leader once a day, and asking Mr. Mu to accept her as a disciple. Although he was surrendered by the Yakusan God later, he refused to give in and resisted, burning his own spiritual sea, and the Poseidon brand was gone. Later, in order to revitalize Teacher Xiaoya's Tang Sect, he went to learn blacksmithing, and then Shen Yin appeared. Wang Dong realized some forging skills after ten thousand years. I can only say that they are worthy of being siblings. 7. The Tang Buddha and the Supreme Elder of the Holy Spirit Sect performed normally, so there is no need to mention them.

This is the most reasonable fighting ability among the many Dou Er fics I have seen. Come on, author.

Just to mention one thing, the reborn God of Emotions actually wants a teacher to teach spiritual power cultivation. I don't know if you can accept it.

1. This book follows the timeline of Dou Er, mainly referring to the settings of Dou One, Dou Two, and Dou Three. 2. Rebirth, with memories. I won't brag or criticize Huo Yuhao, and try not to be OOC, but I will slowly improve Xiao Huo's character. 3. Single female protagonist, Haodong. Dong=Donger≠Tong. 4. On the other hand, Shrek focuses on improvement. Because Huo was reborn, it was impossible to turn against Shrek right away. In the early stage, he was more focused on improvement, but in the later stage... He just burned trees and that was it. 5. Try to be kind to the original characters, except those who want revenge. 6. A new book by a newbie, no writing style, no techniques, just feelings.

Well written! There is no word count for the Soul Master Competition. Other fan fiction is focused on breaking the competition every day and abusing the word count, but it is really clear to write their own stories. Quickly promote the main plot, I want to see burning trees, stir-frying and calling, eating Haodong candy, father and daughter Xiao smashing Lao Deng's gold coins, ascending to the gods in the Spirit Pagoda, and trampling the three dogs' long-term plan on the ground.

Little Huo Niang

The writing is very innovative, and it doesn't overstep the original characters. Wang Dongyuhao is a twin, it's just that Mr. Mu and the protagonist master know a lot, and I didn't see where to explain it.

Let's change the title of the book, Rebirth: I am a licking dog in Douluo. It doesn't matter if you are reincarnated and don't open a harem. I have to say "you are an idiot" in the introduction. I really can't stand it anymore. Where are you like Wang Qiuer? And Snow Emperor? Licking Wang Dong, I'm really drunk

After reading a few chapters, I just gave up. There are so many fans writing about Huo Yuhao. This one is the only one that adds a hundred-year soul ring to Huo Yuhao. It is also a thing like the Zhu Jing Ice Toad. How could it be more outrageous? Even the original Huo Yuhao did not add a hundred-year soul ring. The configuration here is not as good as the original.

The four-eyed silkworm moth and the goddess of light butterfly are just playthings in the spider web of the Man-Faced Demon

Catch up on the latest progress (Chapter 231) 24 hours a day.         ， Let's talk about the most special thing first: the writing style The author himself said, "It's just a new book by a newcomer, with no skills or writing style, it's all about emotion." I'm afraid there's no misunderstanding about technique or writing style. The writing style of this book, conservatively speaking, the lower limit is the level of Dou Er's original work, and the upper limit is the upper limit of the online articles I have read. Although there are occasional typos, wrong sentences or paragraphs that are not fluent, it is not important. As long as it does not affect reading, it is not a deduction. What is important is that there are too many bonus points. The first chapter shows remorse, and the situation is stunningly portrayed; The artistic conception of Haodong looking at each other from afar when meeting Mr. Mu for the first time; The eyes of ice and fire, a textbook-style simple drawing of lovers reunited after a long separation (although in fact, they could use more sugar); Huo Yuhao laughs at Hongchen's understanding of each other, a rare psychological portrayal in online articles (although it is a bit awkward), and the following "genius who always wins" and "genius who always loses" can't be more precise;       Haodong stops and walks in Shrek City, the classic among the classics, "looking sideways... Looking straight..." The blend of long shots and multiple angles of scenes is simply amazing to me;  In the Starry Forest, autumn leaves are flying in Jin Yang's ignorant and clear heart and in Yu Hao's clear but choked eyes; And in terms of narrative techniques, the echo between the end of the chapter of Moon and the beginning of the chapter of Jing Hongchen; the reversal of the master-disciple drama in the White Tiger Duke's Palace; the suspense of "what he said is not (true/false)" on the isolated island...  ...  Um, I suddenly found that there are fewer wonderful descriptions in the last few dozen chapters, but it can make me recall so many examples in an instant, which is infinite times more than most online articles. (It can be seen that the author's writing style is changing. In fact, it doesn't matter if the update is a little slower. People who are following the book hope to polish each scene as carefully as possible) While the description is exquisite, there are also appropriate jokes. It can also be seen that many writing techniques and plot structures have the shadow of classic Internet literature and Japanese comics. However, this is not a shortcoming. On the contrary, it allows familiar readers to get the artistic conception better, and unfamiliar readers will also be surprised. After all, it is a classic. Secondly, there are characters.        ：——，， What is a little bit unexpected is that the complaints and off-line are slightly heavier, which seems to be contrary to the underlying psychology of "regret for being fooled by fate all your life", but if you think about it carefully, laughing and scolding is not a kind of self-protection for a wounded soul (refer to the early stage of Tomb of Gods, Master Mohuo is at least more normal than Chen Nanchu Yu, and Mohuo seems to be a person's name). Letting Yuhao engage in abstraction from time to time can also increase readers' resonance. Wang Dong'er: Readers like Dong'er in the original work but hate Tang Wutong . The image of Dong'er in this book is better than that in the original work. It can even be said (especially when there were few appearances in the early stage) that Dong'er's image in the book has become a bit sacred and idealized. If the original Dong'er was just a green white moonlight, now Dong'er is simply a spotless snow mountain lotus, an independent utopia, a sacred fire that burns out the darkness, and an eternal blazing sun. It's so exaggerated, maybe I'm just adding to the drama, but it's very rare for people to have the space and desire to make things up. Other characters: The positive characters have basically been slightly optimized without being OOC, and the original seven monsters are more normal. It is worth mentioning that the grandfather-grandson/brother-sister relationship between Jing Xiaomeng is a highlight of the Sun and Moon chapter. The ultimate girl control behavior of laughing and blowing up (in the physical sense) is difficult to write in Japan. The sense of proportion is just right, which is the limit of non-orthopedics. The writing of Rui Shou is also very clever. Many of the descriptions of Qiu'er in the original work are attached to Hao Qiu's emotional line, which leads to a dilemma for fans: writing that Qiu'er likes Yu Hao will cause stomachache, but does not like Yu Hao and easily loses his personality. The author solved the problem very cleverly: let the auspicious beast return to its original nature and try to simulate another trajectory of her life. The Tower of Autumn is really artistic (why is the name Tower of Autumn so nice?). In short, the author has a good grasp of the characters. As for the plot, I won't go into details. The biggest advantage is that it doesn't imitate the plot of the original work. Most of the chapters are basically original. Although the plot arrangement is a bit immature, I personally think that this is in line with the feeling of Douluo Dalu itself (high emotional intelligence means that the plot of a fan is not inferior to the original work). As for the setting, Douluo's setting is originally that of a little girl who can be dressed up by anyone. I used to read Xingyue fanfic with my friend, and I didn't care much about the various settings he made online. After all, the novel puts the characters first. Again, the logic is no less than that of the original work. In a word, it's beautiful and I love watching it.

I can actually see the article about the heroine Shan Dong at the starting point. It's good. Keep it up.

I have seriously discovered a problem. Most of the current Peerless Tang Sect fan fiction is that I traveled through time and became Huo Yuhao. Huo Yuhao was reborn and returned from the God Realm, which is ridiculous. I feel that it would be boring if the main character was not written as Huo Yuhao. Originally, I only read some fan fiction. The original character is against the protagonist or directly makes the protagonist his younger brother or something. Now it is better to either write the original protagonist to be reborn, or directly time travel into the original protagonist, which is ridiculous. 80% Of the current Peerless Tang Sect fan fiction is time travel. Huo Yuhao's one has two levels, one is the self-created protagonist, and the other is the nanny Wen, it's so fucking outrageous

"Your idiot" I'm so embarrassed

Regarding the single heroine Wang Dong in this article, not taking the Shrek route, optimizing the character's personality, etc., The following five points are put forward: 1. Good-looking 2. Love watching 3. Those who don't like watching should go away 4. Fast updates 5. Hot updates

Among the many Xiaohuo fanfics I have read, this one is considered to be extremely excellent. It broadens the time and space lines of the Dou 2 period and makes the characters more fleshed out. It is not like the original work, which is completely a book about dog training by Tang Buddha. Other fanfics feel quite rushed. Then it doesn't pay attention to some details, but this book pays attention to a lot of details. Other fanfics are following the same old path, but it feels like this fanfic is to open up a way for Xiao Huo to create his own godhood. He is a child of luck, and there are so many opportunities, even opportunities outside the world. How is it possible? It's just a small first-level god, and it still needs to be passed down. San Shao will give more to the person whose surname is not Tang, and then give it to the person whose surname is Tang. The person surnamed Tang will call San Shao's ancestor's surname.

I came here because of my reputation and found out that the update was discontinued. The world is really cruel to me.

Please continue to update, I really like reading this book

Can you please update it again? Really nice

Memory shapes people! Can used rags be reused as long as they are washed and dried? The same goes for the soul. Remove the attached memories and experiences and you can reuse them in a clean state. After devouring Tang Xiaoqi, Wang Donger, and Wang Qiuer, in front of you is only the monster fused together, Tang Wutong! "Oh, what a strange reaction. Haven't you noticed? If the memory is restored, the current Wang Dong'er will be overwritten, and the existence will be eliminated. ... Isn't this the same as death? ──It is memory that constructs the appearance of a person." "No. No. Just say no. No. Yeah. Really not. It's obvious that it's not. …Does it comfort you?" Wang Qiu'er is just Wang Qiu'er, not someone's soul fragment, so it's just Wang Qiu'er!

In general, Xiaoqi, Wang Dong, Xiao Wangdong, Qiuer, and Tang Wutong are five independent consciousness bodies. Xiao Qi was already dead when he was torn into Wang Dong and Xiao Wang Dong, Qiu'er was already dead when Xiao Wang Dong took away his body, Wang Dong died when he was defeated in Qiankun Wenqing Valley, and both Wang Dong died at the same time when Wang Dong merged into Tang Wutong. Tang Wutong is just a puppet with the same soul origin as Xiao Qi, a new consciousness with Wang Dongqiu'er's memory, and the suture monster Tang Buddha.

When will you come back? Please, I really like your book.

It's been more than half a year and what needs to be done hasn't been done yet? Didn't I say I can't be a eunuch? The author

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Brothers, do you have any other recommendations? Don't be pretentious and be humble about Huo Yuhao.