Journey to the West: the Bandit's Expedition to the West

No, can the protagonist's mana be restored after it is consumed? It would be too disgusting if this setting was not possible. Think about the gods and Buddhas in the sky. Every time you take a shot, you have to consume mana and it cannot be restored. If you use it too much, won't you lose your realm and lifespan?

Write about modern style. I think you are quite suitable. The copy of Siheyuan you wrote is much higher than the copy of "Siheyuan: Eating and Drinking Men and Women" that I started with. I don't know how much higher it is. There are also copies of Wind Sound and Double Eyes. It can be seen that you write modern style. , Republic of China style, and modern horror style. I am very talented. I do not recommend continuing the Zhutian genre. Although I also like to watch Zhutian Liu, I know that if you continue to write fan fiction, it will fundamentally restrict you. You must know that copyrights such as unlimited flow fan fiction cannot be sold. This is a big problem. Author, you can study the decadent Xiaolong's experience of becoming a god. In the early days, he was very miserable when writing Infinite Flow. Later, he found a new path in a late-night bookstore that focused on urban horror style. His experience is worth learning from. Positioning is really important.

Why? This story is very ordinary. Why not write an original one? Something like The Spy Game is pretty good. The last book about espionage and feelings about family and country was very brilliant. Forget it, I have no intention of waking up someone who is pretending to sleep.

You are really not suitable for writing about extraordinary subjects, so give up. I've read two of your books. The first one was pirated, and the second one started from the Republic of China movies and ended up with more than half of the Mortals. I saw you wrote about Journey to the West and I didn't even read it. If you go back to the Infinite World, then I suggest you study the "Film and Television World Traveler" and most of the first half of your own previous book, try your best to maximize your ability, and finish as soon as you reach the transcendent level of foundation building or above. Or don't have extraordinary abilities, practice your ordinary human abilities in each world, and at most reach the level of martial arts like Dragon Snake or Tianlong. Although I don't spend much money on you, I think highly of you. But you are really not suitable as a superhero 🙂

It is recommended to use Journey to the West as the main world, and then add a little bit of Zhutianliu.

Many people have written about this topic, and I hope they can come up with something new.

There is no basic logic, a world of gods, Buddhas, immortals and saints. Tang Xuanzang was easily killed, and Liu Ding Liujia was always there to protect him. What's more important is that the protagonist actually wants to fake it! ! ? ? What is the underworld for? ?

I still feel that your writing is more modern and the level is more than one level higher.

. . . I feel bad, this book doesn't look like it will get good grades. Alienated fan fiction is just made up under the guise of IP, similar to Journey to the West to Conquer the Demons/Daughter's Kingdom. Although it is also Journey to the West, they are all stories made up by oneself. The author has no advantage in writing about struggle, no innate sense of involvement in fan fiction, no identification with the protagonist, no bond between the protagonist and the world, and no one knows what to expect.

The last book was terrible from the beginning as a mortal... And here comes this fairy tale type...

Love Apartment Why not write about it?

To be honest, many of the comments in the comment area are very pertinent. Pengpeng writes about the city, Jianghu in the Republic of China is really brilliant, and Zhutianliu is also very good, but now Zhutianliu is really poorly written. To be honest, I really hope to see the next Geng Liangchen.

Don't write extraordinary, low martial arts is enough. If you write a modern script, your results will be much better.

The theme of Journey to the West is both easy and difficult to write. It has no width and can only be shaped, but the length can be expanded infinitely.

Why don't you write about Zhutian? Is it because you earn enough money?

A book that has been a eunuch for almost two weeks is still recommended by the editor. Is the editor of Qidian so fishy?

Element 1: Tang Sanzang died at the beginning and was replaced by the protagonist, but Tang Sanzang himself was blessed by gods and Buddhas in the sky. He was a frightening and non-dangerous type but he died Element 2: Sun Wukong, the original disciple, became a hair or incarnation of Sun Wukong Element 3: Ao Guang, the original little white dragon, became a little white dragon The female dragon seems to be involved in some things between the West Sea and Heaven. Element 4: Along the way, the system rewards one of the three Buddhist scriptures. The protagonist is a mana, and there seems to be a foreshadowing Summary: Pengpeng has written a journey to the west story that is different from the past. In addition to fighting and killing, it also adds intrigue.

The fatal flaw of this book is that it is not exciting enough. The author is a bit of a literary youth, and the design of the book is lagging behind the times. It almost made me lose my luck.

Infinite World is very well written, especially the Republic of China and Siheyuan. Don't be too strong in martial arts. The difference in combat power system is too big. One day it will be thousands of years old, and then there will be a demon that is tens of thousands of years old. It's best not to read short stories like "The Tomb of the Gods" and "Shading the Sky".

Pack it up and get another one. Don't be afraid of being late for a good meal

It's best to start a new life. The more I write about it, the more I will pull it off.

As expected, the author's strengths and weaknesses have been discussed since the last book. He is good at writing about the Republic of China and Hong Kong Island, but his weakness is that he cannot write about the extraordinary. Let alone the extraordinary, martial arts writing is not very good. This is the level of Journey to the West. It is normal for the author to not be able to grasp it.

It's very well written. I love reading it. Is it true?

The author's previous book on the Ten Thieves of the Republic of China was perfect. How about writing a fairy tale 😭😭😭😭

Pengpeng, don't do it. If you can't, just send out the outline of the rest, or take the time to write a rough follow-up.

It's good to write about all the worlds, why do you feel like the new book is not good?

The previous book was very good. Why did you change the style? This book is not good-looking.

Is it the fourth book? Is your mentality so weak?