Eternally Traveling Through the Heavens

There are very few novels with good writing and plot these days, but this one is really good. But there are also a few poisonous points (the author may fill in the poisonous points later in the plot). The first is the method of time travel. When I stopped in the second world and ended up in the third world, I was blocked and almost got cut off. Although it may have something to do with the pitfalls of the system, it seems awkward now. No matter what the system wants to do, it must have basic concealment secrets and be able to do it. Moreover, the power level of each time it travels is higher than that of the protagonist. Without the aura, it will be 100% killed. It is not unusual to be able to travel. However, being able to travel so weakly is not that ants can fly, but that ants fly airplanes. . The second is the upgrade system. To be honest, it's a bit stinky and long. The more I write about it, the more I write about it. In fact, this cultivation system is either building foundations or golden elixirs to unify other things, or there is really no need to exist. Moreover, when there are many battles in the system, it seems difficult to write, and it is also difficult to write. . . The third is that sometimes the villain's strength (or a certain spell) is forcibly improved, and sometimes the protagonist is forcibly cheated, such as the rotten corpse curse in the three volumes and Yuan Tiangang's foundation-building cultivation. . . These are some personal opinions, and even with these poisonous points in my opinion, this is fairy grass. The plot is very good and perfectly fits the re-creation, and the writing is also very good. Worth a look.

I just want to complain about "Seventy-two Basic Leg Techniques and Boxing Intentions of Baguazhang". Forgive me for not knowing martial arts! Is this a palm, a leg or a punch? Is spitting a move or an experience (knowledge)? Is it the basics that lead to a small success, or is it possible to practice basic things to a small success?

The plot at the beginning is really vicious. Is this a popular way of writing? How many chapters do you have to jump to before you can enjoy it?

Maybe it's because I'm too addicted, but I actually finished reading it and can still read another book 🙂🙂🙂

After reading the first few chapters, I am not very willing to continue reading. Among the three treasures of essence, energy, and spirit, God is the most important, and it is also the most difficult to improve. What God improves is wisdom and understanding. It is almost impossible to improve through methods. If you have this opportunity, add it all to God. Wisdom can completely settle everything. Only wisdom is fundamental.

Everything else was good, except for the fact that Yang Ken could not say that he saw the protagonist's blood gushing out and the explosion during the fight with Zhang Yi.

Well, in 28 years, Song Ziwen became the Minister of Finance of the National Government. The National Government's monthly income was only 2 to 3 million yuan. The wealth of a wealthy gentleman in a remote county town was equivalent to the national income for half a year. According to today's understanding, intuitive conversion is equivalent to 4 trillion yuan (of course It can't be calculated like this, it just means that the number is very large) Doesn't this mean that just by confiscating the homes of all the county-level tycoons in the country (only the richest man in each county is counted), 16,000 tons of gold can be discounted, and 2,000 battleships can be purchased from the United States, filling all the five continents and seas

There is only one question... Don't be a eunuch (the author doesn't set a flag, generally those who dare to say that they are definitely not eunuchs are all eunuchs)

Morenew!

The writing is pretty good, the pig's feet don't say one thing and do another, and the plot is okay without any bad points. Why are you only at level one?

I have been reading the book for a few days and I just came across Chapter 123 and would like to make some comments. . In martial arts, can you downplay the levels as much as possible? Is it popular nowadays to gamify and hierarchize martial arts? Original text: [Below the first-class, don't come and die! ; Kill the second-rate peak person with one sword! ; No internal fluctuations in his body were felt. . . When did [first-rate] and [second-rate] change from adjectives to rank titles? Shouldn't there be different divisions in different worlds? In "The Master", Chen Shi is a first-class master; in "The Deer and the Cauldron", Chen Jinnan is a first-class master; in "The Legend of the Dragon", Xiao Feng is a first-class master; in "Journey to the West", Sun Wukong and Erlang Shen are first-rate masters. . . Shouldn't it be so divided? Shouldn't this routine, which allows you to tell the level at a glance and is divided into "peak, perfection, and half-step", to have gone bad a few years ago? Finally, I watched the first volume of Let the Bullets Fly, and my eyes really lit up. I felt that the author's writing was amazing (except for the place where the punch is sent, it is also a matter of level). . In the second volume, even if we don't mention the level issue (maybe it is the author's habit), compared to the first volume, there is really a big gap. You even have to rely on the brainless villain in ordinary novels (the master of the Dian Cang Shao clan) to cause plot conflicts. . . .

It was okay in the beginning, but I saw that Journey to the West was a little bit toxic, the world setting was terrible, and the reaction was that it was always at odds with Buddhism, and a minor cultivator who had just entered the gate of cultivation had an affair with Guanyin. More and more Long Aotian

I'm jumping to watch Xian Ni. The protagonist wants to kill Wang Lin and get the treasure. I'm afraid it's not that I haven't finished watching Xian Ni and I don't know that the world might be Wang Lin's dream.

Don't read this kind of book, life is miserable from the beginning, you are looked down upon by others wherever you go, a single person can hurt the protagonist, there are betrayals everywhere, is it just for the sake of being angry?

Please make up for the updates you owe! !

In fact, I want to maintain the style of the first 88 chapters from now on. It will definitely become a god. It is the style of Jiang's movies, quick and logical with no reaction time.

This volume makes me feel like Sun Tzu, and I feel suffocated after reading it. It is far from as well written as the first volume. When writing about martial arts, it is more fluent, and it is also about grudges and grudges that are written more happily. I don't want to write about the Westward Journey in a big way now, step by step, plan carefully, and always be suppressed by Buddhism. Anyone who watches it will feel frustrated 50% to 60% of the time, which will affect your performance. . Brother, let's finish this volume quickly! !

In the last few chapters, don't you think the IQ of the emperor, queen, and civil and military officials is a bit low? It's understandable that the queen was hit by a spell (the IQ of the faceless prince who cast the spell was also quite low), but the emperor and all the civil and military officials, especially the emperor, didn't think they were a bit mentally retarded? Before, he punched the queen and said that the queen was fake. The emperor and all the civil and military officials did not believe it. The emperor's eyes were gloomy. . Then reverse it and show off. Immediately afterwards, before taking a breath, he said that the queen could be saved. The civil and military officials didn't believe it. The emperor still didn't accept the fact and ordered the imperial doctor to save her. The main character said that she could be saved. The emperor immediately accepted the fact, but he didn't believe it and his eyes were gloomy. There will definitely be another reversal after that. Aren't you tired? Doesn't it seem that the emperor and the civil and military officials are too weak-minded? And in that situation, the emperor should have been the person least likely to accept the facts, right? Not to mention that the emperor himself still believes in gods and ghosts, this world still has magical powers and sages. Even if it is a world where magical powers and spells do not exist, the emperor cannot be like this in this situation, right? Moreover, the front foot does not accept the facts, but the back foot immediately accepts the facts as soon as the protagonist opens his mouth, and then questions the protagonist again. . Is this kind of show-off and slap-in-the-face plot a bit too deliberate? It also appeared twice in a row, without a few sentences between it. . .

There is actually a heroine, and she is a heroine who only acts coquettishly and does not work hard to practice. The protagonist gives her all the good things.

The squires during the Republic of China were a joke. During the Republic of China, warlords were the largest, and having guns was more important than having money. If at the end of the Qing Dynasty I still believed that the gentry was still capable, but in the Republic of China they were no longer so capable. The Republic of China was a chaotic time, with warlords at war.

Don't read the comments and chapter reviews when reading this book. Many pretentious people are talking here. This is a novel, divorced from reality, but a bunch of people insist on using their own settings to make noises, as if they are martial arts masters. Compared with this book, the "Martial Arts Horse Master" in those comments is the real poison. For those of you who want to read it, I would like to advise you to try reading the first few chapters and be patient. If it suits your taste, continue reading. If not, just delay for a few minutes. But please don't believe the Shennong in the comment section. I was almost led astray by them.

I didn't watch it earlier. I jumped directly to Xian Ni. Come on, come on. Author, I'll ask you how you got through the late stage of Aspirations of Transforming Gods. You dare to compete with Hongmeng before you even reach the third step. Hongmeng should at least be on the fourth step. How can another Dou Emperor be the third step? Your power system is in a mess. You can write whatever you want.

The introduction makes people speechless. Since there is a world view of gods and demons in the back, why are the first few worlds ordinary worlds? What benefits does the ordinary world of the world of gods and demons have for the protagonist? I have never understood the ideas of this type of author. When the gods and demons come out, it is better for newcomers to go to some low-level supernatural planes, such as the ghost mission hall, exorcism police, etc. To learn some Taoism and lay the groundwork. The world of high martial arts starts from low martial arts. Movies and TV series for ordinary people are completely meaningless.

Both Douhuang Shilang and Longmen Inn are well written.

Mr. Huang has three clones. He is really worthy of being the one who competes with Governor Liu. One of his legs is evenly matched with Governor Liu's whole body. He even dared to steal his money, and he managed to survive like this for 5 years. In the end, he escaped with the help of the bandits. If it weren't for the fact that he had no one and no guns, he would have become a great warlord in history if he was so smart, which is what the protagonist reached in the end.

Unlimited articles without martial arts have more than 1,800 to 2,000 comments, and there are still more than 10,000. I like to watch Zhutianwen and pure martial arts, and it has received hundreds of comments. Why do other people like to watch the city? It's boring.

Chapter 400, and still being thought of as scheming and bullying like an ant. Funny... Anyone can count you as a trash time traveler.

Later, it was even more rubbish and the realm was even more chaotic... The first time I went to Xian Ni, the immortal felt that the monk who transformed into gods was a threat to him.

You can check out the first copy! It is not recommended to read other copies!

. . . I feel like there are so many blackmails. What's going on? I didn't read the content and it was just black.