The End of the World Is Coming: I Can Extract Talent Entries

The poison points are given at the beginning, and the girl will die without the protagonist. Then the protagonist even shares 64% with her, completely failing to see the role of the girl. If you want to have a harem, just say no. At the end of the day, it's up to you whether you want to or not, and you're still cultivating a relationship. Personally, I always feel that most doomsday male protagonists are hypocritical.

I really can't accept that talent fragments can be used by others.

At the beginning, three days of hiding without eating or drinking was too long, and I couldn't sleep well. My eyes were bloodshot. A normal person could hardly walk unsteadily. If I moved my body even a little, I would see stars in my eyes. I couldn't feel energetic at all. Isn't a few hours enough to calm down and think?

As a Shennong, I rarely say this kind of thing, brother, come into the factory. As usual, I should talk about the poisonous points, but your novels are basically full of poison.

No, buddy, we have found a base, why don't we develop quickly? How about adding more after killing? Can I keep these points to give birth to cubs or what? You were fucking ambushed by King 💩, why don't you add some points? Do you want to save it for the next life?

After three days and three nights without eating or drinking, you still remain in a highly tense state. As a result, if you go out to kill zombies, you are considered in good health if you can stand up.

They're all cheated, and their subordinates are still dying. I'm speechless.

Generally speaking, I can read it, but I always felt that it turned into a harem story before the 100th chapter. At the 12th chapter, I didn't fully understand my talent. As soon as I got a green level, I started describing ambiguous scenes. How hungry I am. Moreover, the talent is to plunder the talent after killing the target. It is not stated whether ordinary people have it. They can also strengthen the fragments obtained by their own talent to others. In this case, they will all be killed by the protagonist in the future, and they will all be supported by the protagonist. It is just a nanny.

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In a path, the superior can grant abilities to the subordinates

I can see the newcomers, so I think it's best to change the first ten chapters, which are mainly about the interaction with the two girls, and the process of "trust" in forming a team. The writing is similar to that of the two NPCs. There is nothing worth leaving an impression on, no appearance, personality, family background, etc. For example, it's good to occasionally use "the girl with two ponytails" to refer to the character. And the protagonist is also very featureless, a typical strong monster, not like a living person, like a character possessed by the player, with no favorite personality or specialties, and can't speak much, just like those early RPG team-up online games that don't know how to organize language. Come on, author

1. Generally speaking, if you like this kind of movie, you will watch the killing and killing, so the harem plot will be reduced. 2. Talents are a bit messy, and physical fitness can be integrated. Some miscellaneous abilities, I hope they can be integrated in the future. Also, you no longer mark the talent color. Each level must have a rough combat strength standard, and then stack up multiple talents to fight across levels. 3. There is also the issue of other people's strength. Add other channels through which you can become stronger. Otherwise, your teammates will rely on the protagonist to feed them fragments, and the enemies will be all monsters and no humans anymore. For example, if you expand your fruit, it will be a way to enhance it. If you add some other things, it will be almost the same.

A bit like the novels of previous years, the routine youdianlao

The plot and setting are basically at a normal level, but the details and logic are contradictory (I don't know where I moved the story frame from, and I filled in the details myself. I understand them all, and I can't say too much) A novice's writing practice (novices recommend fanfics or infinite novels) (Writing articles is not about rushing to progress. Even if you learn from it, at least choose one with better logic)

Sure enough, a big gift of talent fragments appeared!

Why are all the people dying? It's not necessary. There is no need for the author to write all his subordinates to death in order to strengthen the protagonist. What else is there to do?

Come on! It looks good so far. I like to see people hugging each other to keep warm. A person's energy is limited.

Two chapters and one monster, the rhythm is a bit dense, personal feeling

You zombie king, please end it quickly, Momojiji. Replace with the next one. No matter how perverted you are, can you express your opinion like the protagonist?

Has Zhujiao really never seen a woman? Still a modern person? When I see a girl, I want to lick her

You made a common-sense mistake at the beginning, squatting for three days without eating or drinking. Are you funny? There are still three days left and your flesh and blood are still warm?

Has the author never seen a woman in real life?

"Who is the most vicious race in the world?" In the noisy tavern that was dark and smelled of sweat, people asked the bard curiously. "The Rat Man deserves it." The bard took a sip of the inferior ale beer and began to play and sing slowly: " In the desolate and dark underground, there is an endless unknown, where there is a brilliant green light, and bells ring from time to time. >The towering black tower, the sacred pendulum blooms. It emits a dark light, which makes the evil and cruel bloom. This group of morally nihilistic mutant rats with advanced technology. They are ugly, evil, and spread the plague everywhere. They are also greedy for money and paranoid. They are more crazy and violent than Chaos. They are more willing to backstab and be ungrateful than the high spirits. And he was so reckless that he flew up." After the chant, the bard ended with an aria: "This is the rat man, the evil fool who has been wandering in the parasitic world for thousands of years and still cannot see the light." "Yes, Yes!" The crowd echoed loudly. At this moment, thirteen bells rang outside, and a hoarse voice rang in the ears of everyone in the tavern: "May the Great Horned Rat walk among us!" "Yes, Yes!" Groups of gray-furred rats with scarlet eyes and rotten rodents pounced on everyone in the tavern. "As for you, stupid bard, violating the "Anti-Ratman Awareness Act" of the Sigma Empire, what are you planning?" A ratman wearing pointed shoes, holding a civilized staff, and wearing a tall hat stepped over the flesh and blood residue on the ground and pointed at the guy hiding on the tavern counter and asked. "Don't get me wrong, I'm just a book promoter. The protagonist is not a rat man. This is just an advertisement." The bard explained.

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