Full-Time Hunter: My Life-Saving Ability Is a Bit Strong

I don't know how to describe it. There seems to be nothing wrong with the main plot, and there is nothing toxic about the setting. It's just that the dialogue between the characters seems very childish and does not match the plot direction at all.

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Reading ability

Property Map

To be honest, it's very strange. It lacks a lot of excess and is inexplicable.

I feel that it is not as good as Norbu's spatial ability. Is the protagonist's ability still under development? There is no name for the telekinesis ability yet. The Goblin copy is a bit ordinary. It's a bit of a king. It's annoying to be called. According to the classification, it should be Warcraft. I can do this alone. I still kill them all the way. I don't know whether to say he is weak or strong. Also, according to Warcraft, if there is no reproductive isolation, it will and still has such a rough reproduction method. If you find the right one, you will be destroyed. Also, my favorite is the Ant King Chapter 🙂

I hope I won't make the same mistakes as other fans. Let me put up a picture first

Hunters, support first and follow new ones more often.

Thinking ability

I'm here to ask if there are any oaths and restrictions, and whether the abilities can be relatively balanced.

The essence of Hunter is a wonderful adventure of exploring the world, but most of the fan novels are not on point at all. The most common ones are One Piece fans. It is quite surprising to see that the introduction of your novel is so consistent with Hunter.

The protagonist drawn by AI

Can you use li instead of ? Wouldn't it be uncomfortable for you to read it? Is it still a local dialect?

Could this be more than 200,000 words?

The space ability belongs to the release system, and the protagonist's system has been changed to the release system. I would like to say sorry to the friends who have seen it before.

I don't understand, so I can't comment normally?

Fan fantasy novels

It's good to see that it's a bit hard to find fellow hunters.

The Ant King Chapter is almost over, and now comes the Secret Realm Chapter. The most important thing in the Hunter World is adventure, seeing things you have never seen before. Then I encountered all kinds of weird things and all kinds of magical abilities. Because there is no system, many people no longer have much patience to read articles. But there are still dozens of people following it, which is a bit of comfort.

What is the practice of effectively utilizing the second element if it is not 100%?

This book seems to be a eunuch. To put it on the shelf, I have to write more than 90,000 words, which is very troublesome after it is published. Opened at this time, it is a bit similar to Killer Queen, but the writing, plot, and popularity are lower than Killer Queen. It can be seen that the upper limit is basically locked. Secondly, there may not be much plot in the follow-up, and the election chapter may not be grasped, let alone Kajin and the Dark Continent. My personal suggestion is that it will be better if you practice hard, integrate a good setting, and improve your writing style. It emphasizes the exploration of secret realms, but the more it is written, the more it deviates from the hunter setting and plot, and it is difficult to leave a deep impression on readers in terms of writing and emotion. It is doomed to eventually fall into the street. Because there are too many superior substitutes for this kind of writing, people can definitely read a copy of the book Thriller Paradise, or other hunters, and there is no need to read such an ordinary secret realm.

It feels a bit too watery Come on, author

Many authors have the same problem no matter how many years they have been writing books. In the first act, they have to arrange a life and death crisis for the protagonist, and then let the protagonist turn the tide, and at the same time tell the protagonist's current situation, personality and future arrangements. When I was writing compositions in elementary school, my teacher told me to highlight the core contradiction to enhance the story and appeal. How to highlight it? Besides amomum villosum, what else? It's too witty... I really don't recommend writing Amomum villosum in the first act

A very good hunter, the time is a bit behind, but it doesn't delay it. Looking forward to better plots in the future.

The protagonist, Yu. Nian main system; release system Nian ability: Space controller The abilities currently developed by the space controller include space engraving, space body addition, space power, space wave, tearing fist... Space Marking, use Condensation Marking to create a mark that allows you to move in space. The ability of space addition and body transformation is the ability to transform Qi into space to cover the body, allowing one's body to be hidden in space. The power of space, the strengthening ability of the space controller, can convert the space added to the body into the power of space, and can launch various powerful attacks with space attributes. The space wave release ability is an attack that condenses qi into the fist and then releases it. The attack strength is calculated by the amount of qi and its enhancement. Tearing Fist, a strengthening attack condensed with the power of space, an attack that can tear the opponent's Qi and cause real damage. It is extremely powerful...

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