
Forbidden Information: Ember Demon Fairy Dust
禁忌情报:烬魔仙尘
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 659k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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6Fans
265Chapters
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The writing is good, but there are many typos and omissions. Unfortunately, it is a system flow and the plot is very abstract. In the Demon Sect, a handyman disciple slandered the protagonist and an inner disciple for stealing a bellyband, and the protagonist was caught and imprisoned by someone similar to law enforcement?
Let the author write whatever he wants, don't worry about the plot, just correct the typos and sentence structure.
Apathy
After reading forty or fifty chapters, I thought it would be more poisonous. The first and most serious thing that affects the reading experience is that there are too many typos. There are typos in almost every chapter. There is even a chapter where the names of Hua Wuqing and Yuan Xin are reversed. There are also missing words in Goldfinger's information. I don't know if that's intentional. I really can't understand it, it's very confusing The second part has a somewhat inexplicable plot, and some of the descriptions are also very inexplicable, and it looks really tiring. When I first encountered the plot of Hua Wuqing, I didn't think much about it at first. I thought I could barely understand it. But the more I watched it, the more wrong it became. Each person at least turned into a god and the other an ant. I didn't kill him if he offended me. He saved the protagonist later on. There is also the same thing as saving lives at the beginning. Drinking blood can be considered life-saving. I feel like it's me who should save my life, my God, I'm watching this in the middle of the night. The third one contains too many vulgar and borderline descriptions. There are almost every chapter, and there are even many in each chapter. I can't understand a man, so can't I just click through the plot normally? A little is fine, but too much may not be good for your senses. It's like you don't have much description of a small plot, but there are paragraphs of blunt and vulgar descriptions, which I just can't stand. Fourthly, I don't know how the author's Chinese is. Anyway, many of the sentences he wrote are not fluent, and some sentences are too long and contain ambiguities and grammatical errors.