Journey to the West: Little White Dragon's Self-Redemption

The book is indeed well written. Even the supporting characters in the article are not naive, and there is no problem in promoting the plot. I also like Journey to the West very much But I still have to talk about the problem of the protagonist The protagonist portrayed by the author is actually more like an aborigine who has read Journey to the West, rather than a modern person who has traveled through time In fact, the author deliberately lowered the protagonist's IQ in some scenes in order to promote the plot. If you bring into the thinking of a normal person who has received modern education, the protagonist should have realized early on that Journey to the West is a trap. He can only escape by trying his best to become stronger. The way to become stronger is not only limited to practicing exercises, but also magic weapons, fighting skills, various secret skills and spiritual treasures, and connections. You are the third prince of the Dragon Palace. There are many magic weapons, armors and armors in the Dragon Palace's treasury. Why don't you take one? Even Monkey Sun knows that when he returns from his studies, he asks the Dragon Palace of the Four Seas for a golden cudgel and armor. Okay, even if you are practicing the dragon body fighting style, I have never seen you practice in the Dragon Palace The protagonist gives me the impression that he has the mentality of a 17 or 18-year-old boy who has a sincere heart and is ignorant of the world, rather than a mature time traveler in his twenties and thirties who understands how to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and make use of all available resources around him. Otherwise, how could we end up in a situation where we would be kicked out of the house directly? The smarter protagonist transferred the resources when he heard Ao Xin's small report about going to heaven to be executed When you sneaked into the treasure house later, you saw the innate spirit treasure. You all know that you can temper your body and refine your spirit. Even if you don't use it for yourself, you can steal it and beat people. If it doesn't work, you can exchange it with others for resources You are obviously the third prince of Long Dynasty and a time traveler. Now you are living in poverty and can only rely on experts to use you as a chess piece to obtain resources Even when you were in a transcendent status as the third prince, you didn't even think about going through it. Find channels to understand all the cultivation methods clearly at the first time. There is no clear plan for the future. Every time, "If I am xxx, then a few hundred years later, I still can't be xxx?" If you don't work steadily in the early stage and find a way to squeeze out all your potential, you will be treated as a pawn and then be promoted step by step. This is not what time-travelers do, this is what natives do It is true I also like the protagonist's deficit heart, but he can't be stupid I think it's not that readers dislike you for overestimating the protagonist's strength, but that you made the protagonist too stupid

If you want to put it aside now, it will definitely be difficult to say. Anyway, in ancient times, he must die, not because of the matter of burning the pearl (I don't know if this pearl was given by the Jade Emperor, there is a big difference between it and not) But no matter what the origin of the pearl, whether Little White Dragon dies or not has nothing to do with this. The reason why Little White Dragon must die is that his biological father accused him of disobedience🤔 Until now, unfilial piety seems to be just a civil dispute, and education and criticism strictly imposes the obligation of children to support them. In ancient times, disobedience was a heinous crime. Disregarding conspiracy theories (I don't like conspiracy theories) if Guanyin Bodhisattva hadn't rescued Little White Dragon through mercy and intercession, Little White Dragon would have committed a capital crime from the moment Ao Run told him about Little White Dragon's disobedience.

I went to Xiaobailong and there was no golden finger.

Because the original Halloween Princess has nothing to do with Little White Dragon, it is a forced addition. The innocent little white dragon was tricked by his father

Little White Horse

I can't understand what I want to express

It seems that not much has changed, so what is the meaning of time travel?

I'm confused, these dragon kings have no trump card! , You say you believe it or not, I don't believe it

It would be a bit too embarrassing to break off the engagement in the early stage!

Some readers asked CodeZijun, will he become a white horse in the end? Please believe Mr. Code, how can I let my lovely readers take the place of the horse? There are also book titles, originally called "Journey to the West: Lord of the Dragon Clan" and "The Legend of White Dragon", but these two titles were not greatly adopted by my beloved editor. However! 😏 As long as readers highly recommend it, I will try my best to change it back. Finally! Thanks for reading.

The author writes well and speeds up the update

Well written! The reading was very smooth, the IQ is very online, the plot is very close to the original work, no bragging, no conjecture, no system, no nonsense! Very good!

Also, don't write about the relationship between father and son in such a depressing way. The novel is for entertainment and relaxation.

Halloween Dragon

Jade Dragon Prince

Not bad, but the combat power is not improved fast enough.

After watching it for a long time, I didn't understand the plot. Let's talk about The Riddler. The plot is a bit dull. But it looks good too

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The writing is messy, I went through 20 chapters and got nothing done.

Some places seem a bit unreasonable. The author will give reasonable explanations later. Readers, please don't worry. Please vote. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you.

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Looks good, updates quickly, updates quickly.

Without your own ideas, everything is empty before and after, without any substantial content.

So why do we have to follow the plot of the TV series when we write novels, and do we offend ourselves? Originally, it was said that Xiao Bailong disobeyed his old dragon and then sued heaven. Wouldn't it be better to write the protagonist as a filial piety to make the old dragon happy?