A Guide to the Late Han

Starting with the Yellow Turbans is practically hellish, destined to make enemies of almost every famous figure from the Three Kingdoms period. In the early to mid-game, you'll likely find few scholars joining you, let alone powerful generals. Nobody likes the label of "bandit." Perhaps the water bandit Gan Ning is a possibility. Without the support of scholars, resources will be scarce; you'll either have to resort to raiding or a farming strategy.

Well, the writing is good, but the protagonist's character is too perfect, almost effortlessly so. There's a lack of detail, and it doesn't quite capture the reader's enjoyment. The writing feels contrived, just a series of events rushed through. It feels like it's missing something compared to the works of the top authors in July's new anime series, though I can't quite put my finger on it. Unfortunately, my vocabulary is limited.

Well, the Yellow Turban Rebellion is unlikely to succeed. They should plan their escape route early. I thought they'd reported it directly to the court after killing Tang Zhou at the start.

The soldiers under the protagonist's command are too weak in combat and need to be streamlined. Using veterans of the Yellow Turban Rebellion and prisoners of war from the Han army, along with equipment and food seized from powerful clans, they trained a force of three thousand elite soldiers through continuous warfare.

This novel could easily reach 5 million words; it feels like it could become a masterpiece right now. Keep it up, author!