You Told Me to Enjoy the Singing Girls, but You Became a Demoness!

Female channel: I will use tricks and plots to eliminate all competitors Male channel: No, buddy, don't you know what my cultivation is?

No, buddy, it's okay to massacre the city if you have nothing to do. Why are you massacring the people? What does the common people have to do with you? Don't tell me that destiny has anything to do with the common people. Your plot is pure and unnatural. You don't care about the Northern Barbarian royal family. You don't care about the Southern Liang family. You attack the common people. What were you thinking when you wrote this?

The protagonist is written very naively, ignoring the suffering in this building. The protagonist who has not experienced betrayal and lies cannot empathize with it, and the mentality of the protagonist who has experienced growth is not easy to write.

Now that the protagonist has broken through to the divine realm, he still plays conspiracy tactics? - One person can directly kill all the high-ranking officials of the Northern Barbarians and Southern Liang. You have to write this kind of silly war drama, just like playing house Master The horn is like a hydrogen bomb that can be used indefinitely. When other countries don't have nuclear weapons, how about a fight? If you want to write about war, don't write about a protagonist who is so strong. If the protagonist is so strong, writing about this kind of war seems very brainless. The God of War alone can make the Northern Barbarians afraid to go south. What about you, Jiang Jianxian? It's simply unreasonable. You already have hydrogen bombs. You have to let 100,000 soldiers go to war. What a retard! If you are kind and don't control troops, you are retarded in commanding soldiers, right? You can kill whoever you want in your divine realm, and you can take back Liangzhou City alone. If you don't want it, what's the point of letting ordinary soldiers fight against the Northern Barbarians? Is there any reason not to take action? The protagonist is becoming more and more like a villain. In order to show off that he has a strategy, he lets ordinary people fight and die. I really can't stand it.

The new author reports and briefly talks about the basic situation of this book. First of all, this book is absolutely not about marriage. As for whether it is just a hundred... Don't ask, it's just about the relationship between besties, and it will definitely not admit that there is a love factor. So don't worry about this, the point is the plot! Well, that's all I can think of for now, I'll talk about what I think about later.

Create an important female supporting character at the beginning, and then quickly write it to death. Don't do it. I feel that this way of writing is really unacceptable.

The protagonist is like an adult beating a child. She can easily win but has to use her poor IQ to play the dark crawling game.

I haven't read it yet, but I'm already starting to get upset when I see the comment section.

If you have time to teach readers how to read, it is better to improve yourself. Even if you don't improve yourself, you still have to be smart. As an author, you cannot be omnipotent, but you should make use of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. Don't do things you are not good at. For example, if you are not a cyber strategist, don't write about military affairs. Jump as much as you can. The last dozens of chapters have rubbed readers' IQ. The nine-year compulsory education has slipped through the net. The author must have memorized his thoughts and morals by rote when he was in school, right?

What's the use of writing so many conspiracies? There's no benefit at all except making people look unhappy. It's better to kill them directly and decisively. How can the conspiracies be stronger than the protagonist?