The Leader of Hongmen Fought Through the Late Qing Dynasty

Today's martial arts circles in the Internet literary circle are looking for fun. The pace should be fast, like a beer barbecue, which is a catharsis after a tiring day. The old-school martial arts is like a pot of warm wine, which needs to be sipped slowly with fennel beans. Martial arts and martial arts are based on chivalry. It can be a Confucian, a Taoist, or a Buddhist. There is no system without plug-ins. Walking around the world as a hero is a microcosm of an era. This novel has a compact structure and a detailed description of the historical background. Worth reading.

It is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it heartily. I feel that the publicity is not enough. If I keep writing, my results will definitely be better.

How can you be a master without a gun?

1 Archery: Archery in the Ming and Qing Dynasties is divided into Ouchi and Weishuo (green camp and non-Beijing bannermen) The Ouchi line pays attention to driving in a straight line before and after opening the bow, and its method requirements are in line with modern The principle of accurate shooting is the same. The non-large back elbow joint is dropped, and the hand position is close to the breast. Qi Jiguang calls it "breast touching" in his works. This technique is also described in detail in the Qing Dynasty archery book "Guide Che on Examination and Shooting Techniques in the Examination Field". The two pictures below can be compared The one with chainmail in the two pictures above was taught by the archery master in the inner court, and the one with dropped elbows circled in the picture below is the method recorded in the shooting guide in the examination room.

This is my opinion as a reader of online articles for many years. The author should take a casual look at it. The first is the system problem. The author tends to write realistic ancient martial arts, but this also means that the power cannot be attributed to oneself. This conflicts with the sense of satisfaction that most online readers pursue. The second point is the issue of dynasties. In the late Qing Dynasty, it was really not satisfying to use ancient martial arts to tell the truth. At that time, foreign countries even had machine guns. If you don't have guns, you are not considered a great master! If you were writing before the early Ming Dynasty, when everyone was a cold weapon, ancient martial arts heroes could also give people a sense of satisfaction. The last point is the issue of rebellion. They all say that rebellion is necessary, but the subject of hegemony is in great conflict with the martial arts that the author wants to write. There is no chivalry in fighting for hegemony, and no matter how high the martial arts is, it cannot produce food. The easiest and most refreshing thing for modern people to write about in ancient times in the online literary circle is to develop science and technology. If they want to rebel, whether there is food, the barrel of a gun is the king.

The writing is okay, but the style is too old-fashioned. Not suitable for web writing

Who is the protagonist? Why can't you understand?

It's well written, but it feels like I was born at the wrong time.

Is the first protagonist a time traveler? The second protagonist is a swordsman again? The third author's writing is a bit mysterious.

In the clouds and mist, the book is cool. If it's not cool, I'll eat it.

As for the traditional writing method, I actually recommend that you read Ye Yu Piao Deng's novels. His early works are easier to accept and have a feeling. The traditional writing method is difficult to survive in online literature.

The force is too low. Not as powerful as the dragon and snake. Force is too ineffective in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty, and the protagonist's efforts to bribe those masters are of little use.

The name is chosen like Shuangwen, click on the first few chapters, it has the flavor of traditional martial arts. Although it has a cool name, it actually has a slow pace.

The incisions are really messed up. I can't understand them at all and there is no explanation. I have to read them every time I see a Hongmen person. Furthermore, the modern thinking of the protagonist is not obvious, and the sense of immersion is too poor. When I read the first few chapters, I thought you were an indigenous protagonist. Later, it was slightly reflected but not obvious. However, the fighting scenes are exciting, but they just don't arouse the sense of expectation. At the end of the Qing Dynasty, ideological changes were still needed, and the four peoples were equal before technology could be developed. Writing about the industrial revolution was the general trend. It is really meaningless to write about a lot of chaos, because the ending is already doomed. Your sense of expectation is full of either ancient times or modern times.

The author should actually write about historical time travel, which is better than martial arts!

Why can't I see it? I can't bring it in.

You dare to call yourself a master without using a gun. Only if you have high martial arts skills and are equipped with a gun can you be considered a master. Traditional martial arts can't be faster than bullets several times the speed of sound. What's more, a gun is also a magic weapon that combines gold and fire, which is in line with the traditional five elements magic weapon.

The beginning is not good, I can't understand it, who is the protagonist, what is the background, and what is it going to do? Moreover, explaining a long paragraph greatly affects the reading experience. Keep the description concise and focus on the key points. The novel is about the plot of the characters, not about your writing skills.

What's going on with the author during this time? Why not update it? Have you received a malicious complaint?

The author's writing is really good. This kind of book with a theme, content, and good writing style is becoming increasingly rare. I hope the starting point can be recommended more.

The writing is very good. Many characters in online articles nowadays are unimpressive and make people unable to remember their names. In fact, the characters do not have their own personalities, but become appendages of the system and plug-ins. When describing characters, many authors wish to mention them briefly, but they describe the system in detail. As a result, people only recognize the system but not the people. In fact, characters are the core of the novel. I am a person who can delete a large plot for the sake of characters, so I hope that the author must write out the personality of his own characters.

See latest chapter 114. After it was put on the shelves, I found that it is not as good as the previous one I don't know why. Which one attracts me more, the martial arts route or the hegemony and founding route?

Why hasn't it been updated in the past few days? Could it be that someone made a malicious complaint?

No update for nine days! Is this cut? ? ?

There is always bright energy, dark energy and so on, which are not as good as the inner strength and true energy.

Author, are you still there? Just squeak while you're still there...

It's really good to write! But it doesn't look good!