I Can Go Back and Forth to the World of Red Mansions

I can't even count the writing as a novice, and I can't bring myself to think of it at all. The conversation with Xue Baochai was really eye-catching. He saved a woman on the road and opened his mouth to start talking awkwardly. He was so greasy! There is no reasonable arrangement in modern times! As a medical college student receiving compulsory education, the first thing you think of when killing people is swords and crossbows? What about modern medicines? Using a little more brains is a method that ancient people couldn't detect! The same is true in the world of Red Mansions. Being a businessman has no foundation at all. The one who kills you is the one who makes so much profit. If you use a mirror to go to Ahmei or other places to make AK revolvers or bombs, I will consider you smart! In modern education, everything you learned in the past was dragon slaying! You have no ability to protect yourself at all. It's up to you to be embarrassed. It's really hard to see that there are three bedrooms and one living room! If you don't have some writing skills, don't write about Red Mansions! But this is the first time I saw the cross between the two worlds in the Red Mansion at the starting point!

The defense of ethics and education is bloody. The normal outcome of the first chapter is that you are killed and all the maids and servants who know about it are executed. Don't doubt whether the Wang family has this strength.

I came here with the intention of watching the theme of Red Mansion, but in the end I was trying to sell it like a sheep. It was just a story about Red Mansion. Most of them were original, and they were clichéd originals with clichéd ancient plots.

The protagonist is an 18-year-old innocent child... You have no awesome cheats, no family, no force of your own, do you think you are Long Aotian? The consequences of treating ancient people as fools is that you will not survive a few chapters. Those with social experience and brains will be shocked after reading a few chapters. Students in school can read it as a pastime...

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good. I take a lot of things for granted, I don't understand that era, and I don't understand the operating rules of ancient society. It's just a slap on the head and a random write-up.

I am a descendant of the future. I was a guest in the Red Mansions occasionally, and when I played Jin Chai in Rong Ning Mansion, they all said that I was too crazy to talk about dreams. Winds and clouds suddenly change many times, gathering and dispersing is like nothing. I know the cause and effect in the illusory world. When I look at the world, I can turn everything around.

It's time to cut it, eunuch! ! ! ! ! The ideas are fresh and novel! The writing and plot are completely confusing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Hair, clothing, language, are you sure that what they saw in the first chapter was not a monk suddenly appearing in strange clothes, but a young man? That's it, a halo of wisdom.

After reading a few chapters, I can say that the creativity is novel and the writing style is too naive. Appearing out of thin air in someone else's bathtub, with a maid guarding the outside of the bathroom. There were so many people in the house in broad daylight, and there were servants in the outer house, but no one asked how the protagonist came. It seemed that appearing out of thin air was a normal thing. In the same way, the protagonist is wet and waiting in the room. When no one is around, he returns to reality and changes into a set of dry clothes. Not to mention whether the clothes have been changed or not, the clothes are all dry after a while. The Xue family is still accustomed to it and does not seek to be logical. At least I can't stand it.

The first chapter is really unbearable, and I still use the same old routine from ten years ago to travel through time into someone else's bathtub. It's so embarrassing.

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that there are many problems. For example, the Jia family in Golden Chapter 3 has full-length mirrors, but in the novel, the small mirror is just the top one, etc., So many things are taken for granted.

It's just a piece of writing that doesn't show any logic at all. But if it shows up with a little bit of logic, it will be beaten to death in the third chapter.

After reading the opening paragraph of the first chapter, Xue Baochai appeared in the bathtub. What did the author think? Even if the Xue family is in decline, it is still a big family. Are you not seeking death by doing this? Will you be given a chance to speak? I'm talking about what's wrong with you going back and forth. If you want to catch up with Xue Baochai, there aren't many chances.

As expected of the limited exemption, the writing is worse than ai, so just use ai to write and post on tomatoes

The Xue family is staying in Lixiangyuan of Jia Mansion, and the protagonist, as Xue Baochai's fiancé, is also arranged to live in Lixiangyuan. Is this a forced move? Just like in the Siheyuan novel, no matter how unreasonable it is, everyone is arranged to live in No. 95

Many readers who have read it wonder why this book is not popular! If you read the first few chapters, I believe you will be like them! To be honest! An old bookworm can't stand reading this! Calling Mom in the Red Mansion? Real! The value of the saying that cultural workers must be literate is still rising! No matter how uneducated you are, you can always look at what other people call them when they write about them.

The subject matter is very novel, but it's a pity that it was written by AI. It's a super novice.

The subject matter is very good! But don't think about it. If you, a stranger, fall into the boudoir bathtub of four ladies, the only outcome is death, and all the servants who know about it will die. Don't treat the ancient feudal dignitaries as good babies! To a certain extent, they themselves represent the laws and rules of that feudal era!

Buy dichlorvos? Didn't you go to school? That thing is highly toxic, has residue, does not degrade, and is banned! There are so many ways to kill insects, so you choose dichlorvos? It makes me uncomfortable to watch!

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good.

There are so many poisonous points that I don't know which one to mention first. There are no eunuchs in a novel with so many words, and it is still level 3, which shows that the author is not suitable for this job.

The creativity is okay, but the author extremely lacks social experience and the writing style is very white. In short, it is not suitable to write about Red Mansions.

Here, you can see urban school beauty stories, here you can see travel and trade stories between two worlds, here you can see underworld stories, and here you can see classical martial arts stories. They are too complicated and confusing. It can only be said that the author was born 10 years later. 10 Years ago, this kind of novel should have been popular for a while.

The writing style is too plain, and all descriptions are written in urban prose. Isn't it funny that an ancient person called the protagonist Fan Ge Fan Ge? He didn't write seriously, so he just made up the number of words.

I have read a lot of Red Mansion fans, but this is my first time watching this subject. Come on!

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This book can only be said to be the product of the self-excitement of the upper brain of sperm. I cannot say that it has no IQ, which is about 2 to 8 ml.

Being able to travel back and forth between the two worlds, money and women must be within reach. When there is no spiritual energy and you are practicing the exercises, it is okay to play tricks. But the world of Red Mansion obviously has spiritual energy and cultivation techniques, not to mention the vigilant fairy, the scabby monk, and the crazy Taoist. Ma Daopo can always beat her to death! In front of Changsheng, everything else is trivial! Has the protagonist considered it?

Brother, if you really do what I said in the first half of the introduction, you can become a bad guy who travels between two worlds, stay away from trouble and enjoy your life. Maybe the grades in your book are better

This subject matter is very novel, eye-catching and refreshing. Entering the Red Mansion as an outsider requires a lot of preparation. It feels very interesting. Don't be misled by others' influence. Write your own book and write it well. I hope the next one will be more exciting.