Dou Po: I, Nalan Yanran

Anti-inflammatory is not aboriginal, where did the ignorant boy come from?

This. . . , Quite redundant, and also body training, like the ancient Stone Clan, the body is strong, but of no use. They were destroyed by the Soul Clan. The Stone Clan is already comparable to monsters, but it has no effect, and after the Dou Emperor, the body of the Dou Emperor can naturally be obtained.

Whether it is: the perspective of the heroine in this article or the resentful woman in the palace, these are signs of female channels. I don't understand, why don't you go to female channels? Although there are female readers of male videos, most of them are men. Even if they can accept the female protagonist's perspective, most men don't like resentful women in the palace.

I see someone is asking, but I haven't figured it out yet, what does single hundred marriages mean?

Myocardial Infarction is a good passionate novel. It depicts a feeling of melancholy, bitterness and hatred. The writing style should be good, but I don't like this feeling. I personally don't appreciate it.

What can I say? Nalan Yanran is written like a resentful woman who blames everything but others.

Is this Heming an original character?

I pointed out some mistakes and hope the author will correct them, otherwise the reading will be unsatisfactory... I will add it to the bookshelf first.

I have been saving and sorting out the outline for the past week. I will officially start updating next week. There are no pigeons in this book.

Very embarrassing😴😴😴

The update has started. I should be able to sign the contract in the next two days. There are some procedures to go through. The author is a newbie. I hope everyone can give me more opinions.

Will the author finish writing, or will he stop writing after writing?

Already finished watching it. Overall it's pretty smooth, but there are also a lot of characterization and communication flaws. In the most direct conversation and communication with the character Xiao Yan, why did the other party suddenly want to not break off the engagement and rely on Yun Lan to rebuild it? After Xiao Yan heard the invitation, his normal logic was to ask if he knew what the physical problem was, and to ask what caused the disappearance of fighting spirit. Nalan couldn't give a definite answer without conducting research. He could only say that he was more hopeful about figuring out what was going on. This is the more logical character dialogue in this paragraph. In addition, Zhang Haiming's role in the plot can be handled with a more intelligent character. It would be more reasonable to merge this future line of revenge into the Yunlei family who are fighting for the heir within the clan. The occurrence of conflicts is more reasonable, and there is more content to write about. It can even be extended to joining forces with foreign enemies to rebel against the clan and seize power. If possible, it is recommended to revamp the current plot. At this early stage, it is impossible for this book to retain enough readers. The royal routines used in most books with some success are already very mature, and your current plots are not what a mature routine should look like.