People Are in the United States and Comics, Taoism and God Are Connected

I thought it was a more orthodox Taoist text, but it turned out to be a fantasy and cultivation style. There is no addition of urns to teach scriptures, enshrining rituals, memorials and essays, internal and external secret refining, nor methods of impeaching gods and ghosts, opening altars, and writing talismans is still the same as the elemental scrolls. In addition, the Five Thunder Zhengfa is used to issue documents to shake people, not to use thunder in the palm of your hand.

Good guy, I haven't read it yet, so I'll put two poisonous words in the introduction "Bejeweled" Describes women's clothing as luxurious and rich, shining with the color of treasures "Mainly American comics, mixed with a small amount of DC" American comics refers to American comics, including Marvel and DC. This sentence is transformed into, "Writing is mainly done with pens, mixed with a small amount of ink", which is very funny.

The author is a newcomer, having previously written a book with more than 50,000 words and a hasty ending on KouKou Reading. After settling in for a while, we came to the starting point. I didn't expect that I actually signed the contract, and I ask for your support. I'll buy you some tea.

It would be better if there were no pornographic scenes

I originally teased the author, he said that even if the temperature is tens of degrees below zero, the protagonist can bear it even if it is increased 100 times. I teased him a bit, and said that the absolute zero degree is 273 degrees. He directly replied to me that you are happy, that's your attitude, write slowly, and I wish you success.

There are too many bugs, I lick it all the time, the description of emotions is too toxic, what is the use of having so many pets, the writing on the pets is terrible, the understanding of the subordinates is very poor, the protagonist does not have a specific idea, the description of the magic skills is very low-end, it is estimated that it will be at the level of the Marvel single universe at the end, the plot characters are very messy, the writing is very light, and there is no sense of satisfaction.

The writing is not good, the reading is not smooth, and the transitions between plots are very abrupt. . It lacks the feeling of being unable to stop watching it in one sitting. There is also the protagonist, who is often obscene and described as a loser.

After reading more than ten chapters, this horse-riding novel is just a fantasy novel wearing a Taoist priest's skin. Get out of here! Shabi stuff!

There is no refreshing feeling at all, it feels bland and tastes like chewing wax.

In the part about selling the ogre, did you have to find something to make enemies for the protagonist? If people are willing to buy such things, at least they are not short of money. Shouldn't such people befriend the protagonist and hope that they will have such things next time? We have to arrange a scene where he is not a good guy and arranges a money grab to make enemies for the protagonist, right?

The subject matter is better, but the writing is like shit

I can't wait to poop. I have to write down clearly how many times I pooped.

If the protagonist's ancestor doesn't give you the soldiers and horses for the upper altar, then you can refine the soldiers and horses for the lower altar yourself. In addition, the author seems to have made a mistake about the divine generals of Taoist priests in Taoism. The divine generals of Taoist priests are not sent by heaven, but are refined by themselves. The author looks at what the divine generals are like among the immortal officials of the Celestial Dynasty.

It's so hard. In the early stage, Zha Kang was so disgusting that he almost got killed, so you still helped him? Kuku put poison, it's a yo-yo

I have traveled through time, so I just need to treat it as normal. Why is the content written in the lowest possible attitude? I don't quite understand. No matter how popular ❤️ is, there is no need to be like this. I can no longer write content in this direction; I feel that the follow-up will be even more embarrassing.

I've read so many novels! It's always the protagonist who brings strange things (trouble) to trick others (or asks others for help)! This is the first time I've seen a supporting character bring monsters to deceive the protagonist! Again and again! The protagonist is a born virgin bitch. I didn't tell you that!

Looking at the introduction, the author mainly talks about sincerity and obscenity.

Can't you make the protagonist look like a diaosi?

Treat Marvel's heaven as a wild fairy Is the Jade Emperor wearing green Japanese armor the Jade Emperor? laughing to death

I can't stand it. Let's not talk about other problems. What can I say about this mentality? I'd better go see Batman.

Author, there were too many typos after you put it on the shelf. There was either one more word or one less word, or the sentences didn't make sense. Did you upload it without checking it after you finished writing it? This is so painful to watch.

You've already traveled through time, why are you licking this book? No wonder it's so popular.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

I gave the monthly ticket, hoping that the author would not be a eunuch. Don't be too horny, just try more.