Oops, I'm Being Targeted by a Sickly Girl!

There are too few descriptions about Ye Feng and they are not convincing enough.

Let me ask a question that readers are most concerned about: Is there such a poisonous point as NTR in the past life?

How come there are a lot of articles recently about masters mistreating their apprentices and then time travelers coming over to wipe their butts?

There are a few SF yandere books that are pretty good, but I haven't read any of this type at Qidian yet.

They are all filled with hatred, and yet they are so merciful. I really feel sick. This kind of protagonist like Tang San sees that you already have a way to die, and you still want to take care of your old age. If you have time, you might as well intercept Hu Tiancai Dibao's improvement behavior in advance. All the conspiracy and tricks are just a cloud until you reach the absolute level of cultivation.

This is how the inner disciples do. They don't have to practice and prepare for the Yunshan Ceremony. They can just go crazy with the female cultivator who comes for the assessment. If they see a good-looking person, they will touch her little hands. If they can't beat her, they will find a heaven-defying deacon to accept them as a bed-warming maid. In comparison, the deputy sect leader and elders of the sect have much to consider...

I'm sorry, please give this cute little author a try and read it! Please, this is really important to me. (///ˊㅿˋ///)

Those with brains can't watch it anymore, but those who like watching embarrassing movies can give it a try

Daily poisoning, the starting point is getting better and better

Silly little maid picture Alchemy furnace 4k level exclusive, but the hand painting is not good

I just have a question, where did his feelings for his apprentice come from? Because of sympathy, you plan to live a happy life with a few girls who have enemies with you? Favoring disciples, pampering disciples, what are you favoring if you are not a relative? He didn't bring him up personally. He was a master who came from time travel and was so kind to him. He was not as important in his heart as two apprentices who poisoned him every day. Instructions from a beloved disciple whose brain was implanted by the Dreamer?

The Empress of Ice and Snow (Previous Life) Present Life:?

Wearing a high ponytail and wearing a powerful suit, he looks extraordinary and makes alchemy

Obviously this is just a little bit of wind and frost, but why is my heart beating so fast...

The good feeling at the beginning is endless

It's not that the author copied it, but that book was so bad that I felt tired of seeing similar routines. I hope the author can write well and establish the characters well. I would like to state in advance that I have never written a book, I only make suggestions. In fact, instead of several heroines blindly hating the protagonist and then creating information gaps from God's perspective, it is better to start to realize in advance that the protagonist is different from the "previous life", and then start to pull, test and even get involved with each other to start cooperation/fighting. If La La is written wonderfully without trying to be fast, and the story stages are divided neatly, everything will be fine naturally. This kind of setting is to see the protagonist and heroine interact in the same way. Once written, it will be natural and smooth. Another key point is, why should the protagonist be nice to his disciples? The basic settings alone are not enough. What I saw in a similar book before was charity, a running account, and the "gentleness" of Japanese animation that has long been bad. The setting has become a universal excuse. If it really comes to this, even if the data is okay, I will tell the author: "You are a fool, your writing is really boring." Of course, I don't know how to write the specific details and whether this suggestion is correct. After all, I have said that I have never written a book.

This number looks like it comes from pineapple buns

Too great to forget love, lost in the world of mortals. A sentimental sword is better than a ruthless one. Change to a 2.5D style

No, bitch. Trash fish, trash fish…

I suggest that the author sculpt the characters, otherwise the mid-term homogeneity will become serious and it will become a fantasy novel.

There are too many plots in ancient times, are you a newbie? I can't read it

How should I put it? It's a bit complicated. The author should still think about the plot writing style. I was really shocked at the beginning.

OK, to my taste

The protagonist's name is unique and makes people feel bright at first sight.

When you read Chapter 7, the male protagonist, a golden elixir-level man, had an awkward chat with a new female disciple. Don't you think it's weird?

The author of Succubus attracted me and ordered all of them

The writing is okay, the plot setting is pretty good, but the writing style needs to be improved. It's worth watching, and it's not as bad as the bad reviews say.

Are the other two apprentices also reborn?

It's easy to get bored with the genius feeding system

Suddenly it turned over. I kept it for a long time🤭🤭, but because of this, I gave up without improving.