Mechanical Evolution, Beast Mechanic

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They are all products of nature, and they have high IQs. The legion plot at the beginning is not suitable for appearing, let alone the law of the jungle. Under this premise, there are dozens of chapters of daily legion history without alertness. This has no purpose, no direction, and the protagonist has no systematic composition of his own combat power structure. The auxiliary has really become an auxiliary and does not have the first priority of forming combat power on his own. These two shortcomings are the uniqueness of the protagonist and the reader's point of view based on the protagonist's perspective. In particular, it is also interesting to note that there is no need to mechanize the protagonist's hook. Even if it is mechanized, there is no need to describe the hook. The theme is the handsomeness of machinery, but the next level is the diversity of life forms. The more complex, the stronger, the simpler, the more survivable. This is the evolution trend of life. The so-called machinery is just a poor imitation of life. If it only pretends to be cool, then this book will be like that.

How should I put it? It's very abrupt. The core of fire that merged at the same time is stronger than the protagonist. I don't understand, but I was shocked.

After reading a few chapters, let's just say that the beast that has just awakened for a day is more intelligent than the protagonist in his previous life as a human. This setting is a bit ridiculous.

After reading these dozens of chapters, the subject matter is very good. Anyway, it is very attractive to me. But overall, it is still a bit rough. The descriptions of characters and things are a little shallow. The emotions of the characters in the novel are not strong enough. It will be better if it is polished more carefully (don't criticize if you don't like it)

After turning into a machine, the system seems to be useless, without any of its own characteristics?

There is a system but it is of no use. The original upgrade of the flow system turned out to be the digestive system. If you abuse the protagonist in the code, the protagonist will never have a good time. After hitting the small one, the big one came. Whenever you land and don't move, trouble is bound to come to your door.

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I have read a similar novel before. At the beginning, all human beings turned into various robots for unknown reasons. Then the earth began to merge with other parallel worlds. At the beginning, there were Attack on Titan, Demon Slayer, Tokyo Gnawer, Inuyasha, and other relatively weak worlds. Slowly coming are Sword and Wind Legend, Pirates, Naruto, Dragon Ball, these relatively powerful worlds And after turning into a robot, the food is the soul of living things. If you want to live without starving to death, If you want to continue to evolve and become stronger, you can only continue to kill and devour other living beings. Souls And people on earth can drop skills by killing them, such as killing Konoha chunin to get white-scale incendiary bombs, killing S-class gnawing species to get super alloy tail blades, super alloy feather blades, killing Aburame clan jonins to get nano-metal insect swarms killing Namikaze Minato to get space teleportation devices, Kill Gilgamesh to get an unlimited arsenal, Kill Blackbeard to get a black hole annihilation cannon, kill Hawkeye to get a plasma ship-killing knife and a series of skills In this case, none of the people on earth who can survive are good, and each one is more cruel than the last

Just a little too wordy. Any plot, any story, is best kept simple and clear. Simple is best. You can write a lot of stories, but you should also pay attention to the kind that highlights some hot topics.

After reading the introduction, I lost interest. What kind of brain circuit is there to play melee combat with a machine? 😅

The protagonist's plug-ins are so bad, why can't he absorb the characteristics of other mechanical life forms to evolve, or make something like a fusion robot? The theme is not imaginative at all. Transformation and fusion are the romance of robots. Your transformation has basically no sense of existence, and the fusion is also very perfunctory. The robot fusion actually wants to merge with the same race? If others want to merge with the same race, then the protagonist should be able to merge with everyone. No one will look at you if you don't have any special characteristics. It's like being approached by a golden eagle. If the protagonist can combine with everyone in the legion, he can pretend to be a wave. He doesn't need to win, he only needs a draw, and then the golden eagle is so surprised that he has to retreat. Wouldn't this be satisfying? It doesn't feel good at all for you to write like this now. It's so frustrating to be pressured and beaten by high-ranking people all the time. To give you a reference, you can take a look at the robots of the Beast Team. The theme is quite suitable for this book.

When you reach level A, you will enter a sleep-like mode (after completing the equipment, you no longer need resources, and then wait for the decisive battle?)? Otherwise, the protagonists are basically the last ones to invest, so how can they compete with the first ones? Soon it will enter an infinite loop, and the first batch will always be invincible. What can I do to catch up later? And this energy stone. Can this thing condense automatically in a short time? Or is it that this planet is super big? Otherwise, depending on the number of investments, there will really be energy stones for them to use later? Or is it that the energy stone is just in the initial stage and will be replaced with more advanced energy later?

Bored, I want to see rivers of blood

Beast Form

I should have said something if it was gone, and left quietly.

Does the author know? I read more than a hundred chapters a day just to see when your communicator will break through a hundred miles. Or do you, the author, think that a beast that is almost 100 meters away can travel a hundred miles just by roaring?

Give me a supporting role, a despicable bad guy with no position, a guy who does private work for big shots, a hyena who is willing to take advantage of others and add insult to injury. He has several wild dogs under his command. He is good at using melt rays to break the enemy's limbs, and then slowly tortures and dismantles the enemy in his beast form. There is a completely opposite name "Hyena" 🪖 You are welcome to tell me what character you want to be 😃

As for the author, why are you saying anything? A eunuch?

No more, no more eunuchs, no more groups. Xiao Heizi attacks the author every day

... The IQs of these beasts are too high, right?

They talk too much, these beasts are simply more obscene than humans.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Mainly animals and working with animals.

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