Simultaneous Transmigration: Growing Stronger, Starting as a Witcher

The Witcher is quite well written. I don't want to read it after that. In the first volume, the emotional issues can be more direct. In the Middle Ages, we were still wizards. The environment determines that relationships cannot be circuitous. We can directly court each other when we see each other.

Personal opinion: I suggest you adjust the first few pictures, they feel a bit bland, and then you should refer to the settings of the original work. Although the world of the demon hunter is just a passing scene in a Zhutianliu novel like yours, after all, you use it for naming. 80% Of the people who come in have either fought wizards or have read the original work. If you ignore it, you will easily get away. In addition, the author is very good at using dialogue to shape the character of the protagonist. As a modern person who has traveled to the wizarding continent, it is really important to have a brain and not be rigid.

The second world is Marvel, run quickly

Why do witchers have to do commissions? Wouldn't it be better to wear a balaclava and just start grabbing? Bandits can do it, but witchers can't?

Doesn't the Green Grass Trial take several years to train children and use potions to improve their physiques? Otherwise, if we start right away, we might all die.

To be honest, I felt that Lu Mingfei was not worth saving and was cowardly to the core. Training him is a waste of resources. You will only shrink back when something happens. I don't understand how so many fan fictions try to redeem him. If you throw so many resources at it, even a pig will take flight.

The Jews were either killed or dismissed, but you let them go on purpose! You may lose all your books if you do this.

The author needs to set a main line, the world of the witcher as the main line, and don't write about Dragons like crazy. To be honest, I don't like Dragons and I canceled my subscription.

The combat power is adjusted too quickly, and the copy and paste space will collapse. I don't want to overwhelm the combat power, abuse the boss, etc., But the copy-paste flow feels like it doesn't feel like joining. Talents can be shared, knowledge can be shared, this is no problem, but sharing combat power and sharing the system may feel a bit toxic. Can the power system of the Dharma Ring World be used in the Spirit Cage World? There's no magic energy thing for miscellaneous use? Can the male protagonist store magic power in his body? Is it self-generated magic power or does it absorb the magic power from the outside world? If it absorbs the magic power from the outside world, you must remember that the spirit cage world does not have the energy source of the magic ring world. I feel like you have to change it. Physical skills and superpowers can be shared, but you can only develop the seeds yourself. Some can be shared and some are really not. Take the mystics of the Marvel world. Their spells cannot be used in other worlds. Their energy is borrowed and they have to sign a contract with God to borrow it.

In the world of the Witcher, the protagonist does not show the strength of the Dimensional Demon God. First, you are a modern person who has traveled through time. Second, you have almost invincible power. The situation is a bit larger. Don't feel like a native. There will be things that make you emotional. But for the author, he should write about things that offend the protagonist, rather than things between countries.