Abyss Trek

As an old reader who has read the previous book, I would like to give you some suggestions: 1: Don't sew in too much ideological content, just write a little occasionally. Writing too much is quite nonsense for the form of "Internet article" 2: The plot connection of the previous book is not quite right, and the separation of the plots in the previous book is often serious 3: Then when it comes to content settings, don't throw a bunch of them at once, and then sometimes become the Riddler, which will appear salty at one moment and bland at the other. Remember to arrange it appropriately. 4: Don't dig too many holes and fill them together in the end, otherwise it will look very hasty to fill them in later. For example, many settings in the last book were given at the end, so what about the Mechanical Training Association, the grand leader, the principal, the younger sister, and Chen Changsheng, who were only slow in the last month? Slowly filling in their holes will give people a feeling of "unfinished". The suggestion is to dig some holes and fill some more holes, always keeping the plot in the process of "tension-resolution-tension" Finally, I wish the author a great success in his new book and it will get better and better.

When I read the previous book, I had almost finished writing it and ran to read it in the browser. And to be honest, it started to be too painful around 200, where the justice police officer took the blame. It felt like I had just watched the climax. The author suddenly started to crazy settings, crazy transitions, and it was a bit painful to read. And why is it so painful? Because I really think the author has something. The character creation, plot, and supporting characters are all very good, and the three views are also very similar to mine. Is it painful to read more than two hundred chapters like this? It seems that when I saw the ugly girl recorder, I put it down without picking it up when I was preparing for the exam. Said so much, the true author can surpass the past and become a big hit.

I would like to ask the author about ships and entourage. Didn't the previous article mention that the protagonist is currently a small broken wooden boat, and the protagonist's third grandfather needs manpower. I take it for granted that a small broken wooden boat is definitely not a simple matter of how to grow from small to large. Does the form change as the number of abyss layers increases? Or black seal script? Or some kind of sacrifice? Is Third Grandpa strong or weak in the author's setting? The protagonist can now enter the 3rd floor through various means, and Third Grandpa is on the 5th floor.

The popularity is too low, but the book is good and very creative. However, I feel that my ability to write novels in language is not good. The structure is so weird that it's hard to describe.

What a new subject matter. It's great. I've never had a sense of satisfaction. The author doesn't want to be pigeonholed.

If you have time, you can take a look at the Demon Conquering Expert. I think the author's creativity and imagination are not inferior at all, but his control of the rhythm is too poor. Learn how to divide chapters and control the rhythm of the story; Defeat the Demon is divided into several short stories, all of which have a beginning and a transition. Each story occupies almost the same length and can be perfectly connected together. The reading experience is very good.

The book is a good book, but it is not very popular. Please add a comment.

The third grandpa of the protagonist is not Liang Ansheng, right?

There are so few people, give the author a thumbs up

After reading this book, can you give me a perfect Rolex?

I believe in the author's writing skills, the last one was really exciting

Dear book friends, what do you think of this book?

New update with coc elements

The first island copy was expanded with too many things.

Too little, too little~(´••`)~

It's interesting. From the last book, I felt that the author's ideas and writing style were quite to my taste.

I came here because of the reputation of the last book. Come on, I recommend it first.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Jijijijijijijijijijijijijiji What a great book! ! It's too good for my taste! I simply can't get enough of it! Come on, author! ! !

A trainee will never be a slave unless he is provided with food and housing.

I just finished reading the author's first book a few days ago, and I feel that the author prefers to use the third person to write in a more objective and comprehensive style. It feels very impersonal and lacks a sense of empathy. I can't quite explain this. Sometimes there are too many things written and the plot is a bit complicated. When I read it, I always forget what I wrote in the previous chapter, and I feel confused as to what I have read.

Is there any hope for saving this book?😳