Hogwarts: Malfoy's Raven

The sorting is not handled well. Most people want to read books for fun and don't like to be tricked. It's okay if the protagonist wants to go to Ravenclaw. If you handle the sorting hat to trick people like this, it will be very uncomfortable to read.

It would be interesting for Malfoy to go to the Lion's Court, and it would be more radical to deviate from the norm.

The book is very good, but it's a pity that the main character is a native, so I'll take the first step. Good luck, author.

It's not bad. If you don't have Hermione as the heroine, I'll book it all Even if you arrange a marriage for the protagonist or there is no heroine, I think it's good The focus of the novel is the story of the protagonist, which is magic, not girls Goba Hermione vomited

Hogwarts also has its own lunatic 🙂🙂🙂

One glance at this introduction shows that the author has not missed Hai Hu, the Emperor of War!

To be honest, the story is still interesting, but if it is not well polished, it reads like a detailed outline. What stands out is a dry outline.

Rats that eat cats? Are you the legendary ear?

Just don't be gay. It doesn't matter if there is a heroine or not. Yesterday I deleted the Voldemort book. If I had to focus on describing Dumbledore's aspect, I deleted the book. Just making a complaint, I am just about to read another Harry Potter fanfic. I have no other meaning. Whether I write it or not actually depends on the taste of the author and the audience.

Chapter 18's style suddenly changed, and it suddenly became boring. I feel like it's superfluous to write about conflicts with girls, and something happened before I could figure it out with the professor. Why would I forget my memory? It feels very abusive. The previous B box suddenly became more interesting and turned into a very miserable protagonist.

Just looking at the introduction, it says that if you like farming, why not go to Badger Yard?

No heroine, single heroine, two heroines or multiple heroines and harem? Also, if the heroine is Hermione, don't make her want to vomit.

If you are a top student, then is the heroine Hermione?

This book, Good Guys, is so addictive that it's so addictive that I haven't even read it since I added it.

Ah? Moody is dead? No? Such an important person died like this? Author, do you follow the style of sudden death of the original character? As long as all the powerful people are dead, I will be the strongest? I'm not questioning you writing a person to death, I just don't understand that Moody can completely serve as the protagonist's teacher tool, and I think Moody was taken offline too early, right? Ah? The most important thing is Moody. I feel a pity that he died in the original novel, but then he died again after reading two chapters of the novel? When I saw this description, I thought that his relationship with the protagonist's grandfather, who was both an enemy and a friend, would allow the protagonist to learn something from him in the future... It's hard to comment. I want to keep reading but I'm worried that the original character will suddenly die later... Well, I'd be fine with it if Pink Toad or something died, but Moody...

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