
Immortality: Starting with My Friend's Inheritance
长生,从继承好友遗产开始
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Cao Cao liked his wife who was around 20 years old. At that time, women got married early and looked more attractive when they were around 20 years old. What are the tastes of people nowadays? They actually like people who are so old. What's more, if you don't want the clean ones and want the ones that have been played with, you can only say that they are really useless.
In reality, will your friends break up with you after reading your book?
After reading the introduction, I remembered a sentence: Since I met Mrs. Sister-in-law, I have made you my friend.
Right! After raising it for so long, it's time for you to start killing. You can't bully the protagonist all the time when everyone comes. You have collected the inheritance of hundreds of friends in the ruins. You are not allowed to kill everyone 😁😁😁
Today's novels all like to write about wives, it's so disgusting
I did a job and made three articles with profit, but I dared to say that 100 taels was a small amount of money, which was only enough to practice martial arts for one month, and also said that the protagonist was good at martial arts. Are you a poor man who drives a Bentley and lives in a mansion?
Author, my home is quite big. You are welcome to come and play. How about we go to the supermarket to buy some food first? Just go get the instant noodles. The puffs are ready. Remember to get the drinks first!
The protagonist takes out the wine, why do you think that others will not arrest the protagonist and ask for the recipe, and then kill the protagonist after getting the recipe?
Hurry up, is this how you fall in love? Just nuzzling?
A little suggestion
After briefly reading the free part and part of the text, I feel that this book actually has some potential. At least the single essay pen is actually better than many popular books, but the grasp of the feeling of pleasure is really not good, and the setting also has some criticisms. Very few readers like to see the protagonist grovel and be defeated, and even fewer people like to make female characters care about the plot inexplicably. This is by no means a good experience. In addition, the definition of friends is not clear, which makes people read like a bug, and it also feels that the author does not completely want to write cool and trivial articles. This is very contradictory. You don't have to worry about some basic settings when reading a fun article, and it's just fun. But for such a forbearing protagonist, his fan base will definitely care about the rationality of his motives and settings. Maybe the author can make some improvements in this aspect. Maybe you can consider classifying your friends: superficial friends, fair-weather friends, ordinary friends, good friends, close friends, life-and-death friends, etc. According to different levels, the proportion and quality of inherited inheritance can be distinguished, and the conditions for inheriting inheritance and absorbing luck can also be set. For example, the condition for establishing a fair-weather friend is that they drink and eat meat together several times, and they have at least no simple kindness towards the protagonist. Such friends will be absorbed by a certain amount of luck, and their inheritance ratio will be higher than that of ordinary friends, but lower than that of superficial friends. For positive friends such as close friends, it can bring a win-win situation to both parties. The continuous benefits of friends alive are higher than those of dead friends, and they will not be punished by luck. The summary is, don't let the uncontrolled mechanism push the protagonist to do evil things and make fake friends. In the end, there will be no true friends at all. Even making good friends will be contrary to Goldfinger. When I read the main text, I already felt a little strange. Aren't the men and women around the protagonist who sincerely care for him not considered friends? As long as they don't drink with the protagonist, they won't enter the system. Perhaps the author is thinking far ahead and has laid the groundwork to explode and explain later in the article. However, it is unreasonable to put such a patch that affects the reading experience in the paid text part, and will also block many readers who are willing to pay. This is not a compliment, but I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and get results worthy of his writing skills.