I Am a Pile of Demonic Cultivator

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

I read this article as a lighthearted and funny article, but in the end, a bunch of people started killing each other in this chapter. Bobo is reincarnated, right😂

Anyone who has seen Dragon Clan knows this. A senior sister that Jiangnan will never forget. Then I saw it. All readers of this author's other books know it. Heroine. Never grow up. This represents the author's quirks. What is it?

I just watched it not long ago, and only read more than 70 chapters, but there is a plot that runs through more than 70 chapters, which has always been haunted by me, like a stick in my throat. People who have never watched it may not understand it, so I will briefly describe it as a semi-spoiler 🙂: Change the perspective 🙂 → I keep a diary I'm used to it, but one day, my diary was stolen by a classmate from the class next door who played well with me. She posted my diary online and bought Doujia (1.4 Billion views 🙂). I chose to forgive; I learned my lesson this time. I used a password pad to write my diary, but she still stole it. , And directly broke my lock open, still posted my diary online, bought Doujia (1.4 Billion views 🙂), and I chose to forgive; This time I decided not to use a paper book to write a diary, I planned to write a diary on my mobile phone, and after my friend learned about this, after I bought the newbie I downloaded a virus to my phone when I was using the computer. He could watch my diary anytime and anywhere, and he could also turn on the live broadcast 🙂 while I was writing my diary. But I chose to forgive; Statement: I am just a paper person, so I have no right to decide my life. This is normal. Fans: "This female character is so cute, she is my favorite character!"

Let me tell you my feelings. It's a really good book, but the more I read, the more I feel speechless. All the beautiful female supporting characters have no ill intentions towards the protagonist. There is never a beautiful woman who goes against the protagonist. The ones who kill are either ghosts or men. I am really speechless. Moreover, there are so many female characters, except Dong Dong, who is very likable, almost all others have no impression.

This book is essentially a female romance film disguised as a cultivator of immortality. Unfortunately, its core romance core and external setting of cultivating immortality have not been firmly established. The inner emotional drama is empty and lacks the delicate description that touches people's hearts; the outer world of cultivating immortals seems hasty and sloppy, and the basic settings such as skills, realms, and magic weapons lack depth and necessary elaboration, and are reduced to a thin background board. The author is not without highlights. The large number of reversal plots he designed do bring some fun and excitement. However, the problem is that the reversals are too dense, which dilutes the narrative tension that should be there, which is too much. More critically, core inversion is often poorly executed. For example, the opening scene of "The Killing of the Division" should have been extremely impactful, but due to the fleeting battle scenes and feeble motivation explanations, the effect was greatly reduced, which exposed obvious errors in detail. The overall look and feel is like an ordinary bicycle tire being forcibly mounted on an electric vehicle - the intention is to integrate the advantages of the two, but the result is counterproductive: readers who pursue the construction of a traditional world of immortality ("cyclists") will find the setting perfunctory and too "clunky"; romance readers who expect in-depth portrayal of emotions ("electric bikers") will find it difficult to invest because of their unstable emotional foundation and "drift of center of gravity". Ultimately, it's hard to please both sides. It is true that market demand can also accommodate successful integration innovations such as "folding electric bicycles" (that is, excellent fairy tale romance works). However, the author's current writing skills are still insufficient, and the fusion of genres is quite regrettable. Given time, if you can work harder, you can look forward to the future.

Some of the characters are inexplicable. What is the significance of the character Dong Dong?

Let me first ask, is there no heroine? Or a single heroine?

It feels like there was a plan to write a female protagonist at the beginning, but later it became inexplicably without a female protagonist, which made people feel that it was neither good nor bad.

Endless generosity, endless power. There are endless delicacies to eat and endless money to spend. There are endless carols to listen to and endless gifts to receive. Enjoy endless wealth and live endless years. ——Huang Liang Meng Note: The author who wrote this word also entered 🙂