Two Realms: I Have Become an Immortal

After getting the piece of cloth, the protagonist has no IQ at all. It's like the way he used to be regarded as an immortal emperor in the eyes of others. He took out random things from home and they were all immortal weapons. However, the protagonist didn't know anything. He thought others were sick and never thought about why.

How should I put it? The author doesn't know how you understand the innocent heart. My own understanding is that I am loyal, flawless, and purely natural, but I am definitely not stupid. He may lack knowledge and understanding of things, but it does not mean that he cannot associate, think divergently, and take initiative. The protagonist you wrote always makes me feel that he is stupid, has too little imagination, and is too inflexible in his thinking. For example, where a few monsters get along with the protagonist, the writing is too deliberate, and the protagonist's knowledge of monsters is too lacking. In the final analysis, it is not natural enough, and the protagonist's understanding of his own strength is not natural enough, deliberately trying to show the protagonist's ignorance.

He tried to persuade him to quit lightly, but the rich and beautiful classmate tried to persuade him to quit, and his eyes were deep to persuade him to quit. He couldn't bear it any longer. .

I read a novel that is similar to this one, except that the main character now lives a life full of technology and hard work. Environmental pollution has long been immune to the air pollution that people face every day. But in ancient times, it was the biggest cancer. Not to mention demons, ghosts, and even gods looked bad when they saw it. Living people are still the most poisonous ghosts after death, bringing the atmosphere of the end of the Dharma era.

I have read more than two hundred chapters and have no idea what I am talking about. The protagonist is not only a licking boy, but also a fake monk who is extremely hypocritical. Pretending to be tough is extremely embarrassing. All the plots are nothing more than a formula: Listen to the rumors about the monks→Meet the monks→People around and the monks look down upon them→The protagonist gives a chance to test→The monks cannot seize the opportunity→The protagonist Feng Qingyun Dan shows off his skills and shows off his magic→Everyone is amazed, and the monk who was tested regrets it →The protagonist leaves angrily→The tested monk pursues the protagonist and apologizes→The protagonist proudly goes back to pretend to be better →Finally, the tested monk gives the protagonist a spell as a level reward→The protagonist leaves, leaving behind a legend. Other monks pursue the protagonist's legend and start again at the next place

Fraud. Start farming to attract people. Before and after charging, it turns into a disguised form of strange sewer flow to cultivate immortality. The whole journey turns into a weird adventure. So evil.

The back is not good. The front looks pretty, but the back is too watery.

Except for the feeling of being a fairy at the beginning, it has become more biased since I started traveling. The more I look at it, the less fairy-like it is. I thought it would be good to start moving things from the earth to earn merit, but when I started traveling, the style of painting became uninteresting. There was no two worlds at all, and there was no fairy-like flavor.

It feels like it's too fragmented. Does the author have no outline? He writes a little in the east and a little in the west. It feels like he just wants to come out one after another, and there is no sense of a complete story at all. At first, I thought it was a story about farming in two realms. I thought the beginning was quite interesting. If you followed the protagonist and started farming, earning merit and slowly cultivating immortality, it might be interesting. But, in the middle of farming, the protagonist ran off to find immortals. From here on, the sense of separation gradually became stronger. Not to mention, the protagonist's IQ seemed to be suppressed. Anyway, I feel that the more I read it, the more awkward it becomes, and a lot of the logic doesn't make sense.

It's a bit long-winded. I guess the author was writing in the same way as Lan Ke Qi Yuan, but the pacing was so bad. I found that I couldn't continue writing and started to get frustrated. I felt better that I didn't write it out. I hit this with a hammer and hit this with a mallet. I had to cut it before 200 chapters.

The result was that I was going here and there, but nothing was accomplished. After more than a hundred chapters, the result was a Taiqing scroll or something, a Seven-Star Sword Art, and a guidance method that I was about to practice... The protagonist seemed to be traveling in the world of immortality, with many ideas and nothing could be done. He always stayed on the ideas, and the protagonist did not see any action. I thought it was a little bit better just now, but bang, the protagonist's idea failed again! Especially the one about Refa... I thought the protagonist finally got it... But it did, but only a little... Alas, I got stuck halfway through my poop. This is how I feel about this book.

It's so verbose at the end, so get off my bookshelf quickly.

After it was released, the earth scenes were basically gone, and the other world scenes were not exciting at all, and it looked dull and waterless.

If you have an MC system, you can't find water, just create an unlimited water device. .

Has the water become like this since it was put on the shelves? The smallest thing can make a lot of trouble

The beginning is quite interesting, and then you start traveling. I don't even know what to write

It's so long-winded that it makes Wuming angry.

Out of the main outline, the two realms are basically just one realm of cultivating immortals, which is a bit boring and doesn't have many slaps in the face, so the score of this book should not be very good.

I ordered 60 chapters before getting on the plane and couldn't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters. The first part was okay, but how could the second part be so bad? Many times the explanation is just forced to make up the word count.

I came here specifically to complain about it. Ke Qiyuan didn't know how to sew, so he insisted on sewing the two realms again. The earth chapter was terrible, and the alien world didn't burn. After watching it for a long time, I didn't know why the protagonist had to use his luck to build a golden body for the Dragon King. The plagiarisms that can be seen so far: the injured fox kneels down and bows, the injured dragon king (white dragon), do we need to move the tiger and the master too?

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies" is hilarious...

How to say it? Ever since the adventure, I have had no desire to read. When writing a book, it must be based on the title, otherwise it is normal for others to read it. The title of your book already indicates that your book is a farming style, but if you suddenly change to an adventure style, it will not be good to read. The title of the book attracts book friends who like to read farming style. You suddenly become an adventure book. How many book friends do you think will follow it?

I'm so tired from watching it😐

I feel like I wrote it well, but why are there so many trolls in the comment section?