The Secret Code of Monsters

As mentioned, I voted for all three monthly votes this month and prepared to run away. One thing to say, this novel is of excellent quality, but I came here because I wanted to read about the secret sect, and then when I saw the latest chapter, I found that not only half of it, but at least one-third was describing the sticky interactions between the protagonist and different women. Esoteric novels with a Western fantasy background are my favorite genre. Even if The Old Musicians is updated and is now extremely lagging, I am still chasing it and am not ready to give up. This novel also amazed me. The setting of the mysterious worldview also attracted me, but in terms of content ratio, the above mentioned The proportion of things is too small, and it is greatly compressed by the love interactions. When I see the love content, I just want to jump over it, but sometimes half a chapter or even a whole chapter is full of these contents. Objective evaluation, the interactions are very detailed, I will not comment on whether it is good or not, because I am really not interested in these contents. It can only be said that this is also a process of screening readers. I did not pass this screening. Just like Tingri's Small World, which had endless fun before, when he started to turn into a love simulator, I was no longer its target reader. Leave a note as a souvenir. When you save enough, you may come back and read the love content. Goodbye, good luck.

After seeing Chapter 100, I really broke my guard. I wrote so many chapters about this disgusting thing. Isn't this just an early literary youth disease? It's disgusting that the characters in the novel were crazily whipped to death after death. How can so many people like this?

The author likes to describe hidden words full of aristocratic rules and regulations. He is very willing to tell half of the story. After creating a large amount of tragic atmosphere, he will pop out a few pure idiots for you, whet your appetite and then tell you that these idiots are the finale. It is full of stupid and bad villains. My blood pressure is high and I am sick of stupidity and give up.

Register an account specifically to comment. After reading more than ten chapters, I am full of admiration. The character creation is handwritten, the details are just right, the pace is slow but full of fun. I have always heard that good writing can be broken, and good writing can be broken, but what exactly is good writing? I never understand. Nowadays, novels have gone from golden chapters to three chapters, and now to diamond chapters. Most novels are about encountering difficulties at the beginning, then pointing out the golden finger, and then relying on the golden finger to solve the problem. The protagonist and supporting characters are shocked by this context. Nothing else, writing like this can greatly speed up the pace and attract readers' attention. Editors also like such a bright and ink-free opening. But as far as the works of new writers are concerned, it is better not to read too much. Reading too much will really cause visual fatigue. This is not the case with this book. It has a slow and straight narration with a steady but not boring rhythm, delicate and detailed descriptions of impressive characters, and occasionally cute and interesting descriptions full of esotericism. It really does not look like it was written by a new writer. Is this book really written by a newcomer? How can it be so nb? I hope the author keeps writing. This book is definitely not bad. I would like to call it a masterpiece of quasi-immortal grass.

I've been watching it for so long! Finally found a book with a good protagonist who is neither black nor a virgin! ! ! And the protagonist also has a half-female version of the complaining time-traveler Grandpa! ! ! ! This is interesting! If you like watching, hurry up! The protagonist is so damn handsome! It's better to substitute! ! ! The world background setting of the Esoteric Cult Simulator is also interesting and niche but fresh! ! ! Why didn't I see you a month in advance? ! ! Let me invest heavily! ! ! ! ! Note: The author writes quickly, I want to explode gold coins! Write about the female version of the old man quickly winning the resurrection battle! ! ! ! ! !

Regarding the plot about the mistress, some people say it is very unreasonable and the plot is not logical. When I first saw the plot of that chapter, I also thought it was a bit unreasonable, but as long as you read it carefully, you will find that it is actually very reasonable. Some readers think that the illogical point is the mistress's attitude towards extraordinary people. In fact, this is easy to understand. As long as you put it into the plot, you understand that the character will not behave out of character. First of all, the character of the mistress was born at the bottom of the family, but has an exquisite appearance and belongs to a single-parent family. She knows the hardships of life at the bottom, not to mention she has a pretty face, so she is very scared. It's not that she is not afraid of extraordinary people, but because she understands that once she loses this identity, all the prices she has paid before will lose value. She understands that once she gets involved with this alien species, she will be abandoned in an instant and become a low-class person again. Under such high pressure, she has lost her original reason, so she directly threatens the male protagonist, because she can no longer lose it. So I think the author created this character very well, and all her actions did not break out of her personality.

To be honest, this novel really attracted me at first. But reading it now, it's really disappointing. I originally thought this was a fantasy novel in which the protagonist pursues hope, but until now, the author has abandoned the depth of the theme, delayed the progress of the main plot, and abandoned the growth of the characters, and spent a lot of time and energy writing about the chaotic relationship between the protagonist and the women around him. What's even more unbearable is that the protagonist has changed from a boy pursuing hope at the beginning to a kid full of nonsense. Even the indifference and disregard for Kratofor's unnatural behavior makes people feel that the protagonist has gone in a disgusting direction and will never look back. The co-author never thought of creating a fascinating fantasy world. He just wanted to write a sly female channel romance.

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I believe many book lovers can tell that the author of this book is most likely a female author (I cannot guarantee it, but the style is obviously biased towards female authors). The author's writing style can be called excellent compared to most authors at Qidian, and the book can also be called a good book, but even so, the advantages and disadvantages of this book are also very obvious (for me personally). First of all, the author's writing style is very delicate, especially the emotional expression and character characterization between the characters. The appropriate metaphors are so delicate that they are outrageous. I believe this is also the reason why many book friends support the author. Because this is often difficult for male authors to do, they usually don't pay more attention to these subtleties, or they only depict a few key characters and plots in this way. Delicate description is the author's biggest advantage, but the author also relatively exposes the shortcomings that some female video authors often have in their writing, that is, the control of the macro level. I know that this so-called "macro-level control" is a bit abstract, but I have to say that the biggest difference between male-channeled novels and female-channelled novels is often reflected here. Except for those short stories that are enjoyable all the way to the end among male novels, most novels that can be called masterpieces tend to focus on or express some grand themes, and advance and deepen around this theme. For example, the feelings of family and country from the individual to the collective, from the collective to the country, from changing oneself to changing the fate of the world, etc. Maybe these things are too far away or illusory for most book lovers in real life. But in the spiritual world and in novels, readers often pursue these (especially male readers). In this work, I can only find one thing that can be called the theme, "hope". However, the author has made almost zero progress and in-depth research on this topic so far. The words "I have hope, so I will give you a little" mentioned at the beginning are still "I have hope, so I will give you a little." So for me, it was a delicate read, but it felt like it was all watery. I don't deny that the author's works are excellent, but as an old bookworm, I still have to say: if the author wants to achieve better results in male videos, he needs to pay attention to the control of this aspect.

I feel like there are a bit too many female supporting characters, and there doesn't seem to be any male friends among the protagonist's friends. Is this the esoteric version of Dream of Red Mansions?

This is a female channel, right? The male protagonist writes the same story as the female protagonist, but the genders are reversed. Originally, the writing about mysterious religions and other things was okay but a bit slow, but the later paid chapters were a bit slow. After the wife he loved died, he had to write over and over again about how miserable this person's death was, and he didn't forget to ask the protagonist to read it again. Wow, I thought that when he heard the murderer describe the process, he could just push the door open and pull out a gun to kill the two grandsons. I never expected that he ran to the bathroom and cried and vomited. Ugh, that's disgusting. Go get the surgery and become the heroine.

This author must have come from a female channel. To be honest, I was baffled by this love story. I had goosebumps all over the place. The motives were impure and superficial. The love story was well written, the setting was good, and the plot was okay. But when combined together, I couldn't stand it. It was love before the war, and entanglement after the war. Lingering, the key point is that when I was choosing a movie genre, I chose a war movie. You keep telling me what you mean by this. I came to see the esoteric cult. Weird duels, dangerous dreams, weird gods. This is the theme. You may have put it in the wrong category. The writing is very good, but what I really want to see is too much. Too few. For me, blockbuster love scenes are just like the word count. They have no nutrition for character creation. All choices finally become one sentence for love. What about my war and my thrilling adventure? To be honest, the story is just as good if I delete the love scenes. I don't need to repeatedly emphasize the description. I really can't watch it. Ah, if you really want to make sure that the theme is love, it's okay. You can also write it with interludes and you can read it. There are many good-looking ones like this. You are about to break up. Before the war, there are several chapters of love and love, but that won't happen during the war, right. After the war, lingering comes again. Alas, you can watch it, but it's painful.

It was very interesting in the early stages, but after settling down in London, he started to get entangled with various women. The NPC scolded the protagonist as a pretty boy who relies on his face and women to make a living. I think you are right. This is a secret book, a fantasy novel, and not a romance novel. A woman is a woman, but you are. I just need to take some time to rest and upgrade. I just keep writing about women. The key point is that except for the dead eldest sister, other women have no charm. The presiding judge is a love brain, the queen is a low-life, and the bishop's granddaughter is an ordinary pervert. It's very boring.

Read the latest chapter and make an objective evaluation of this book. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. I feel that many of the comments about female characters in the comment area are not getting to the point. In fact, there are quite a few female authors who have done well in writing about harems in male channels. The biggest problem with the writing style of this book compared to female channels is that it is written in the fantasy area instead of the light novel area. From the fantasy monthly vote list, it is not difficult to see that the works in the fantasy area basically greatly reduce the heroine's role and basically appear as a tool. Under this premise, even if a male author writes about a harem in the fantasy area, it will not be good. The second thing is that there are too many flashbacks in the book, especially the latest chapters and the supporting villains. Those who have read Migrant Comics should know how annoying it is to suddenly insert flashbacks. This is not to say that this is bad, but when the author does not update much every day, it is obviously a waste of time. After talking about the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages I have to say that the writing style of this book is considered to be of a first-class level in the online literature world, especially when it is willing to use a lot of pen and ink to depict the characters, the image of the characters is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. This kind of delicate writing style is quite rare in male channels, and it is no less than a delicacy for those who can listen to the airwaves. The other thing is the world view setting and character logic. I didn't know anything about the esoteric religion before reading this book, so I can't make too many conclusions about the settings in the book. But if the world view is original and can be borrowed from the game, then I think the setting aspect is really outstanding. In terms of character logic, although many people are dissatisfied with the behavior of the male protagonist in the early stage, especially the first revenge, I think the author's treatment is logical in terms of plot and character. In the world of the esoteric sect, a reckless man who is happy to enmity will only become a stepping stone for others, and a character who is as thoughtful as a poisonous snake can make it to the end.

When I saw Chapter 169, it somehow seemed like a female video. The content of the esoteric religion was very low, and the wrench was really superfluous.

I just saw the last few chapters after it was released, and I can't read it anymore. I feel like I'm reading a romance novel, and I can let it go if it's set in a Western fantasy or esoteric sect. From what I have seen so far, the secret cult monsters are just spices for romance. It's not that they don't look good, but they just don't feel consistent with the idea. After all, I came here for the esoteric sect, but it was full of slimy romance and relationships. It felt like it was a light novel. Many western and fantasy books were just gimmicks, and the essence was still about love. To be honest, it was a bit boring. In general, I feel that the writing of this book is very good, the setting is good, and the esoteric atmosphere is not bad, but the focus is on love rather than esoteric cults and monsters. I hope future book friends will pay attention to it.

It's quite emotional. At the beginning, I thought it could be a new masterpiece. This book can be called first-rate in terms of details and writing style. However, the author insisted on writing about love, love, love, so I gave up. Although I haven't followed it for a long time, I still check to see if the author has advanced the main plot from time to time. Anyway, come on. To those times when we were on the radio. 🙂

To be honest, I want to see a battle with a cultist or a monster. Why are there so many men and women doing that?

The setting is very interesting, but it's a pity that it's a romance novel. Fortunately, I ran early.

I finally understand why it wasn't popular because the emotional scenes were too inexplicable. And the whole story is about contact with women. This leader doesn't like to see this.

​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: There are more than 200 chapters in this book, and I really can't stand it anymore? On the one hand, the protagonist is getting more and more oily. Second, there are too many places for flirting in the back. Especially with a female boss. Flirting is okay, writing in small amounts is a good spice. But blockbusters should be written for the development of the plot. Just like it was written at the beginning, every conversation with the heroine represents a progression of the plot. Rather than half a chapter passing by now. The plot makes no progress at all. But this is just my humble opinion after all. The above views are not intended to attack anyone. Nor is it intended to dominate the author. I hope the author can just follow his own pace.

I can't stand it anymore, so I posted a complaint. I saw the emotional scene with the female boss this morning. Then I have been feeling uncomfortable until this point tonight. I really can't stand this scene 😭😭😭 It's like a policeman rescued an underage child from a kidnapper, and then the child entered the police station and fell in love with the policeman who rescued him, even before he was an adult. The hero and Cherry must be close friends! But later on when I wrote about the female boss, why did she become in love with her inexplicably? ? ? And! ! It's really difficult to criticize a female boss who is more psychologically mature, has a much higher status than the male protagonist, and is much more powerful than the male protagonist, coaxing the male protagonist to kiss her, hug her, and engage in some intimate sexual behaviors! Isn't this pure Lolita? You don't have to write this if it's not true, I beg you. The settings are all very good, why are you writing this? ? ? ?

A lot of space is used to describe the things about the lower body😅

This is not to say that emotional interaction is not possible, but from my personal point of view, it is best not to have more than five female characters who have too much emotional involvement with the protagonist. In fact, it is not impossible to have more than five. Many light novels and urban novels have more than a dozen heroines. But even if it is a book with more than a dozen heroines (a book with good grades), he should focus on advancing the plot. The interaction between the heroines in this book is actually very good and delicate, and every chapter is top-notch in terms of writing style. But so far, the impression that the whole book has given me is that there are a lot of dialogues and exchanges. It feels like the plot moves very slowly and the chapters are not coherent. I understand that the quality of this chapter is very good, and I also understand that the quality of the next chapter is very good, but it seems that skipping five chapters will not have much impact on the understanding of the plot, so I don't really want to click on the next chapter. The whole book is like a colorful oil painting, but this oil painting is broken.

The protagonist still hasn't changed anything. His humanity is constantly being lost. His longing for stories and desires still cannot satisfy him. He discovers his own powerlessness and becomes more and more disappointed with reality, but he still doesn't change the reality. Since he doesn't change anything, there is only disappointment and internal friction. The protagonist is a typical mothman, but it is really difficult to give him the honorary title of a night watchman. After watching the story, he is constantly learning about ugly stories, and the protagonist has not been able to make many changes to reality.

I feel that the author is not suitable to write this book on this platform. A group of people in the comment area are not here to see the world view of the Esoteric Cult. They just want to read cool novels disguised as the Esoteric Cult system. It is still too difficult to write this kind of novel in a place like Qidian where the brain is full of cool essays and get popular.

It's my first time to reward the Silver Alliance, so I'm a little nervous haha This book is really good, but the updates are too slow hahaha Why can't I claim the silver treasure chest I rewarded myself?😭[fn=12 ] I'm so sad The author must finish this book😭 Finally, I wish the author Christmas and Happy New Year in advance[doge] I originally wanted to wait until Christmas or New Year's Day to give the author the entire Silver Alliance, but I just couldn't help it hahaha

I read this book before it was released on the shelves. When I caught up with Cherry, I felt that the writing was too jumpy and lacked foreshadowing, so I stopped reading it. I dug out the book again in the past two days, and found out that the Ponzi scheme was really unbearable... In general, this book is called Esotericism, and there are many Esotericisms in the content, but the structure is closer to romance. People who read it purely for Esotericism may not be fully satisfied. The character setting of the protagonist is very unconventional, like a cat + a succubus + a female mistress. However, at its core, it lacks the superhuman ambition of a secondary character. Therefore, the protagonist lacks the motivation to do something spontaneously, and is often pushed along during the development of the plot. This kind of narrative is also true for the supporting characters. The development of the plot is largely driven by the occurrence of contradictions designed by the author. This makes this book more like a volume-style light novel than a traditional online story. Many times, the development of the plot lacks introductory foreshadowing and is completely a sudden turn of events. In general, those who love romance movies can give it a try. Those who are not interested in esotericism but are just interested in mysticism can also try it. However, it is relatively hard-core and may not be recommended to those who have high requirements for plot logic. It may be more uncomfortable to watch. For example, the Ponzi scheme that just persuaded me to quit is here, a thing that can directly destroy half of the economic system. After it was successfully operated, it was just to kill a doctor and make a certain family lose 40,000 pounds... (According to the author's setting, a girl weighing less than 100 kilograms, the equivalent weight of gold required for the ring-raising ceremony of the second ring of the secret volume is almost worth 9,000 pounds) The writing is good, but the logic and plot development are flawed. Overall, I can only give it a good review. It can only be said that the author's structural planning is really indebted to his writing style, which is exactly the opposite of the squid that loves diving.

When can Bat Lady be pinned down. . . Too watery

The novels from this starting point are really eye-opening for me. I haven't read them in a few months. Four out of ten are unfinished. Five of them are eunuchs. One chapter is updated every two months. 666