Heavens: I Have a Clone of a God

How to say it? It feels like the high latitude is written down into the low latitude, no matter how powerful the martial arts is? As long as you are not a god, you are still a mortal. No matter what you write, you are just creating a path for the world of martial arts. Just like how mortals study, they only study the surface, while high-latitude things look deeper and are closer to the species itself.

Can Xiaoao's military strength compare with the best in the world? The best in the world has a forty-meter sword and a mountain-moving one. His strength value must be two or three levels higher.

Under one person, Naruto, whoever writes is a eunuch.

Use golden fingers to create your own martial arts, Star Absorbing Technique + Yijin Jing = Buddha and Demon Creation Kung Fu, Evil-Escaping Sword Manual + Shaolin Meditation Mantra = Cihang Sword Manual, the settings are quite reasonable.

Even if you are a clone of a god, can you still read the world in the introduction? God is getting more and more angry

I think now that we have a spiritual clone, we can also try to get a Black Sky Book in Canghai, a Dao Heart Seed Demon in Legend of Two Dragons, and then transfer the six major demons of the Demon Lord in Fengyun, and then combine them to raise gu, harvest or train subordinates. It would be good.

To be honest, the author has clear ideas and good writing, but there is one thing. At present, the time traveled is the Eastern world, to be precise, China. The protagonist also spreads knowledge to spread faith-in the form of transactions, and I hope to keep it like this But generally when writing about gods, they will bring in some Western fantasy worldviews. I hope the author can avoid it. Of course, he travels outside the Western fantasy world.

Could it be that Shenhou is the villain boss again? Want to be brushed again?

Martial arts can never break out of a framework and come up with new ideas. In essence, it is just cheating. The cheats are written down to lower the upward path and are not in line with the actual evolution of the human body. Do you think magicians can start to evolve to gods without writing essential changes? If you write that an immortal has entered the Taoism, can he live forever?

The pacing is not very good, the first copy has 57 chapters, and the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu only has more than ten chapters, which is a bit long-winded.

It feels more like a god at the beginning, with his avatar traveling around the heavens to control his own power.

How do you feel about it? The level is not very high, the god is a clone, and there is such a powerful omniscient eye. It feels like it is not very useful. The clone is equivalent to only improving the mysterious person and resisting various abnormal conditions. Can the omniscient eye only be used for analysis? Aren't the martial arts in these novels and TV shows created by Taoist scriptures and the meridians of the human body? The protagonist has such powerful eyes, and there are so many martial arts samples. Shouldn't it be that whatever kind of martial arts you want, you can get whatever kind of martial arts you want? No matter how complicated or difficult it is to practice, as long as the intensity is enough, create a shortcut for him. The author uses your imagination and thinks about it again.

You forcefully discouraged readers in the first chapter. No wonder the results are so rubbish. You are a "yellow-skinned monkey" after traveling through time. The conflict you designed, author, can only disgust readers, but it cannot attract them.

There are gods in the main world of the protagonist and the extraordinary world. The main world profession is better than the Jin Yong warrior profession. Why does the protagonist insist on being a warrior?

Forget about Zhutenliu novels and Chinese comics, why not write about Naruto or One Piece? Do you think your grades are too good?

Introduction and name to persuade to quit. There is an ancient god's clone in his name, and the ancient god was slaughtered?

I usually don't watch anything about Naruto One Piece because I haven't seen it and I'm not interested.

You can add a Chinese style to the name of the god. Using this kind of Western style god name would feel quite strange in ancient China, just like the name of the Lord of Mysteries and Fusheng Xuanhuang Tianzun.

The first world is the best in the world. It seems that there is a background of Swordsman. I hope the author can write something new.

I don't understand why this kind of novel insists on writing about Naruto.

You are still young, so you might as well bite the bullet and work harder to write 4,000 words. After all, you are writing a book online, but 4,000 words seems a bit effortless, and readers will not feel comfortable reading it. It is better to just write 6,000 words, which is very standard. But since we have already written 6,000 words, why not do another 4,000, directly go up to 10,000, which will not be the same level as before. Since your hand speed is not that bad, it shows that you are working very hard! But it's already 10,000 words. If you don't add 10,000 more and code the meaning of 20,000 words, that would be great! Even when you are lying in bed, you may not be able to think clearly. I already have a code of 20,000, why do I still care about that? It's not that bad at all, right? That's right, listen to me, code 100,000 words today! The man who builds the online book writing pyramid!

The writing is very good, but the update is not even guaranteed to be 4k. The plot is sometimes a bit watered down, and the signs of eunuchs are obvious. I will keep it for a month, and if it doesn't work, I will delete it.

Why do you need a eunuch? Isn't the writing very good? I also like the subject matter. It's normal that there aren't many readers at the beginning.

The author has a good idea in this book, but the world he chose is too cliché and devoid of anything new.

, The author handles the relationship with the First Emperor well, neither above him nor below him, unlike some authors who either belittle the First Emperor, or pretend to be superior, and write about the First Emperor in a complete mess.

6. By the way, I have only read a few chapters, but what I am not satisfied with is that brother, you are led by Western technology and Western spiritual energy recovery again. . . . Is Dongfang dead?

It feels like it's all sewn up, but it's not that messy.

Can you answer the previous question?

Never. Write about Little Days Naruto.