In Tokyo, Starting with a Lifestyle Profession

Drive high and go low, the writing is obviously broken in the back

I really couldn't help but complain. With Bai Feng's physical fitness, he couldn't react every time he was forcefully kissed. It was so fake. .

Check in, I have read 38 chapters so far, Emotional line 0%, Main line work and earn 6.6/10W yen, Protagonist: frigid, Liu Xiahui's character, Plot is mediocre, Time: the second day of school, Evaluation:? ? ? Is this really a novel with more than a dozen female protagonists? Could this be Liu Xiahui in the early stage and a female protagonist in the next two chapters? The protagonist's expression has changed very strangely. He feels like an uncle in his thirties sees things, but he still laughs at some childish things. It seems that the male protagonist is still a teenager.

When I saw the latest chapter, the male protagonist and Chitanda confirmed their relationship, it felt a bit abrupt and too fast. When rejecting Lihua in Chapter 40, the male protagonist said, "Love is not that simple. It doesn't mean that you like me, but I must like you." Because Lihua likes the male protagonist, but the male protagonist does not like Lihua, so he refuses. This is normal. But it was also a confession. Chitanda liked the male protagonist, and the male protagonist accepted it. Does he like Chitanda? What does he like about Chitanda? Why do you like her? Compared to other girls, the male protagonist writes too little about his feelings. To compare, Mizuno was not interested in love at the beginning, but then he was gradually attracted to the male protagonist, and finally fell in love with the male protagonist. The events and psychological descriptions during this period were well written. I felt it was normal for him to confess to the male protagonist in the next step, and everything fell into place. But the male protagonist's description of relationships is very bland. He is a respected friend and senior to the female protagonists. He has to be busy with his career and system and has no time to fall in love. Even the novel he wrote is a love novel just because he happened to remember it. It was like this until Chitanda confessed, and then he won the male protagonist with just one confession? It was too abrupt. In the previous article, it was written that the male protagonist rejected Lihua because he wanted to study hard (Chapter 36) and his mind was on the career and attribute panel of the life department (Chapter 40). Now that you have accepted Chitanda's confession, does it mean that you have studied well now, and the life career and attribute panels have been pulled up, so you have no worries and can start dating? The latest chapter "He was moved by her sincere emotions and couldn't help lowering his head and kissed her lips gently." If for such a slow male protagonist, without the worries of learning and systems, it is just a "word moved by sincere emotions", then would it be acceptable to replace Chitanda with Rika and a "sincere confession"? If it were Hina, would a "sincere confession" be acceptable? Don't they also have sincere emotions? If this is the case, it really feels unworthy for Rika. She is still there playing kissing games, chatting and spanking with everyone. The male protagonist who everyone thought could not write romance novels actually wrote a romance novel? Wouldn't it be strange? Not curious? Wouldn't it be a problem if the heroine's situation in the novel still fits Chitanda's case? Don't you feel weird being out alone for so long? So how did a clever character lose his intelligence in the latest chapter? If you gave the male protagonist a "sincere confession" before entering the door, wouldn't you win? No matter how bad it was, he immediately went out and made an excuse to go out and then "accidentally" broke into the confession scene so that Chitanda didn't say it in time. It was obvious that a "sincere confession" could win, but Chitanda pretended to be sick and tricked him into coming home, and then he was cut off. What a pity. What should I write after the pear blossom? Because I like Kamishiro-kun, even if he has a girlfriend, I won't give up on being a kid? Come on, this character is not that cool, I really feel bad for Rika.

From the moment I accepted Future's confession, I've already been overwhelmed.

Are there any books of the same type that I can read? Many people feel that they can't stand it after reading a paragraph.

Now Chitanda's plot has too little foreshadowing, and you will recognize it after a kiss. It is so casual, and the portrayal of the male protagonist who is really obvious is very pale. Rika still had the courage to pursue the male protagonist after her confession failed. Before, the male protagonist thought of her first when they went on a date. However, the male protagonist ended up being kissed by Chitanda. This is hard to judge.

Alas, the author, I hope that the next book will adjust the rhythm of accepting girls, instead of not accepting them all the time, and then hastily collecting them all in the end.

There are a lot of holes dug but not filled, and the plot falls apart later on. I feel like I can't continue writing, so it might as well be unfinished, right?

There are a bit too many female characters. It would be better to say that except for the protagonist, basically all the female characters appear. The only supporting male characters who have some roles are the Joker and the Tank King, but they are also pitiful.