Immortality: Starting from the Growth Talent of Babies

There is a book that the heroine has been keeping for a long time. I will start selling it today.

Good guy, I hit the kid's nest, it's all the studio

Too many talents equals none. Author, can you still explain the functions of all talents and the superimposed effects of different talents? I believe readers will not remember it even more. Rather than writing a bunch of messy talents that are hard to remember, it would be more practical to write a few talents that are well-matched and can be continuously upgraded. You can have more, but too much means nothing.

Can there be some innovation, for example, the whole orphan starting baby, or a template for an evil protagonist, one year old: mother lost, three years old: father lost, four years old: eating hundreds of meals, Six years old: taken away by the demon, trying to make a ghost boy, In the same year: The demon was robbed, seriously injured and died, and he had to practice ghost skills (disabled) Seven years old: wandering Eight years old: killed three human traffickers, practiced a resentful ghost, …………

This book has only reached the eighth level of Qi Refining with 520,000 words. You know it lasts forever. Where have the 550,000 words gone? From foundation building to elixir formation stage. During this period, there were a lot of things including fighting of wits and opportunities. Its free chapters are 104 chapters, which is 250,000 words. In other words, 800,000 words are written from scratch to the closing period. You dare to put a fast-paced label on this book. You only have 520,000 words to practice the eighth level of Qi. The speed of cultivation is eaten by a dog? It's really outrageous. My evaluation is not as good as Evergreen.

There are a lot of talent plug-ins, but the result is not as good as a passerby...

That sucks. Really no one wants to watch it.

The talent notes are very well written, but they are not reflected. It is almost the same as not having any talent. What the hell did you write!

To put it bluntly, the baby stream is the lower version of the genius stream. You are a genius from birth, full of all kinds of plug-ins, and cool writing. Your baby stream is no different from the grassroots stream. It is ordinary and useless, and this kind of routine is from many years ago.

I was speechless in the first chapter. I knew I was going to have a baby, but I still ran through the mountains, forcing myself to lose energy and blood.

Urban literature turns into fairy tales. Changing the head does not change the dressing. The core is the same. Kindergarten with dog-licking girl

The best thing about this book is that even if we are rich and noble, we should never forget each other. The protagonist is nurturing by his parents, and he always knows how to repay and how he feels for his parents. This is a point that many books do not have. Moreover, this line runs through the whole book, rather than just mentioning it in one sentence. Based on this alone, this book will not do poorly.

Subtle wisdom, no logic, poor writing style

First of all, before changing the map, there was a heroine in the childhood sweetheart story of the kindergarten child bride, which was also to lay the groundwork for cultivating the golden elixir later. Then, she showed her talent with a golden finger and entered the Taoist Academy. But after changing the map (entering the Taoist Academy) and taking the test for the title of Tianwei, it was the same thing. She took part in the assessment and the competition. At first, no one liked it and then she showed Win the first prize with talent, accept the reward, get to know the new superior, who knows that the protagonist is a "genius", and then participates in a higher-level competition, and then repeats the above plot. It's not that it can't be written like this, but this plot has been repeated five or six times in the novel. There is nothing else. At most, the plot of the heroine's family is a little different, but the essence is still the same.

There were too many things, and I dabbled in all kinds of things. In the end, I chose to go to school and practice martial arts. This is the way of today's society, and there is nothing new.

I'm so impressed. In Chapter 229, the heroine's mother didn't even come back. The protagonist's mother directly talked about getting married because of the protagonist Wang's son-in-law. It's really disgusting. I know that the protagonist is a genius and has established a foundation. I don't feel relieved. It's annoying to watch. This mother is not portrayed very well.

I have read a few baby books, and other books by other authors of the same age have taken off, but this one 👶🏻 has been so suppressed by the author that it seems that it is not my biological child at first glance.

In the front, he dislikes the little girl, but in the back, he will be fine if he has the elixir. This is a double standard. Moreover, I really don't understand the breath, spiritual energy, and affinity. There is also boxing training. The amount is wrong, and the level of physical health is also wrong. It is really boring to watch.

I read about 100 chapters, and it was good at first, but then it got worse and worse, and the logic became less and less rigorous. After a while, the technique was difficult to practice, and I learned it after two attempts. Especially after I became a disciple, the apprenticeship was similar to the apprenticeship plot in the book Array Master. That book also collapsed. This book contains many plots from other authors' books, but in the end it is nothing. I really can't read the studio's, it's all about trying to make money.

Boring, cheating fairy tales, hydrology of data flow, plus trivialities of modern writing, most of them have changed their names, but the plot is still the same

The pressure on cultivation is too harsh, the passers-by are all taller than the male protagonist, and the prices are a bit low, and the profit from selling wine is too exaggerated.

Brothers! I finally made it to the second round. Please remember to give me a follow-up review! Kneel down and thank you! Thank you for your support!

The first part was okay, but the middle part was boring. It was too step-by-step and had no freshness. I was originally looking forward to the adventure story in another world, but I won't write the next part. It's boring.

Is there a Shennong? Is he a genius?

This protagonist doesn't have a curse from heaven, does he? Why are there so many disasters? According to this situation, there should be no ordinary people living in this world. Only geniuses, lucky people, and powerful and wealthy babies can live.