Naruto: the Forefather of Senjutsu

Le, what kind of garbage classification! A half-step to the Six Paths, what kind of grandmaster is there... Why don't you be a peak great master?

Hagoromo, Hamura, why isn't the protagonist called Yuzhen or Yucheng?

Can you still read the text? I was poisoned when I saw the name of the protagonist. What is the name of Yu Hao? There is no such word as "Hao Niu Demon" in my life.

Tomato Invasion is the starting point, right? When you write about Two-Dimensional Naruto, are you going to write about fantasy? A half-step master who defies the will of heaven, and his name is also abstract, "Six Paths Immortal Fist", and your quotation mark move, aren't you embarrassed by it?

It is recommended to cut it off, xx Pure white text. A must-read for no brainers

First person, it looks very awkward and poisonous.

After looking at the introduction and the name of the protagonist, I have no desire to read on (´･_･`). It's full of the feeling of old studio novels.

His daily poison introduction! As soon as I saw this introduction, I didn't want to read it anymore, it was too sexy.

Currently, the first 30 chapters can be read, and the original plot is interesting. I look forward to seeing what kind of story can be written after the follow-up, and whether it will be toxic.

Chakra three levels! Haha, look, isn't this Konoha's genius boy? ……

Really, why did you write it in the first person so you can't read it? It's dead. You don't need to read it. It's in the first person and I haven't seen it on the shelves.

Where is the original third child? It turns out that the third child is the most sinister one in Hokage, the culprit who resurrected Otsutsuki.

If you leave the original work, you won't be able to write it 😅😅

It's true that your mother doesn't have any of her own stuff, it's all leftovers from other people's games.

Just look at the name of Pig's Feet and you'll know it's a bad book.

The peak grand master, then the martial saint, the immortal, the protagonist has lived for so long, but his ability is still so poor, he can't even do a single contract.

I think I'm quite humorous and the whole Grandmaster 2 is not 2

Yi Tuo Xiang, both the character name and the timeline are wrong. The protagonist has no emotions at all. He keeps practicing like a robot, but what about his motivation? At first, he said that he and Kaguya had a good relationship, and when he became stronger, he wanted to let Kaguya out to protect his mother, but then he immediately lost it. Seeing that his wife died of old age, he couldn't think of anything to do. Obviously, he could artificially revert his wife to an ancestral form and survive, bah.

I don't think it's that unbearable. As an immortal species, if my wife dies, she dies. Wouldn't it be nice to be resurrected when the plot is over? In this way, not only can he wait until he is able to create a more gifted body for his wife, but can he go further with him? Later, his two children also survived in the ice in his little world. You must know that there is no time to cultivate immortality, and it will be a hundred years in a blink of an eye. I think this is the true mentality of the immortal species. It is not about gains and losses in hundreds of years and thousands of years, but cares about the fate and chance encounters after ten thousand years! In addition, the author is very generous in not deleting comments. He only charges for more than 130 chapters, which is enough! Until now, I may feel that the power system is a bit messy. I hope it can be sorted out and adjusted properly. It is not fairy-like enough!

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

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The first three pictures made my scalp go numb. You might as well just kill them indiscriminately. They look even better than this.