Dragon Ball Super's Super Saiyan God Begins

The sentences are unclear and cannot be read smoothly. There are too many typos. It is too uncomfortable to look at. There is a lot of data. I am dizzy and confused. Author, are you writing a book for yourself? Let yourself read it. Inexplicable self-excitement. Inexplicable turns. Faint. Goodbye. Please enjoy yourself.

Okay, not bad, um, um, um, um, um, um, um, um, um, um, um, um

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, if you're hungry, uh-huh, uh-huh

Personally, I feel that Super 4 is more perfect, more like an evolution. It's not like Super Blue which just changes color in the sense of feeling. The rest are like Super 1, 2, and 3, which only enhance the energy without evolving the physical body. The most obvious one is that I didn't exit Super 4 even after fighting Bebe until he was comatose.

Super 4 and Super God are the same level, but evolution modes in different directions do not represent combat power. One is the evolution of the anti-ancestral bloodline, and the other is the evolution of the god mode, which does not represent combat power. Moreover, the evolution is not complete and cannot be maintained.

The author keeps talking about combat effectiveness. It seems that combat effectiveness has been abolished long ago, right? And you can just say how many are there, who is stronger and who is weaker? I understand a little bit in my heart

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Am I the only one who thinks Super Four is ugly and makes me cry? The makeup is so ugly, it still has long hair, it's not an orangutan, and it even has a tail, it's a throwback to its ancestors. He is still as good-looking as a super Saiyan, and his red hair has become thinner. Dyeing your hair does look better than deforming your hair. Long hair like a super three is more handsome than long hair of a super four.

The author has added too many settings, such as entry level, saint, god, god king, first level and second level god, law dimension control, etc. It's so boring to read. Is this still the Dragon Ball I know? When reading Dragon Ball fanfiction, it's about fighting. Don't mess it up!

Me

It's really disgusting to see fantasy in the second dimension, and the setting is completely irrelevant. If the Saiyans go to other places in the second dimension, your book will be even more popular.

This introduction can make most people give up reading, it is quite speechless =_=

Why is it still No. 18? Doesn't No. 21 Look good? 🙂

Stop writing, it's already broken. I see you have written about the Dragon Ball games, Toki Toki, Dark Shenron, Standard Diversity, All Kings (game version), the trilogy is also a quasi-immortal king, even if the game is not stacked, a single Dragon Ball Super comic is also an immortal king level, to you, the great emperor = all kings? Quasi-Emperor=Great Priest? Even Dieshengxu is not as exaggerated as you make it out to be. Super Blue Beerus alone is about equal to the Quasi-Emperor-Great Emperor. It's really disgusting to boast about it.

The writing is messy and the plot doesn't connect at all. Sometimes here, sometimes there, I can't understand what is written at all.

What did you write? It's a mess.

There are so many problems with this book. It made me look confused. To say that this is very poisonous. This book directly scores nine points.

A lot of messy things added together

The division of combat power is extremely mismatched. In the Dragon Ball world, they have become gods, even involving laws. As a result, after reaching Zhetian, he could not even reach the peak of mortals under the immortals. Zhe Tian is just famous. In terms of combat power, the Great Emperor is only the pinnacle of mortals. When he meets an immortal or a god, he will be slapped to death.

In Chapter 23, the heroine mentions the two sons in one sentence, and there are two explanations for the two sons. The heroine just said that they had a good relationship and gave birth to two sons. Forget it if they are not allowed to see, you can't slap me in the face with the sole of your shoe.

Is this book good to read? Isn't the introduction of the book already written? Just this introduction, don't you think it's awkward? Why do you still want to test the poison yourself?

This book is actually the author's own fantasy for self-pleasure. He didn't write anything clearly and just kept dancing. Just read it casually and don't take it too seriously.

I don't think it works after reading the comments. I also think that the writing style of elementary school students and the conception of middle school students are not included in the recommendations. Is it a waste of money? 😅

I've never seen it that bad. The plot is well written. 😡

Is the whole king equal to the great emperor? Great priest and quasi-emperor? This..., Standard Emperor, God of Destruction

Could you please help me find a novel? I only remember some scenes and some special characters. The current ones are related to Char, Mei Ling, Cell and a super powerful Sun Wukong in "Dragon Ball: The Strongest Myth", and also related to a super strong Sun Wukong. By the way, the protagonist is this super strong Sun Wukong. The title of the book seems to be "Dragon Ball: The Last Guard", but when I looked through the book, I didn't find this plot. I remember that this super powerful Sun Wukong met Mei Ling and Char during the Sarru period. This Sun Wukong came to Char's world and showed super strength.

Can't we wait until we get there to describe the combat power? Stack them all together and it will be messed up for me, fuck me

Oh, what are you writing? It was so sudden. There is no plot at all, the timeline is too confusing. No more, no more

Talking about the future, 17.18 Is stronger than the past. Please don't be a Dragon Ball fan and write Dragon Ball fan fiction. Da Te said that the 17.18 In the main time and space is stronger than the future. He in the future can win 1V1.

You can still take a look at it at the beginning! The further you get to the back, the less you can watch it! Goodbye!