Enter the World of Martial Arts with Martial Arts Secrets

The creativity is good, but the writing style is too immature, there are too few details, there are a lot of settings, there is not much storyline, it is basically the main line, the plot advances very quickly, and it is all positive descriptions, what the protagonist did, how it is, the ending, the next story, the connecting clues and foreshadowing are not obvious, and there is no character with a distinctive personality. It feels like the writing level of a middle school student needs to be honed.

It seems that this book is so touching that so many people are scolding it.

The writing is okay, but I don't understand why people in the comment section are so violent.

It looks quite harmonious from the front, but the Kingdom of the Divine Condor and the Kingdom of Fengyun pop up from the back, and the style of the painting changes suddenly. . It looks good, but it's easy to get mixed up in the drama. Sometimes it feels inexplicable. I guess the Sky Kingdom will also come out, and then it will be about slaying dragons and killing mythical beasts. For a more advanced level, it's like Three Lives and Three Worlds in Heaven? ? Did I just make it up in my head?🤫

The first one is directly poisoned. The protagonist is still the master even though he is useless, and cannot be bullied by servants. Otherwise, what is the use of the family?

It's really a bit poisonous. I can't watch it with my brain.

I like watching mixed martial arts, but what you wrote is too... I really can't stand it.

Chapter 1: Persuasion to quit and say goodbye. Goodbye primary school students

The self-pleasure situation is a bit serious 😅

Rubbish work, don't look at it later

Believe me, you really shouldn't read this novel with your brain. It starts with a loser pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It has no martial arts flavor. It's a typical fantasy opening chapter! The child born to the emperor is still polite and polite, but secretly strangles him to death. I can't understand how you, the Ye family, can be so capable of killing each other in front of brothers and calling them useless? Do you just like the kind of person who can stop a million troops with one punch?

Family mode, being bullied, looked down upon, framed, then dead, and then resurrected! Then he proved that his talents are so powerful and terrifying that he is invincible in the world! Being reused by the family, blood melts into water, filial piety to the family, risking life and death! The finale! ! ! !

Alas, as an old bookworm, I was persuaded to quit after the first chapter I can only say this, it is a bit poisonous.

Sorry, it blinded me, bye bye

Good, good, good, very good, great, great?

I can't stand the first chapter anymore... The setting is too old. It's a thieving family. Even if they fight against each other, it's impossible for your brother to beat you to death with a slap during the game.

I must admit that the author has read a lot of martial arts and fantasy novels! Otherwise there would be no place for plagiarism! I put together parts from different novels to write a novel! The author is talented!

After reading the first chapter, I didn't like the level design of Tian Zongshi and Immortal Master, so I gave up decisively.

The first crime is to have a jade in your arms. The martial arts you displayed are incredible! What do you want to express? Why didn't you turn it in? Why didn't anyone remind you? Secondly, do you want to get to the ending? He has absolutely no ideas of his own and does not cultivate power! Don't even practice Qigong!

How should I put it, not bad. Yeah, come on, come on

What are you writing? After chapter 50, the writing is messy, and it's still in the Kingdom of the Divine Condor. Rubbish

The people reading this kind of books now should be people who have just started reading them a year or two ago. Alas, why are there fewer and fewer good books now?

Seeing that the school textbook has been abandoned, there are so many secrets that I won't come back to for a while, so I have to look for them. If it weren't for the halo of pig's feet, it would have died early.

I lost interest after reading the summary. The author really knows how to write. As Nuwa is the mother, treat your mother as Nuwa. A saint does not have a set of top-notch immortality spells and magic weapons for his son.

Emmmm 🤔

Running account

Good guys, is this a game to find fault? It makes me intimidated, I don't dare to look, I don't dare to look

No need to look, just tell me the name of the dish and you'll be gone😅

Judging from the introduction, this book is impossible to read. The low martial arts world and the high martial arts world are fused together. It is impossible to integrate them. The low martial arts world cannot even be regarded as the third rate in the high martial arts world. The most important thing is that they both come out with Nuwa. You start from such a high starting point when you come out, and you wash the wool. It ends directly. You don't even need to read it.

You can't say it's ugly, it's just inappropriate. After all, the author doesn't allow it.