The Thunder Ancestor of Longevity

I originally liked the setting of the five-attribute thunder method in the introduction, but I really didn't read it. The author is obviously a novice author. His writing style is mediocre and simple, the plot is very cliche, and the plug-ins are too outrageous. After reading other book reviews, I found that it is still a harem novel, so I couldn't read it anymore. If I had just read the novel, I might have been able to read it, but after more than ten years of reading, I have read too many excellent works. Reading well-written works is like tasting fine wine. After you have drunk good wine, you will not be able to drink Niulanshan again.

The traditional Mortal Immortal Mansion Immortality, Haoyu True Immortal, and the Immortal Way that I have watched in the past few years are considered the first level, and the Leizu of Immortality, Tianhai Immortal Path, and I Find Immortality by Chance are the second level. The middle and late stages of the first gear are either eunuchs or the writing gets worse and worse. On the contrary, in the second gear, except for the poor opening rhythm, the writing gets better and better in the middle and late stages.

There are too many things that have ruined the family life. I feel that the 40-plus chapters of the Immortal Version of Siheyuan have been suppressed by various calculations. I feel that if I don't improve my strength, it will be difficult to persist until it is released on the shelves.

I can't understand it, especially in the first few chapters when the fifth elder asks the protagonist to make a furnace. The Xiu Xian family must have a pyramid structure, with a large number of middle and bottom members and a few high-level people. If the high-level people wantonly bully the middle and bottom people without any reason, what centripetal force will the middle and bottom people have? How does this family survive? Won't the middle and bottom layers run away?

Such a big thing is hanging there, and you are still engaged in this kind of immortal cultivation that is basically impossible to upgrade without a woman's double cultivation.

In this family culture, there are too many factions in the family and everyone is in charge of their own family. Aren't you afraid that some factions will betray the family? Aren't you afraid of being destroyed by other families?

I heard that the previous chapters are very selective for readers? I read Chapter 50, but I really couldn't feel the motivation to continue reading. It was too ink-filled. I checked the comments section and found that it would be after Chapter 150? If you're not the author, are you sure you won't go back and rewrite it? Also, is the genius stream forced to be written as a loser stream?

I have never seen a good movie about family cultivating immortality. In the end, I either had to be a nanny or the family became a drag.

Looking at the introduction, the other four elements of the Five Elements Divine Thunder are Gengjin and Guishui. How come it turns into warding off evil spirits when it reaches the Wood Element? I feel obsessive-compulsive disorder.

It makes me sick. With such a strong physique and golden fingers, are you afraid that you won't be able to develop? He was forced to become a son-in-law