Mortal World: My Destiny Has No Taboos

To be honest, this book has a lot of shortcomings, but as long as the author can explain the story clearly, it is more than 1 million words, the story line is still integrated, and there is no mention of changing the map like other novels, the author's book is worth reading

To be honest, some people in the book reviews said that the protagonist is led by the nose. My evaluation is that I may have read too many books. The protagonist has just entered the secular world and has little concern. He is in the initial stage. He does not know the common sense of the secular world, has not opened a house, and has no obvious ability. Now he is a weak person. He even has to ask others how to eliminate the aura of the secular world. Why do you think he can be unruly? They provided you with some common sense and gave you an antique in exchange for a favor. Why do you only want the benefits and nothing else? The protagonist is an orphan and has no money to sell antiques. A big power shows you kindness. How can you pretend to be so? It's not like I can't find someone else

Now I see 188. The main character is still a Lychee man. Even foreigners can accept it. After all, the combat power from across the sea is high. The Yin soldiers were suppressed and set fire crows, which caused the air column to dry up. With the combat power damaged, it is impossible to temporarily avoid the edge. After all, there are two cannons on the opposite side. It makes sense. The problem lies in Chapter 187! ! Follow Yang Jian into the tunnel to get the bones. The second and fifth boys also jumped in the opposite direction. The protagonist decided to enter the show and show off! Yang Jian, who was half a step above the Kaifu, and the foreigner who was asking for the god, fought back and forth. The protagonist, who was squeezed dry, directly threw the second and fifth boys in the Kaifu to death! ? You can't open a house without a blue stripe, but you can punch away a foreigner asking for help! ? The explanation is that he has 200 qi and blood, so he is very strong! ? Then your fucking humanoid Gundam is so high that you were running around before! ? There are many people on the opposite side who have flintlock guns, but you have Yin soldiers. The Yin soldiers you wrote yourself kill the lance soldiers and kill them randomly. The Yin soldiers are defeated by cannons, so you let the rats open the door and teleport to smash the cannons! Just two doors! Not a special two hundred! ! You can defeat foreigners without opening a mansion. You were able to open a mansion at that time! Just open the door and teleport to behead him, let go of the fire crow, just tear the foreigners apart with your hands, this is so awesome! ? If you want to reflect the difference in the protagonist's combat power, don't play strategy! ? Just be reckless and reduce ten skills with one force. No matter what level you are, I will blow you up with one punch! Why do you have to kill a few of your own people for this embarrassing and unpleasant pretense that you go around in circles! ? "I've seen through your plan but I won't tell you! I need to kill a few of my own people first to show how awesome I am at turning the tide!"! ?

I persisted and persisted, worked hard and worked hard, and I read Chapter 323 word by word. I really couldn't stand it anymore. The sincerity attracted by the author's subject matter, worldview, and golden fingers only ends here. I'm sorry that I can no longer support it. As for the comments, I have written too much and scolded too much while reading the book. There is no need to repeat them here. There are too many problems, big and small, and countless. Here are two suggestions. If you don't make an outline when writing a book, you can make one clearly in the future, including the beginning, middle, and end. If you have, then make a small outline for each chapter of each volume. Just like writing the title of each chapter, remind yourself, or reduce the difficulty of writing. If you find it troublesome, you can also make an outline for several chapters, such as what to write in these chapters and how long it will take to end, and then what to write in the next few chapters and how long it will take to end. You can think about it in advance and give yourself some tips. Why do you suggest this? Because I feel that you seem to be very confused in the process of writing a book. You haven't thought about many things clearly. You have just started writing and can't stop, so you just rush forward and write. It seems very confused and confused. When we read this, it creates the feeling that the whole article is nonsense and has no focus. However, your literary talent and memory are so-so. If you write these words with a small number of words and the writing is not good, it will consume other people's patience like crazy. I am very patient when reading novels. I basically read them word by word, and sometimes the same sentence and the same paragraph will be repeated. Reading, I am afraid that I have not understood a wonderful or refreshing moment. This is me. If I can persist for so long, others may have given up long ago. Therefore, I suggest you with all my heart that you'd better make an outline or sub-outline and write it with a purpose. It can reduce a lot of poison for you and make your main and branch lines look less confusing and messy. The second point, in fact, there is no need to say this, because if the first point is straightened out, this point should not exist. There may be a small problem, but it is not a big problem. This is the problem of character design. The protagonist and supporting characters may be passers-by. The passers-by may not appear the second time. If they do appear, they must be thought of. And the characters you wrote are really hard to describe in one sentence. I remember the character and behavior of the protagonist. I scolded them a lot in the comments, and the scoldings were very unpleasant. It was really unbearable. You did too many things that were against the rules, and the behavior that went against the character really made me uncomfortable. My idea here is that you can make a character journal and write down the information about the protagonist and important supporting characters. Make a separate notepad and write down your name, age, personality, likes, dislikes, things you will do and things you will never do. Every time you want to write down some behavior, just look at the character journal you wrote to see if it violates the above. At least modify it so that it does not deviate too much. Yes, people are complex. They may be like this today and like that tomorrow, and good and evil will be the same. Damn it, but this is a novel, not a human being. These words are all written by you. Your character must be distinct and clear. It must not be as complicated as normal people. The character change in the book must be accompanied by certain events. It cannot be a sudden change. He must have experienced certain things to transform. It is not just how you want to write. It must be written according to your setting. As long as it does not violate it, then our dislike of the characters will not be implicated too much in the book. Basically, these are the two points. If you do a good job on these two points, the results for books of this type should be better than they are now, and not so bad. Then there is another one, I don't know if it counts. Whatever theme you write about will be the theme. The supernatural upgrade is the supernatural upgrade, and the fantasy upgrade is the fantasy upgrade. It's okay to write them together. Anyway, the boundaries are not obvious in the first place. But what kind of power struggle is it? Even if you become the emperor, what will you do after the integration of this world? Just with the government? And there is such a thing as God. If someone slaps you and wipes out your power, what will you do? I can only say that you are obviously not good enough, but you are so greedy. You want to write about everything. It seems that you want to realize all your wishes at once and write a perfect book? Maybe you can be more self-consistent and reasonable later on, but now it seems really nondescript to me. I really don't have the patience to insist on seeing your ending anymore, and I can't read it at all. Many people estimate that they have not read as much as I have. They have not even seen the volume of Luozhou. Otherwise, no matter how good your previous writing is, people will simply abandon it when they get here. But maybe they have already abandoned it before. Although there is some cleverness, things like geography and data have been written vaguely and unclearly, but in fact, if these things are well written, you can get more points. There is no need to be so secretive, just use snacks. However, considering that you seem to only write books on the side and are still at work, so you don't have so much time, so I can understand it. But I want to say that you are talented. I like your upgrade type and your various skills. I especially like your golden finger. This is the reason why I can persist until now. If you just write books as a part-timer, then it doesn't matter, just keep writing slowly. If you want to try the water, feel that the development is good, and write books full-time in the future, then you will definitely have to put a lot of thought into it. But I am still optimistic about you. I think that the various ways in the world require excellent knowledge and imagination, and the most important thing for writing a book is knowledge and imagination. As long as you have these two points, you can slowly practice other things, and everything will be fine in the future.

Chapter 226, I can't stand it anymore, it's getting more and more awkward. The protagonist's fate has no taboos, which is quite frustrating. How do you get along? The early stage was really good. I thought the author was planning to leave the underworld. The road must be cut off, and demons and ghosts are rampant in the world. The protagonist Previous experiences and opportunities, the opening of the mansion is also related to the underworld. But after Chapter 184, the style of painting changed suddenly. A lot of people died inexplicably. Not only did the subordinates have low combat power, but their sense of existence was pitiful, they were also the leaders of various departments. They died one after another. How did you survive until now? Just weird? Then he suddenly started to fight for world hegemony... Has the author been changed? . ? ? ? ? ? ?

The rhythm at the beginning was very good, but it has changed since I wrote about the military power in the secular world. It started with a short, flat and fast rhythm of 1.2.3, But now it has become a rhythm of 1.2.3.4 (4.1 4.2 4.3...). If this book is written at the same pace as at the beginning, it should be a good book. The reason is that the subject matter of this book is relatively new. The current Qidian books only need to be new in subject matter, and the writing style is not exaggerated or cliche. The popularity won't be too bad. If I'm lucky enough to get a book, I'll become a god directly. The good books in recent years are all about out-of-the-box themes. No matter how perfect the old themes are written, it actually doesn't mean much. Chen Dong's Ye Wujiang has a standard style from the Tomb of Gods era, which doesn't mean much.

This book is about booking eunuchs. If you become an emperor in the secular world, will you become a minions in reality? Even if you are given a side-by-side king, it will not work. In politics, if you do not advance, you will retreat and be eaten up by others.

I hope that all book friends who are reading will support and read this book. Sanyang wrote this book very carefully, and he feels that he has improved a lot compared to his last book. However, up to now, he has not even collected 200 words of 100,000 words, and he has not been able to get the opportunity to test the water and recommend it. The new book period is almost over. I hope I hope everyone thinks it's good, don't keep the book, and click to read it every day. If you have any bad points, mention them. Sanyang still respects the readers' opinions. Thank you... By the way, I'm building a supporting building. I hope those who think there are good characters can mention them and brainstorm ideas 😁

First, there are many typos, which affects the perception. Secondly, the plot is protracted and the rhythm control is a big problem. It seems that the protagonist is very busy and time is tight, but the look is draggy. The supporting characters can be created, but you can't always use the protagonist as a tool for the deus ex machina! This routine has been used so many times that you can guess it. Thirdly, Goldfinger was seriously weakened in the later period, not in terms of function, but in existence. The author no longer bothered to make it enjoyable, and it became a complete tool to advance the plot. Fourth, in fact, many readers come for the folk fortune-telling in the early and middle period. Now it has become a different world. It does not mean that you can't write it, but you can't write it like this. In fact, it is not inconsistent with the names and skills of the later characters to be changed to Xihuanfeng. For example, Zigu Shen is the ghost queen, the evil king of the South China Sea can also be called a biochemical weirdo or a mad scientist, and the protagonist can also be changed to an undead monarch, etc. I can no longer experience the feeling of folk customs.

I was so confused. I said that I had to train soldiers for so many chapters. When I entered Luozhou, I described learning the art of war and practicing battle formations. After that, I was fighting alone. Why do you want the seven-kill destiny? And why do you keep describing so many supporting dialogues and then die after writing so many dialogues in one chapter, causing the plot to make no progress at all? The most important thing is that you don't go to starving ghosts to train your troops😓. How can you live long if you keep looking for secular gods all by yourself? Did you go in there to train soldiers? When he went in, he met some miscellaneous soldiers and led him out of the Fantasy Tower. Then he found the fragments of the Black and Yellow Tower inexplicably. How could you pave the way for your mother's training 😡😡😡