Mortal World: My Destiny Has No Taboos

To be honest, this book has quite a few flaws, but just the fact that the author managed to tell the story clearly, and that it's over a million words long with a coherent plot without changing locations like other novels, makes it worth reading.

Honestly, some reviews say the protagonist is being led by the nose. My opinion is that they've probably read too many wish-fulfillment novels. The protagonist is new to the mortal world, his advantages aren't that great, he's just starting out, he doesn't understand worldly common sense, he hasn't opened his own mansion, and his abilities aren't yet apparent. Right now, he's just a weakling.

Now we've reached chapter 188. The protagonist is still from Litchi, so the presence of foreigners is acceptable, given their high combat power from overseas. The Yin Soldiers are countered by the Fire Crows, causing the Qi Pillar to dry up and weakening their combat power, forcing them to temporarily avoid the fray.

I persevered and persevered, trying my best to read through chapter 323, but I simply couldn't continue. The sincerity I gained from the author's subject matter, world-building, and overpowered protagonist has reached its limit. I'm sorry, I can no longer support them. As for comments, I've already written and criticized far too much while reading the book, so there's no need to repeat them here.

Chapter 226, I can't stand it anymore. It's getting increasingly awkward. The protagonist's fate of having no taboos is quite frustrating. How is he surviving? The beginning was really good. I thought the author was planning to take the path of the underworld, since the setting is that the road to the underworld is blocked, and demons and monsters roam the world.

The pacing was great at the beginning, but it changed after the introduction of the military forces in the secular world. The initial short, fast-paced 1-2-3 sequence became 1-2-3-4 (4.1-4.2-4.3...). If this book had continued at the initial pace, it would likely have been a good one. The reason is that its subject matter is relatively novel.

This book is destined to be abandoned. In the secular world, he became an emperor, but in reality, he's just a lackey? Even being given a title of equal king wouldn't be enough; in politics, it's either advance or retreat, and you'll be completely exploited.

I hope all you readers will support and continue reading this book. I've put a lot of effort into it, and I feel it's a significant improvement over my previous book. However, it's almost 100,000 words and hasn't even received 200 likes, let alone a chance for a recommendation. The new book period is almost over, so I hope those who like it won't leave it unread; please check it out daily.

First, there are many typos, which affects the reading experience. Secondly, the plot is dragging and the pacing is terrible. The protagonist seems very busy and has a tight schedule, but the viewing experience is slow and drawn out. It's okay to develop supporting characters, but you can't keep using the protagonist as a tool for deus ex machina!

I'm so fed up! They said they were going to train troops, but all they did was describe learning military tactics and practicing battle formations when they entered Luo Zhou. After that, it's just one-on-one combat. What's the point of having that Seven Killings Fate then? And why all those minor characters having so much dialogue only to die in one chapter? It makes the plot stagnate.